I Am the Thunder Emperor in the Fight

Run quickly, 1: At the beginning, you said that all the maids in your previous life were fairies, and then you despised Gu Xun'er, and then you took Xiao Yu away. Two: 1; The most important thing about fan fiction is that if you use other people's settings and use other people's characters, you should at least have basic respect for the original work, right? How would you change the character of the original work? Xun'er was so lively in your writing. Was this the character in the original novel? 2; Xun'er was convinced because the protagonist didn't look at him and kept yying there. 3: The protagonist brought the acquired thunder body awakening method from another plane. Then as soon as the protagonist awakens, the Lei Clan can sense it and call it the divine bloodline of his Thunder Clan?

At the beginning, it was said that the protagonist was a maid among the fairies in the previous life, and he also said that the protagonist was so strong that even Xiao Xun'er couldn't look down on it, but then he turned around and fell in love with the arrogant Xiao Yu 🙄, and the plot was also very bad.

Author, I have found for you the first to seventh-grade elixirs in "Fights Break the Sphere". They are basically the same when combined with the original work. Currently, the top elixirs in the Northwest Continent are only seventh-grade, and only in Zhongzhou are there eighth-grade elixirs. If the author needs it later, I will also send you the eighth- and ninth-grade elixirs. I hope they will be useful for your work. Come on! Looking forward to the next article First-class elixir Huichun Powder (has a little healing effect) First-class elixir Ningxue Powder (has a little healing effect) First-class elixir Reinjury Pill (has a little healing effect) First-class elixir Fire Condensing Pill (increases the absorption efficiency of fire energy) First-class elixir Rejuvenating Pill (restores consumed fighting energy) First-class elixir Hemostasis Pill (is the most common traumatic injury One of the elixirs, except for heavy bleeding caused by damaged arteries, it can quickly stop bleeding in other situations) The first-grade elixir Explosive Qi Dan (increases the strength of the fighter by 20% in a short time) The first-grade intermediate elixir Accumulation Pill (increases the individual's strength to a certain extent) The first-grade elixir Rejuvenation Pill (one of the elixirs refined by the Yaobang in the inner courtyard) The second-grade elixir Rejuvenation Pill (refined by Xiao Yan in the inner courtyard, can treat internal injuries) It has a certain healing effect, and it also has a relatively good healing effect on trauma) Second-grade elixir Bingling Throat Lotion (can relieve various burning pains, and protect the throat from sudden hot energy) Second-grade elixir Zengqi Powder (can allow practitioners of fighting spirit to temporarily have the strength of a fighter) Second-grade elixir Blood Recovery Pill (can stimulate the human body's potential, instantly produce a large amount of hematopoiesis, and is good for It has a miraculous effect on trauma with heavy bleeding. Compared with the hemostatic pill, the effect of the blood recovery pill is obviously better, and the hematopoietic function can prevent excessive blood loss) The second-grade pill Zengqi Powder (taken internally, the pill is green, can make people with the eighth level of fighting spirit have the strength of a fighter in a short time, but people who take this pill will become defenseless in the next month) The second-grade pill Qi training pill (taken by the fighter) After use, you can upgrade one star, and a fighter can only take one in his life) Second-grade elixir Peiyuan Dan (used at the fighter level, speeds up cultivation, has certain side effects) Second-grade elixir Nourishing Qi Powder (used for weak Qi pulses after using secret methods to improve skill) Second-grade elixir Foundation-Building Spiritual Liquid (external medicine, only effective for people whose cultivation level is lower than that of a fighter, use this spiritual liquid to drip into clean water and then soak the body for practice , can increase the speed of cultivation of fighting spirit for those who are under the fighter) Second-grade elixir Shenggu Dan (has a better healing effect) Second-grade elixir Vein-protecting Dan (protects the veins from damage) Second-grade elixir Bingxin Dan (keeps the soul awake) Second-grade elixir Ice Spirit Pill (can temporarily suppress the fire poison in the human body so that it does not corrode the person's body and mind) Second-grade peak The elixir Bingqing