Game World: the Final BOSS Changes His Fate Against the Odds

Forced tasks at every turn, making the protagonist look like a puppet on strings

I'll test the water first and see how it goes

After reading Chapter 22, I felt that the main plot was pushed too fast, with almost no details, like a skeleton sentence with no flesh and blood to fill it. In addition, the protagonist is a prince, and there is no nobility in the description. Instead, he is almost like a passionate young man. The character's personality and identity do not match, not only the protagonist, but also many characters. One more thing, why didn't we send troops to raid the church on the day we received the protagonist 😥, but we had to wait until the next day? The plot framework is very clear. If more details can be added (add details), the author's writing style should be able to reach an above-average level.

The author is really pathetic. Is anyone really reading this book?

Poison, you were poisoned to death after opening three chapters. What does the original person's affairs have to do with you? Why are you helping the original person even if you are going to die? ? Holy Mother One. Why are Madonna novels so popular now? Where did the dark literature era go?

No one there? So pitiful.

I hope the protagonist can become a chess player from a chess piece soon

It's a bit short and not enough to watch the monthly ticket, so I gave it a boost.

I suspect the author also played with Pascal's Contract.

The writing is okay, but the range is too big, suddenly jumping from fantasy to Cthulhu

Evaluation, I read it a long time ago and read at least 60 chapters, at least food

Why do I feel like not many people watch it?

I think it's pretty good, but I hope the protagonist can get rid of the puppet situation.

Except for the feeling that the emotional line of the heroine (probably the heroine) is very abrupt, as if it was inserted forcefully Everything else is pretty good...

It's obviously very beautiful, why aren't there many people? Come on

Author, don't you remember attributes at all? ? ?

Come on, author, soul players will find it quite enjoyable

I feel that the writing is really good. I just felt like it was average at first. When the protagonist comes into contact with the old dream, the world view continues to expand and kills gods step by step. It is really exciting. I wonder if the author of the world view can grasp the world view well. Come on.

Let's talk about the advantages first. The world view is good and the pace is very fast. The disadvantages are that the pace is too fast and there are not enough details to support the characters. Moreover, this extremely fast pace makes me feel like I will collapse at any time. I predict that I will not be able to write 1 million words. These 300,000 words are already about 1 million words of other people's content.