Cyberpunk: I Have a Proficiency Panel

I think the author's writing is very good, the writing style is delicate, and the plot development is in line with the protagonist's character. I think it is very reasonable.

Only then did I realize that this book is a fanfic 😅 and I have never read the original work. The reason for the poor performance of this book is probably because it writes about women at the beginning, and the writing is terrible. Forcing a woman to have a relationship with the protagonist, and suddenly being soft-hearted to save the protagonist. When Niubi 👍 was weak, he worked hard to improve his abilities, and to force his success to rely on the author to open a new halo to kill the enemy.

I am a strict person, so the first few pictures can basically be used to judge death, because this book is just a fan of popularity, because the author cannot write or does not know what Cyberpunk Night City smells like. From the words of the characters, it smells like a light novel. It always feels too white and childish compared to Night City.

The plots of the opening arrangement are very disgusting. The templates of recent novels are all opening crisis, and what is even more disgusting in this book is that after the crisis, you still don't get up to brush up your skills, insisting on going out to show off 🤫 It is easy to brush up the skills in the early stage and save attribute points, shouldn't you save attribute points while grinding?

The real problem with your book is that it is too slow. If you want to gain popularity, the protagonist should improve quickly, rather than lingering on writing emotional dramas, not to mention that the writing is not very good. Let the readers vent their emotions quickly before the popularity is over. Of course, if you say that what you wrote is slow-burning, then I didn't say that.

I saw the latest chapter, and I want to express my feelings: This book is really well-written, much better than other popular and mindless harem books written in the original text. The personalities and characteristics of each character are written in more detail. The shortcoming is the beginning. The first few dozen chapters are really difficult to swallow, mainly because the protagonist is a bit of a virgin and the writing is illogical. But once you get through the previous chapters, it will be fine. Much more. The rhythm of the plot development of this book has begun to appear. The emotional lines in the main plot are also very well written and very delicate. However, the beginning is not very good. It may have discouraged many people. I really don't have the patience to read cyberpunk fan fiction, but I have found a treasure (´▽`ʃƪ). The author will update quickly (o^^o)♪

Let's talk about the advantages first The description of the characters' emotions is very delicate, and it can be seen that some of the backgrounds of 2077 have been carefully considered Then there are the disadvantages The emotions are delicate, but the "greasy" is too much, which seems pretentious. The character settings and background settings have a very strong sense of separation. First of all, you must know that the background setting of 2077 is actually very complete. It is a complete world view written by the team. In such a cruel and desperate world view, a protagonist who is many times more naive than David is inserted, which creates a very big sense of tearing. Because all the behavior and thoughts of this character come from the setting, but there is not enough description of past experiences to support it. In the strict and complex worldview of 2077, such a character cannot stand up. The most obvious example is to pretend to be a good guy and feed homeless people sandwiches and then fall into self-doubt due to suicide. You can use the setting to say that the protagonist is such a kind person, but this is pale. What would happen if he had such a mentality in such an environment? Do tramps really just wait to be fed? Robbery, theft, quarrels, and the ridicule of others are the sources of impact on the protagonist. Not to mention how long, I have lived in Night City for a while. Don't you think it's strange to still maintain such a saintly mentality without enough plot support? The reader is not the author. All impressions of the protagonist come from the author's description, not the setting in the mind. When the character's behavior and the environment conflict, it must be that the impact of the environment on the character has not been properly dealt with. The protagonist is not powerful enough to change the environment, so he must integrate into the environment to a certain extent, otherwise it will appear unreasonable. There is also the rhythm. I must admit that eating sugar is very happy, but when I am weak and the environment is dangerous, it is a very bad way to add a halo of intelligence to those around me to elaborate on my feelings. It does not help to advance the plot and makes people feel panicked. I used the word "childish" to describe the protagonist's behavior in the post. The more I look back, the more it fits. The contrast with the environment can make people feel admirable if used well, but if used too much, it will make people feel pretentious. I hope the author can think about it carefully.

To be honest, it's not particularly comfortable to watch. How old was the protagonist before he was reborn? It actually gives people the impression that he is immature mentally, and then David works in the medical system, why did he become a garbage collector? .

The protagonist is a very typical Asashi male protagonist in Japanese comics. There is a serious disconnect with the cultural outlook on the cyberpunk world, and readers who cannot accept it will be poisoned away.

