Immortal Hong Zhiyi

While looking at this book calmly, I suddenly decided to write a book review calmly and express my calm views on this book. First of all, a seemingly ordinary story about cultivating immortality. This was my initial impression after reading this book. Now I gradually read it and found that this is indeed an ordinary story of cultivating immortality. But I am not disparaging this book. Although "ordinary" is not a complimentary word, I think it is the most suitable adjective for this book. If you read too many stories about immortals, you will find that the usual stories about cultivating immortals are different in their own way. What I saw in this book is the different perspectives and narrative methods. In terms of perspective, it is a calm third-person perspective. It normally reads the story from the perspective of the protagonist, and also generally describes some other scenes. This is very simple, but it is not that easy to do. This perspective in this book does not have a lot of interaction with readers or even breaking the fourth wall like many books I have read recently. I felt calm and stable from this perspective, which slowly shows us a story and a novel world. Correspondingly, in terms of narrative technique, this book also stably fits this calm perspective and does not adopt the explanatory writing method of most online novels. Therefore, you cannot easily understand the almost complete picture of a thing from one or two paragraphs of a chapter, and cannot have the omniscience that readers now take for granted. Yes, it generally follows the writing style of a novel, the writing style of early online novels. I like such calmness, such ordinaryness, such stories of quietly looking at another world like a qualified bystander. From the author's pen and from the protagonist's side, I can peep into this novel world. At the end: Future or future readers, would you like to enjoy a kind of peace? ——The rest laughed and discussed the new book world.

This sect is a failure. No matter what the author says that the sect encourages competition or whatever, no matter who is right or wrong, being able to kill people in the mountain gate is a failure. It gives people the feeling that this sect is finished, has no control, no sense of security, and should have fallen apart long ago.

I always feel that Lin Baoer is a character that is not very enjoyable and is always a bit irritating. It makes me uncomfortable to tease the protagonist like this. Even if you have reached this level of cultivation, even if you are really stupid, you won't make pranks everywhere. At least you should understand the truth. Observing the protagonist, you also know that the protagonist is very poor. If you don't hunt and have meat, you can't practice. It's like disturbing others at critical moments when they are practicing or making breakthroughs or refining alchemy. At least it is very annoying. I don't know how old Lin Baoer is at the moment. If there is someone who is hundreds of years old or something, this kind of coquettishness with his senior brother will make people have goosebumps all over their bodies. The book is still good, but the character of Lin Baoer is a bit alienating. I hope to deal with it less in the future. It feels like a trouble, and his ability to cause trouble is not bad. Come on, author! ! ! 🙂

Look what I found, A new book that has just started to be updated Let's move quietly and don't alert him Sneak up behind him Shout loudly: "I am on the first floor!"

Since the daily poisoning is no longer poisonous, Ye~Qing~Jie~

I have always wanted to know how a person with a mental state of 70 or 80 years old (the age he should have died of old age in his previous life was around this age) could be willing to call a woman in her 20s or 30s after traveling through time. Can anyone help explain it? If you call me daddy if you are kind, then I think I can be the father of many people. I have read a novel before, in which a 30-year-old man is called a father after traveling through time in his 80s.

I didn't see the fairy spirit, I only saw the hostility. Such a sect has not fallen apart yet, so I can only cheat on the author.

This is a bug that occurs when the classic martial arts structure of low magic is copied to the world of high magic cultivation. Of course, the sects in the low magic world can be so dark. Anyway, no matter how advanced your martial arts are, they will become weaker and their lifespan is only more than a hundred years. Everything is focused on interests and the inheritance of the sect. However, if you set up cultivation in this way, it will be too dark. In the first generation of leaders, in the second generation, you either kill all the other factions, and then the third generation continues to divide the faction into more factions to kill each other, or like this author's world, the future geniuses of a sect are all fighting each other to the death, killing their fathers, mothers, and entire families.

Seeing so many people complaining that the book sect is worse than a demon cultivator, I left decisively. Thank you all for your guidance.

When I saw that Qingniu had released a new book, I clicked in and it was so fast!

Author, why don't you set the protagonist's sect to be a demonic sect, and other disciples other than the true disciples are not important, and encourage competition and killing, the toxicity will not be so great

Fantasy usually comes at a later stage... Are you ready to write millions of words?

People who watched it at the beginning were speechless. The foundation-building method that even the county magistrate's son couldn't ask for was just casually passed on to the protagonist by Butcher Zhang? Butcher Zhang didn't get started for long, right? What's even more ridiculous is that it was sent by mail. If the letter is lost on the road or opened by someone, who's the chance?

You can't delete your mother. It's better to poison her than not

Lin Baoer, the character at the beginning of the chapter, was so poisonous that she slipped away.

I feel like your realm is so worthless. Just pick up any monk and you will be the Dharmakaya.

I feel unwell due to work reasons and I will be hospitalized for a minor surgery tomorrow. I will suspend updates later.

I can't wait to update it👀, can it be like the picture?

The protagonist's mother is very annoying, and you traveled back in time to understand? The plot is still a flow of fighting monsters and upgrading

Every time I see this introduction, I want to put down my phone, read a book again, and work hard, but unfortunately I forget about it after three seconds, so let's lie down... I have seen him many times in Daodu, what is it like? Let's be honest 😅😅😅

You are a talent. I have had it on my bookshelf for several years. You are not without talent. Do you insist on doing it?