My Apocalyptic Word Game

It's a bit interesting, but only a little bit. It's too serious to eat the settings. It's enough for this kind of thing to happen once, and it happens one after another in just a dozen chapters. This is just writing whatever comes to mind, without even taking notes.

How should I put it? From the name of this book, it seems that it is biased towards word games, but in fact the theme of the novel is still the adventure story of the protagonist. There is less description of word games. It feels more like a system flow. Returning to the content of the book, first of all, there is something new in the setting, such as Razer, who looks like a villain, and now he has the intention of joining the protagonist group. This is one of the points that got me, although in essence it is just the cliché of pursuing interests and following the powerful. Secondly, the overall story is very satisfying, but when I think about it carefully, I find that there are problems with the story structure of the whole book, and the plot rhythm is also somewhat incomprehensible. After folding it again, you will be surprised to find that this writer seems to be quite good at digging holes, which also leaves readers with plenty of imagination and a little readability. In general, this book can be used as food during the book shortage Finally, I would like to make some suggestions. The author's control over words needs to be improved, and the wording and sentence making can be improved. Secondly, the narrative perspective does not need to be too single. For example, in the recent plot, the protagonist is single-playing the insect world. (While single-playing, he can actually open another line, that is, the perspective of his subordinates, and talk about the series of changes after the protagonist left, as well as the changes in the entire world. This way, the protagonist will not be gone as soon as he returns home from the dungeon.) In fact, it is appropriate to adopt multiple parallel methods to increase readability and make the plot more complete. . . . . . .

Don't be deceived by Xu Xiujun, that person is an online beggar. He first writes a book with AI, and then sells it everywhere every day. With his performance, he attracts a big guy to reward him with silver, and he doesn't stop there. Later, he directly follows the big guy's news, and in which book the big guy posts, he follows that book and sells it. He wants to use this to attract more rewards. After saying a few disgusting words to the big guy's post, he immediately banned the big guy.

It's well written and doesn't feel like it was written by a newbie. However, I feel that the protagonist's Dark Blood Debt is a bit too open, even though a patch later restricted the skill bar. But in the warehouse in front, I don't know if I remembered it wrong, but it seems that the blood provided by the protagonist allowed many people to evolve successfully. This probability of evolution is a bit too high. Judging from the current situation, the main conflict in the end of the world should be the confrontation with the Zerg and alien space creatures. I don't know if it is an illusion. In recent chapters, I have found the feeling of the early stage of Black Blood.

Come first and hang up later, they are all routines. The skill CD time is so long, isn't this a talent from the meat type? No matter how powerful the skill is, there will be no movement after a click. No matter what type of skill it is, survival while walking outside still depends on hand-to-hand combat. According to this setting, if other types dare to run outside, the probability of the dog leash is several times greater than that of the meat type.

I only persisted until Chapter 10. Although there are no plot bugs, the author's plot writing is quite wonderful and always makes it feel like someone is being taken advantage of (although it is not).

What I wrote above is okay, but after chapter 40 it starts to get weird. The protagonist's level is always 0, everyone else has taken off, and has reached level two, but the protagonist is still practicing skills. I want to know what the meaning of this is. It's a word game. This is not a word game. The first two chapters are about word games. The rest is all hands-on. Because, the so-called word game is that I manually click on the prompts, and the system automatically completes the task I selected, and then rewards are distributed. It is no longer a word game from the time you start the meat-eating task. Look at Mr. Ghost Dance, everything is done by the younger brother. To be a mastermind, it would be a pity not to be a mastermind with the talent of the protagonist.

Generally speaking, the plot is too light at the beginning, and the protagonist is in trouble for no apparent reason, and there is no sense of cruelty like the end of the world.

After reading a few chapters, it is basically a systematic flow plus a flow of water. There is no depth to speak of. I am looking for a book about the end of the world with a twist of intrigue. Is there any book? Who can recommend 🙂

The protagonist is too stubborn and has no combat experience. It's a waste of talent. It makes me uncomfortable to watch. I don't like this kind of protagonist.

Shen Nong is dead. If you have something to do, paper will be burned.

As you can see, the poison point may be a bit high at the beginning. The reason is that the protagonist obtains a very powerful system from the beginning and feels almost invincible. However, in fact, the protagonist's cheats are only 50-50 compared to the enemy's cheats. So don't be fooled by this sense of déjà vu. Keep reading, and a new world will open up, the abyss VS the light, the empire VS the federation. The protagonist just wants to survive and be a farm rat. This novel is not an invincible novel, but a novel that is very suitable for the fast pace of young people. That is, its pace is very fast, and the protagonist becomes stronger very quickly, but the enemies also become stronger very quickly, and the intensity is also very high. It just forms a kind of fast pace but the combat power is not broken, the plot is very harmonious, and the character description of the supporting characters spends a lot of pen and ink, but it is very brief, but it is also very simple and understandable, which is very suitable for the fast pace of contemporary young people. The name of this book, Doomsday World Writing System, does not match the content, so don't give up just after seeing the name of the book. The name and the content are not the same thing. There are really very few poisonous points in this book. As a fast-paced and refreshing novel, there are really very few. It can be read without any problems such as overloading the setting or collapse of combat power.

To give an awesome talent but also to limit it. Rubbish novel.

The restrictions are so big, not only the quantity is limited, but also the cooling time

Does the protagonist have to hide behind others all the time? Will you establish your own organization? I still keep brushing alone, with at most two or three kittens around me.

Why don't you prepare a water cup or kettle to store your blood? It's annoying and embarrassing to bite your neck all the time (´ー`)y━~~

Let's change the situation where you couldn't break free after sucking blood for the first time. How strong is your strength that you can't break free?

Are word games popular these days? I've seen four of them? This kind of novel

In fact, you can use blue bars and stamina bars to limit talents and skills. It would not be so fun to set a quantity limit. . . Then if you reduce the passiveness and other things and make them useless, you can avoid the collapse of combat power to a large extent, and the protagonist is very versatile and it is fun to watch.

How can I put it this way? This novel is not good to read. It has no highlights that attract people to read it.

Let me ask you about the heroine. Is this book without a heroine? If yes, is there much xo? Are there many female supporting characters? If there is a female protagonist, is it a single female protagonist?

I'm looking forward to reading the introduction. The content is very average and so-so. It's just for killing time.

What kind of thing can compensate you 10,000 yuan?

Very nice

Very nice