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Many things are wrong. I can even say that the author has never played 2077 or read the texts of 2077. The world view shown by the Polish Jackass in the text is really no smaller than the world view of the wizard. The writing is too immature and ignorant. Even Lucy's character is wrong and she was forced to quit in two chapters.

See Chapter 82. This book is too pretentious. Handing out sandwiches to passers-by, and the passers-by committing suicide after eating them, and the protagonist blaming himself is all my fault... It's so pretentious. Is there any point in writing such a bad plot?

Killing, disorder, violence When everyone is immersed in the sense of release of Cyberpunk 2077 Does anyone understand why Silverhand wants to destroy the company An Lun mentioned it This book must be a niche work Because it contains too many things about human nature and philosophy The author has done a good job in the details It is very impressive and touching. Mu Sansan Come on Due to circle issues, few of the previous works of this book have seen the original work Big world setting "Cyberpunk 2077" (steam video game) Original character setting "Cyberpunk: Edgewalker" Ignore those corrupted companies 🐷 Stick to your ideas and don't care what they say!

A time-travel novel with layers of cyberpunk skin, it is no different from a time-travel novel like Little Dragon Girl Not only do I not understand the subject matter well enough, but the characters also give me the feeling of a Confucian Chinese traveling abroad. This Chinese is not even from the New China, but a remnant of the Manchu Qing Dynasty.

Hypocrisy is the most annoying thing when reading novels with protagonists with this kind of personality and abusive characters. I can continue to read it, but I really can't stand the hypocrisy.

The plot is quite good, but the main character is too naive. By chapter 60, he has already experienced several crises and still looks like a noob. He even said that he is better off as a naive person. It's so uncomfortable to watch.

A very typical case of literary youth. He writes a lot of things that he thinks are profound, but in fact they are very wordy (this represents my personal opinion, if you think it is wrong, then you are right)

The first part is quite interesting, but the second part is unfinished. The protagonist discovers that the AI ​​on the earth is very strong, and then decisively abandons the earth, and runs to Mars with a group of acquaintances in despair, without any thought of resistance. Full attributes are useless, not as good as a tenth of a piece of shit🐮

There are few themes, all the surroundings, a pound of big buns, half of the filling in half a pound.

The other people's roles are too heavy, and the protagonist's role is only a little. Who is the protagonist? Even if the protagonist has a proficiency panel, he won't be able to use it. At least he has to learn a fighting skill to improve his force. It's not easy even if there is a proficiency panel. I've written so many chapters, why haven't I put knowledge and skills on the agenda? Does learning knowledge have to be in school? Even if the upper class has a monopoly on knowledge, isn't there even a tiny bit available on the Internet?

Lucy (intrusion and deletion)

The protagonist is a super cyber virgin...

The themes of Goldfinger are all very good, but the pig's feet start to not think about how to increase the data to become stronger, and always cry, make trouble, and hang themselves somewhere. If you reach lv4 in shooting and fight to lv4, you can become a mercenary, otherwise you will die without a prosthetic body. Lao Fang Na's sadness doesn't feel like traveling through the past, it feels like it's like following what David wrote

Because the Edgewalker anime and Sasha's OP only have 11 episodes in total, it is difficult for fan fiction to restore the personalities of the protagonists in it. The two heroines of this novel are the best among all the fan fiction I have read, especially Sasha. A single line in the OP without an author can describe the Sasha in most people's minds just by appearance.

Fully ordered. First of all, I personally like this book because I came to fan fiction because of Lucy. This book contains a lot of daily love stories with Lucy. I like it very much. It's very sweet. It also satisfies some of my ideas. The protagonist starts his own company to fight against the company. I think many fans end up working as mercenaries. Cheating or compromising, although this is very cyberpunk, but it is not what I like. I read fanfics just for the happy ending, not for tragedy. Although the ending of this book is very hasty, seeing so many daily love affairs with Lucy in it makes me feel that it is not a loss Finally, I would like to ask the author if he will write another cyberpunk fanfic.

The last time I saw a similar book was a Harry Potter fanfic. He wrote many things that were not included in the original work, including some principles of magic and the psychology of many characters, such as why the old man with the white beard was not a minister and why he didn't just kill Voldemort. This book feels very similar to that one. It is slow-burning, but some bland words in it make people feel excited.

After opening a restaurant, everything felt different.

I can't stand it anymore, wasting my money

I can watch it, but it just doesn't look like an edgewalker character.

The beginning is really good-looking, the main character has a very positive outlook on things, and it makes my blood boil. I just want to see if some of the imagination can be turned into something simple. She looked at