Dan (can be extremely effective in alleviating the contamination of fire poison) The third-grade elixir Guixi Dan (can put people into a state of suspended animation for a short period of time, during which they can't feel any breathing sound at all, and they look like they are dead. It will return to normal after a while, and is generally used to save lives when someone is seriously injured) The third-grade elixir Resurrection Dan (not only has a powerful hemostatic and healing effect, but also Can quickly restore fighting energy) Third-grade elixir Awakening Pill (can make the person who takes it more sensitive to the energy of the outside world in the state of cultivation, and the speed of absorbing energy will be much faster) Third-grade pill Fengxing Dan (can make the person taking it very sensitive to the wind energy between heaven and earth in a short period of time, and in this way can achieve the effect of increasing the movement speed) Third-grade pill Returning Qi Pill (quickly restores fighting spirit) Third-grade elixir Marrow Washing Cold Spirit Liquid (use this spiritual liquid to drip into clean water and soak the body for practice, which can slowly expel the fire poison in the human body) Third-grade elixir Jiuzhi Xugu Paste (healing medicine, external medicine, a red liquid, used to repair broken bones due to injuries, so that the bones can heal quickly. When used, the injured area will have a burning sensation like being poured into a stove) Fourth-grade elixir Fanxue (used in traditional Chinese medicine) Refined from the blood of twenty-three different fire-attribute herbs and three second-level fire-attribute monsters, it is the first fourth-grade elixir the protagonist has seen; it only has an effect on people who practice fire-attribute fighting spirit, and it is undoubtedly equivalent to poison for people with water attributes. Applying it to the body can accelerate the consumption of fighting spirit in the body, and at the same time, it can also accelerate regeneration. In the stalemate of constant consumption and regeneration, the strength will gradually increase) 4 The first-grade elixir Jade Bone Powder (pour it into water for a medicinal bath, it can not only temper the body, but also moisturize the skin, which is very precious) The fourth-grade high-grade elixir Awakening Spirit Liquid (can refresh the mind, keep the mind clear, and has a weak effect of repairing soul trauma) The fourth-grade peak elixir Purple Heart Breaking Pill (the same as the Three-line Qingling Pill, this is also the kind of elixir that can directly improve people's strength, but its The effect can only be applied to the Great Fighter level. For people at this level, if they take the Purple Heart Barrier-Breaking Pill, they can increase their strength by one star. The most important thing is that a person, at the same level, can take two of these pills in succession without causing too much resistance.) If used, there is a slight chance of improving the user's level by one star, without any backlash. Three levels of Green Spirit Pill are divided into three grades. Each grade will form a circle of pill patterns. If it can form three circles of pill patterns, it will be the highest grade Three Lines of Green Spirit Pill. This kind of pill should be used with caution by those who are below the level of a great fighter! If a great fighter takes this pill, there is a chance of improving the three-star strength in a short period of time. At the same time, there is a certain chance of creating a new pill. The effect of the medicine backfires, and the strength of those who suffer the backlash may be reduced by one to two stars, but there is no danger to life. If a strong spirit fighter takes it, it can only increase two stars.) The fourth-grade elixir (the original book of Weather Pill only mentions its name, the specific effect is unknown, it is the elixir refined by Xin Lan when he was in the inner courtyard) The fourth-grade low-level elixir Beast Power Pill (can increase some of the strength of the user in a short time, Bai Cheng was fighting with Xiao Yan in the inner courtyard) Take it) The fourth-grade high-grade elixir Yushendan (can repair the damage caused to the body, even if the limbs are broken, they can be reconnected, and it has a miraculous effect on healing) The fourth-grade elixir Qingxindan (removes fire poison) It has a significant effect) The fourth-grade elixir Qi Gathering Powder (makes the nine-level fighting spirit 100% promoted to the fighter) The fifth-grade elixir Qi Gathering Pill (consolidates the somewhat empty fighting spirit after continuous