You'll Die When You Start the Server. as a Villain, I'm Going Crazy to Clear My Name.

Please follow up on the new book. Dear brothers, try not to keep books. Reading is very important for new books. Of course, I am also a reader, and I know that it is difficult to follow the reading. Brothers, you can turn to the latest chapter every day, help me brush up, and then save it to read slowly. Thank you all!

Not bad, just too little. The first big plot is obviously the cleanup after the two identities are revealed, but the pace may be a little slow. It feels very early at the moment, but it is acceptable to rely on the reputation of the identity of Gou Ge in the early stage. In short, it looks very natural. It can be said that it is relatively smooth, and there are no particularly obvious poisonous points. As for suggestions, one is the title of the book. As a gimmick at the beginning, it is a bit cliche, as is the introduction. The sentence about being unknowingly drawn into a larger whirlpool can actually be changed, because a very natural sense of satisfaction and cheat for this kind of player to travel through the game is that he understands the real player and the game plot at the same time. In other words, he is naturally at the deepest level and rarely encounters things he does not understand. As for being involved in the whirlpool in the introduction, it is like becoming a deeper NPC, without the natural advantage of seeing everything behind the scenes. And we can actually do a little more about this fancy thing. It is estimated that soon after it is put on the shelves, the plot of the whitewash will definitely be passed. Then the main plot highlights of the follow-up must be foreshadowed in advance. The ambition of the protagonist cannot be just to fake death and get a new life. Is this a beautiful, strong and miserable character to take advantage of the players? Many of the writing methods of Super Mechanic can actually be used for reference The above

It's a bit slow to write, but overall it's pretty good. Worth a look

Come on, update it, author-chan, the plot is gone just as it's about to unfold. It's not enough to watch!

The plot of the release and the reveal of the identity change are less and more difficult to cohere. In addition, the protagonist's plan should be properly disclosed to the readers, because you can't write the reversal or really escape in a short time, so in the short term it will almost be a frustrating plot. If there is no foreseeable guarantee plan, it will give people a very bad impression. I guess the male protagonist wants to lower his villain level as planned and then fake his death to escape, or directly after the end of the player's first big plot, Bai Heguan, he changes from an important role to an ordinary NPC who sells runes on the edge. But there will definitely be unexpected circumstances that will completely clear the male protagonist's name, even create a wave of beautiful, strong and tragic characters, and passively participate in various subsequent major plots. Then, it is beneficial to only reveal the original plan now, because compared to the real plot, this plan is definitely not that good. It will be meaningless to reveal it as a foreshadowing at that time, but if it is revealed now, it will offset part of the aggrieved feeling of being ruined. Because no matter how you put it, from the reader's perspective, it is definitely better to be praised and admired than to be ruined. In addition, regarding the Cui family behind the scenes... Let's deal with it as soon as possible. Otherwise, the other party will cheat the male protagonist, but the male protagonist has no counterattack. It is really uncomfortable. However, it is difficult to play Cui Mingyi in this situation. After all, the original plot is very embarrassing. Now the male protagonist is half a disciple. The male protagonist does not want to mess with the Cui family. It is very frustrating. If he does, he has to worry about this person. So you might as well learn from female videos and use the author's big hand to make him decent. No matter he is killed by other masterminds behind the scenes, or whatever, it is better to kill him as soon as possible. After all, those villains who are not big bosses have made the protagonist suffer, and it is best to get them back within 30 chapters (actually those with good rhythm may have countermeasures within three chapters, which may not be implemented, but they have already made up their mind on how to get them back) Don't say that this is too naive logic for cool writing. The essence of online writing is cool writing, and procrastination will only make people feel bored. Above

The author might as well change the title of the book. The quality is quite good, but the title is too ordinary.

It looks pretty good. Let's vote for it by adding a bookshelf first and keep it up. The quantity is just too small

I will subscribe if the quality is guaranteed.

It's okay, but the quantity is too little

I really like this kind of game writing. I can find it everywhere 🙂🙂 and it's very interesting to follow.

Are there any recommendations similar to this one?

The writing was almost weak, and the overall plot lacked appeal to me, and I had no desire to continue reading. On Brainwave, you might like it.

What does the plot of Mandrill mean? You know the secret of the protagonist, and he was chased by the protagonist and even the panel confirmed that he was dead. Why did the snake come over and simply say that he was not dead? The treatment will not be extremely poisonous. An experienced person has already figured out that the protagonist is not the real person.

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