Gouwu Tongjian

Um, it's a bit... A weird feeling. After the end of the first world, it gave me a very weird feeling. It's not that the setting is not good, it's just that the writing is not atmospheric, and it's just like the second world. I just gave up after seeing the name. In what era is Infinite Stream still writing the name of my childhood?

I have finished writing a novel about cultivating immortals in chapters 60 and 70. Others have at least a few million words. I don't know what the next copy will be like. This cultivating immortality is really interesting. I would like to ask some specific details about Yang Shen Dao and Yuan Shen Dao. The writing in the article is too rough.

This book failed due to the title of Gogo Tongjian and the transition from the classical volume of the first volume to Naruto. It was so uncomfortable, like half-finishing a meal and realizing it was sandwich*

I still hope that this book can be updated stably and be written into a full length slowly! If you want to follow the path of Xianxia, ​​you can only tell the good and bad by writing a novel step by step...

This author is so conscientious. Even if his grades are so bad, he will still end it for him😎😎😎😎 Very good, you are worthy of respect😁😁

No matter what you say in the comment section, always respond calmly.

It's 400,000 words, why don't you put it on the shelves yet?🤐

Now it seems that the writing is pretty good, the author will keep it up

Well, it feels like the plot of each world goes too fast, which makes me feel like I'm reading an outline.

It's too short and I can't tell much, but the story structure is probably the same as that of the seventy-two transformations of Disha.

It's so bland, I don't understand it, how can anyone watch it?