breakthroughs) The fifth-grade high Level 5 pill Restoration Pill (specially used to heal some serious injuries, and the medicine is mild and will not cause any damage to the already injured body. It is simply an excellent pill to heal serious injuries) Level 5 peak pill Burning Blood Pill (can increase a lot of strength in a short time after taking it. Even if it is taken by a strong Dou Huang, it can barely increase one star's strength. The sequelae is that taking this pill will burn the blood essence in the body, and you will be trapped for a period of time afterwards. Period of weakness) The fifth-grade high-level elixir Qingyuan Dan (it is a kind of elixir that can assist the cultivation of Douhuang level. Although it cannot directly improve the star level of Douhuang warriors like Huangji Dan, it can also have a significant effect on accelerating cultivation. It is a very good fifth-grade elixir) The fifth-grade peak elixir Douwang Dan (can make the fighting spirit in the body of the person who takes it temporarily soar to the level of Douwang, and have a short-term quasi-Douwang strength. Douwang uses If taken by a strong person, the effect is equivalent to the high-level Qi Restoration Pill. Aftereffects: It destroys the meridians and even Dantian of the user. If you are unlucky, you may not be able to heal for a lifetime. Try not to take it unless it is needed to save your life.) The fifth-grade elixir Huishen Dan (quickly restores the consumed soul power) The fifth-grade elixir Nourishing Soul Saliva (taken internally, it is an emerald-colored liquid that can nourish the soul) The fifth-grade elixir Blood Lotus Pill (can form blood scabs in the human body to protect the human body). It is not damaged by fire inside and outside) The fifth-grade elixir Longli Dan (allows the user to have extremely powerful power in a short period of time. This power has nothing to do with the amplitude of fighting spirit, but is extremely pure physical power) The fifth-grade peak elixir Resurrection Purple Pill (can completely repair some strength that has declined due to seals or internal injuries) The fifth-grade low-level elixir Fengxing Dan (can make people in a short time The speed skyrocketed in time, and at the elixir exchange meeting held in the Black Corner Domain's Qianyao Shop, the elder of the Black Emperor Sect, Qi Shan, took it out) The fifth-grade elixir Qi Xiu Dan (for Dou Huang and even Douzong, it has some effects on accelerating the recovery of fighting qi, and is a relatively high-level consumable elixir) The sixth-grade peak elixir Demonization Pill (the effect is similar to that of the Transformation Pill, which can only partially transform the monster into a human form) The sixth-grade peak elixir Retrospective Pill ( It can reshape the meridians, target the meridians and Dantian damaged by unknown reasons, and restore the user's physical condition to a healed state! Requirements: The injury time should not exceed three months. Effectiveness: For those who are Dou Huang and below, if the medicine is powerful enough, it can even completely restore the bodies of Dou Zong powerhouses!) Sixth Grade Intermediate Pill Soul Restoration Pill (can heal symptoms caused by the influence of other souls) Sixth Grade Peak Peak elixir Qingming Shou Dan (can increase a person's life span by nearly ten years, and one person can only take one in a lifetime) Sixth-grade low-level elixir Po Huang Dan (increases the chance of being promoted to Dou Emperor at the peak of Dou Wang) Sixth-grade high-level elixir Earth Spirit Dan (a necessary elixir to conquer the Fallen Heart Flame) Sixth-grade peak elixir Po Zong Dan (increases the chance of a peak Dou Emperor being promoted to Dou Zong by 10%, and can stabilize the strength before the breakthrough even if the breakthrough fails level) Sixth-grade high-level elixir Huangji Dan (it can make the Douhuang-level strongman who takes it improve by 1 to 2 stars. A Douhuang can only take one Huangji Dan in his life!) Sixth-grade intermediate elixir Hunyuan Bone Shaping Dan (has a particularly significant recovery effect on the injuries of monsters) Sixth-grade low-level elixir Breaking Dan (breaks the seal and has a chance to avoid the next seal) Sixth-grade low-level elixir vitality Dan (a high-level elixir that speeds up the recovery of injuries and is necessary for healing) Sixth-grade high-level elixir Fusion Spirit Dan (an elixir that allows the soul to fuse with the body, and can quickly restore the soul's power, and can also restore the soul's past The wounds suffered are completely repaired) Sixth-grade low-level elixir Doulingdan (taken by a strong person from the king level, it can increase one star level, but a king can only take one self-spirit elixir in a lifetime) Sixth-grade peak elixir Medicinal Substitute Pill (when receiving a fatal injury, form a substitute to bear the damage, and at the same time teleport the body over a short distance) Sixth-grade peak elixir Qinghun Dan (can cleanse all the soul power in the body that does not belong to itself, and also has the effect of warming the soul, the refining materials include body-clearing grass, ice and fire soul-melting fruit, water spirit lotus seed heart) Sixth-grade intermediate elixir Snake Marrow Sloughing Bone Pill (can nourish the fetus and make it more powerful in fighting spirit) To make things smoother, this elixir is the elixir needed for the second-level secret method of the Snake Tribe) The seventh-grade peak elixir, the Spirit-Reviving Pill (can revive a seriously injured and dying person) The seventh-grade low-level elixir, Xue Po Dan (can increase the user's cultivation speed by 30%, even a high-level Douzong can use it) The seventh-grade peak elixir, the Blood-devouring Pill (can allow people at the level of a great fighter to rise to the level of a fighting king in a very short time, but using The person has only three years of life) The seventh-grade high-level pill Transformation Pill (can completely separate the monster from the beast body, and then have the long lifespan of the monster and the cultivation talent of human beings) The seventh-grade peak pill Wall-Breaking Pill (increases the chance of breaking through Douzong at the peak of the Douzong) The seventh-grade intermediate pill Tianhuang Dan (a must-have pill for the top ten swallowing alien fire) The seventh-grade low-grade pill Instant Qi Pill (its function is to be able to in a very short time Some fighting energy is restored in a short time, and even if it is taken by a strong Douzong, it is very effective) The seventh-level intermediate elixir Yin Yang Life Soul Pill (has similar effects to the Bone Fusion and Blood Pill, and was used by Lord Tianhuo when refining the body. Xiao Yan's alchemy ability was limited at that time and used it to replace the Bone Fusion Pill) The seventh-level peak elixir Raw Bone Fusion Pill (a necessary thing for refining the body, resurrecting the soul body, restoring full strength, and even advanced The potential of the eighth-grade pill is known as a super elixir that can immediately save anyone who is still breathing) The seventh-grade low-grade pill, the Life-Returning Pill (as long as the head is not directly chopped off, or the heart is directly shattered, then this pill can save a person's life) The seventh-grade high-grade pill, the Yin-Yang Black Dragon Pill (if anyone takes this Yin-Yang Black Dragon Pill, will be seriously injured in the future or is on the verge of death, with luck, this thing, It can give you the opportunity to break through and stand up. The so-called breaking up and standing up means breaking the shackles of the past, which makes people transform, regardless of body, soul or even fighting spirit, can reach a higher level) Seventh-grade intermediate elixir Suxindan (take it when refining the elixir, which helps to stabilize the mind and thereby increase the success rate of the elixir) Seventh-grade advanced elixir Fire Bodan (eliminates the hidden dangers caused by failure to swallow strange fire) The seventh-grade peak elixir Xuan Bo Foundation Building Pill (has a good foundation-building effect, Dan King Furukawa mentioned this pill when he was in Xuanhuang Fortress) The seventh-grade low-level elixir Tianhun Fusion Blood Pill (taken internally, the elixir is purple-red, has the domineering effect of changing the physique and improving the cultivation talent. It has the ability to conquer the sky and can help those extraordinary babies. It uses pure medicinal power to open up some meridians in Kuokuan's body within the mother's body, thereby maximizing the The improvement potential, once the baby is born, practice will be twice the result with half the effort, and because it is innate nourishment, it will be much easier to practice any technique. It is the main medicinal introduction of the superior secret method of nourishing Medusa babies in the Snake Tribe. The prescription is owned by the Snake Tribe of the Jiama Empire. There are seventy-seven kinds of refining materials, and there are four main ingredients: Dragon Blood Mushroom, Jade Bone Fruit, Xuantian Ivy, seventh-level or higher magic beast essence blood, as well as dried spiritual ginseng, demonic grain grass, etc.)

It's understandable not to accept Xun'er, but gave Medusa to Xiao Yan? ?

Are there any fics that don't write about the heroine Medusa? She would be speechless if she wanted to lust after a snake every day. If she really traveled through time and met an enemy with a character like Medusa, she would probably beat her to death and make snake soup. I'm asking if there are any fics about Medusa.

The strange fire covered in thunder skin 😂 is simply a replica of Xiao Yan, but one alchemy and one weapon training are all nonsense. There is no weapon training master in the original work, and the Dou Po training weapon only inlays the magic core in the weapon to use the magic core to exert a certain power. The author has set it up The Weapon Trainer and the Weapon Alliance are a complete failure. They just give the protagonist a second career, and there is no sense of substitution at all. The Weapon Trainer is not as good as the Puppet Master. After all, although the original Dou Po novel does not have the Puppet Master, the development of puppetry is not low.

It's really funny. All I can say is that Xiao Yu at the beginning of this book has basically withdrawn 90% of the people. At the beginning, he said how awesome he was, but then he did this.

Let's get straight to the point, when will this book become a eunuch? 😏😏😏

Why didn't you let Yunyun be the heroine? Are you afraid that the protagonist will grow up too quickly and deliberately drag him down like this? Need background but no background? Talent but no talent? The biggest achievement is to rely on the inheritance of Huazong to reach Douzun. As for the heroine, who is not better than him, the Little Medical Fairy, Qing Lin, or Gu Nuan'er? It is easier for the three of them, the first two, but the front one is not good, you can use some heresy, and there is only one quota for becoming emperor in the Dou Qi Dalu. You have to learn to fight and you have to learn to rob. In that kind of world, strength is everything. You have to do whatever it takes. You would rather betray the world than let the world betray you.

It feels like the author didn't write about the background of a Dou Emperor level powerhouse, just like an ordinary person who has received the Emperor level inheritance. A strong person should be able to re-cultivate quickly. Your cultivation is no different from that of ordinary people. Even if you only have a remnant soul left, the remnant soul is essentially an emperor-level soul. Just like Yao Lao, he was also disabled, but his essence was still a soul in the spiritual realm, and he could recover as soon as he had resources. Also, your route is wrong. Xiao Yan wants to take leave to practice for the strange fire. You must have the strange fire to upgrade, and you have Yao Lao as a safety net. What are you here for? In the early low-level realm, you should practice as quickly as possible. You have no shortage of resources to make money by refining medicine and weapons. Could it be that after you are reborn as a powerful Dou Emperor, you still need to experience life and death battles at the level of a great Dou Master? Why leave a sure-win situation to the wild where there are all kinds of dangers and surprises? In the Warcraft Mountains, just any level 5 Warcraft might kill you without a burial place. Don't ignore rationality for the sake of plot. There are other fan stories where the plot is very cheating, and the protagonist is basically not in any danger.

1 He said that he had seen countless women in his previous life, but he saw that the women could not walk 2 As a time traveler, his grandfather was still killed by the Yunlan Sect 3 There were endless pretense and slaps in the face 4 The remake of Leihuo Xiao Yan is similar to the plot of the original work, without any changes 5 Forget about the harem, Yafei Xiaoyu also accepts it, and he will not choose what to eat when he is hungry

I keep emphasizing what you are by reviving three lives. . . It's really not that good to still be an elephant and not care about the ants. The elephant will be trampled to death. It's still a BB.

Junk book, the paid chapters are copied and pasted to modify the original work, but it has not been completely revised.

I really accepted it, and returned the heroine Xiao Yu. Xiao Yu was completely ignored in the original work, and the poisonous points are acceptable. He is a cuckold, haha, he is still the protagonist. This is what a person can write.

I retreated, I really couldn't hold my brothers anymore, Xiao Yan was the one who looked at Xiao Yu's stinky shoe, and the author gave her to the protagonist to be his wife. He was really cuckolding himself.

No, buddy, if you don't accept Xiao Xun'er, what are you doing in this position in the Xiao family? You're practicing his family's patriarch's secret Mysterious Level Lion Coaxing Skill. It's impossible for you not to accept Xiao Xun'er's ancient jade. Then I don't know what your significance is in the Xiao family.

Regarding this book, I can only say that even Xiaobai's writing is better than his. Eighty percent of the content in this book is copied and pasted from the original work, and the names of the forces that appear are changed. The remaining 20% of the original content is the typical urban Long Ao Tianwen. All the women in the past love the protagonist. If others don't join the protagonist's influence, they will say in their hearts that they are short-sighted. They will always only talk about repaying kindness with their mouths. Then they will include the influence that helped him into his influence. They will also claim that they have repaid their kindness and the protagonist is good. Many times, he has formed deadly feuds with other forces just because of trivial matters. For example, in the secret realm of the Southern Territory, it was because someone else and the protagonist took a fancy to a spiritual fruit at the same time. It was clear that others had no intention of doing anything to the protagonist, and they were the first to bow their heads and give in before the fight started. As a result, The protagonist simply killed someone else, and after killing him, he said nothing but the forces behind him still wanted to kill him. Then he was chased and beaten by other people's elders as soon as he left the secret realm. As a result, the forces who helped him suffered, and the soul grandfather forcibly rescued the protagonist from the resurrection breakthrough state. Also in Zhongzhou, the protagonist clearly knows that he is the divine blood of the Thunder Clan or the son-in-law of the Thunder Clan's leader, and the leader of the Thunder Clan went to the Soul Clan to beat him up and warned the Soul Clan because he was assassinated by the Soul Clan Half-Saint before. The protagonist did not even know how to use the name of a person from the Thunder Clan. It is clear that anyone with Dou Zun's power in Zhongzhou knows the terror of the ancient family. , When even the Soul Clan didn't dare to touch the protagonist, the protagonist took it hard and forced himself to show off. Although I knew a lot about the background, the strongest person in the clan was willing to go to the Soul Clan to personally go to the Soul Clan to fight a group of 5-star or above Fighting Saints for my safety, so that the Soul Clan didn't dare to touch me, but I just didn't say that I was a divine bloodline of the Thunder Clan, I just wanted to be slapped in the face by the Dragon King. This book has just one word, disgusting

Accepted, don't discuss which heroine is good or bad. With so many people reading books, there will always be something they like. Does it have to be your preference? Just give me a suggestion, and have an attitude that if it doesn't follow your preferences, it won't work. Who will tolerate your shortcomings?

Suzaku Burning Sky Thunder? What the hell? Why don't you just write about Fire Emperor? It's so embarrassing. Are there any Qinglian Earth Core Thunder, Three Thousand Yanyan Thunder or something like that later?

I was really disgusted, especially the plot in Qingshan Town. The young leader of the Wolf Head led his people to kill the protagonist in the cave, but the protagonist failed. Then the protagonist showed mercy and was arrogant and refused to kill anyone. As a result, the news was released when he returned, attracting the protagonist's enemies, who beat the protagonist like a dog. The little medical fairy was also captured and imprisoned for several days, during which time... Haha!

Poisonous point: A time traveler who knew the plot still allowed the Xiao family to be destroyed, and his grandfather was still dead. And you slept with Yun Yun and let something like this happen, letting Yun Leng kill his grandfather. Then go and destroy the sect! Go back to the old road

The rest of this book is okay, but there are too many women. It feels like the male protagonist is just a stud, and he can't control his lower body when he sees a woman.

Author, do you know how to write that the protagonist is a second time travel, the rebirth of a strong man in the world, not a novice time travel, why can't he see a woman? He said that there were many fairies and stunning beauties in the past life to serve him, and even if you want it, you still want the little medical fairy, Qinglin, these extraordinary natures.

I came here to curse people. What I wrote is nonsense. To say that this book is rubbish is to insult the word rubbish. The protagonist is rubbish. He is a loser. He was ridden on his neck and shit. He is a loser.

It's time for the defense. I don't know what kind of fun this is, so I just copied it all. There are so many women who have some relationship with the protagonist. You have a hand in it. You haven't seen any women, right? Explode

Have you ever thought about creating an Eye of Thunder Punishment, just like the Eye of Heaven?

Where's the book Xiao Yan's Rebirth in the World of Naruto! ? Not found! ! 🤔

I hope that after finishing writing about The World, I can continue writing.

Dear bosses and parents, please help me read. My book is "The Heavens Begin with Gou Sheng".

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