Modern Immortality: Starting from Baduanjin

It's quite clever to start from the perspective of a cancer patient, but all aspects of the writing are pretty good (only 18 chapters have been read so far) It's just that the introductory chapter is a little behind. My thoughts are as follows 1. Originally, the mentality of reading the article was quite upright and peaceful, with a slight detachment from temporarily facing nothingness. It is not easy for readers to feel like this. 2. The most important thing is that I hope the girlfriend can handle it well. Regardless of whether it continues or not, at least give them and your own path a good explanation. 3. It looked quite comfortable at first, but when you open this chapter, you will see a quarrel. Brothers, there is really no need to cry. It is true that ignorance and discrimination are big barriers. I must also remember not to look down on others. #2023.03.12, Chapter 18

There was an identical book before

It's pretty good. Although there are many similar ones, I'm not as comfortable reading this one. The plot is smooth and unobtrusive. It's a rare good book. I recommend it. By the way, I'm looking for similar books.

Can I get more useful information from just two chapters a day? I can also accept the water text, so let's have a few more chapters!

The protagonist and his girlfriend broke up and persuaded him to quit. It was really poisonous, and the protagonist seemed to be very similar to "Chen Shimei". The girlfriend was ready to marry the protagonist despite family opposition, and the protagonist was almost thirty without a car, a house, and not much savings. In the end, the protagonist died of cancer. When he proposed breaking up, the girl also left him 50,000 yuan and said that the two parties had a deep relationship. As a result, the protagonist had a golden finger and no longer had to worry about his life. He didn't mention getting back this "deeply affectionate" girlfriend, which was "similar to Chen Shimei's abandonment of his wife and son".

I saw in Chapter 55 that the protagonist wants to return the money to his ex-girlfriend, but there is no other expression, which makes me feel a little uncomfortable. A girl would rather fall out with her parents than stay with the protagonist. She really needs courage, which even Liang Jingru can't give her. The protagonist has found a solution to all her problems, but she has the feeling of breaking off with her ex-girlfriend. It's really quite realistic. If you get promoted, get rich and die, your wife will die. Is it true that people can't escape from this trap? . .

Ex-girlfriend, apprenticeship, boxing in a taxi, the three views shown in these steps are unacceptable. It is not necessary to get your ex-girlfriend back, but if you handle it this way, it is obvious that you have no feelings for this relationship at all. To practice martial arts under a master, you don't necessarily have to practice according to the master's instructions. Your reaction is not only disrespectful but also self-righteous. Does the author put the protagonist in the perspective of God? Taxi boxing, the protagonist did not cheat and refused to compensate, but between the lines, he believed that the driver should be considerate of you, and should even let you compensate you according to the cheap quotation. Are you familiar with each other or does someone owe you something? These three poisonous points are not very poisonous in theory, but they reflect the awkwardness of the three different views. The comprehensive result step by step is that it is really unbearable.

Some places are a bit poisonous Chapter 41~42 The protagonist wants to rent a car, and drags his friend Wei Biao to help introduce him. When he arrives at the car rental shop, he wants to meditate after signing the contract. Wei Biao's friend takes him to the boss's office, and he just meditates. The protagonist also I wanted to box, but I broke the boss's vase. Why are my hands so itchy? I pretended to be cool for the sake of the plot Chapter 44~45 When I went out for a walk, I met children performing in a Taekwondo gym. The parents were bragging and spanking, showing off how good their children were in training. Because some parents said that martial arts classes are not good because they can only run and jump, so why not jump at home? Then the protagonist jumps out and forces the plot. Parents spend money, and the children perform well. Martial arts only teaches jumping and running for thousands of dollars. Parents think it is not cost-effective, and then shut down the main character. Why do you like to meddle so much in your own business? If you are acting bravely, or the owner of the gym strongly slanders martial arts, then it's okay for the protagonist to refute it, but it's just a casual chat between parents. Is it necessary to get involved?

There are currently two poisonous points. The first one is that I had a deep relationship with my girlfriend and was ready to get married. They broke up because the protagonist had cancer. As a result, the protagonist recovered from his illness but did not contact him. The second one worshiped the old Taoist priest as his teacher, but he refused to follow the old Taoist to learn step by step. I also mentioned in the previous article that the old Taoist priest is really a master. Did the protagonist drift away after practicing his Qi?

The protagonist is both responsible and established. He initiated the breakup, but his girlfriend kindly gave him her savings but it became atonement? How dare you think that not being with you is a sin? What fairy logic?

In order to troll you, I even subscribed to a chapter. You really have a big face🙂. The most poisonous point is the ex-girlfriend. What you describe is that the protagonist loves her very much, and she also loves the protagonist very much. Then I thought it was normal when we broke up. After all, it was a decision made by a normal person. Then you can practice cultivation to extend your life, and then you will ignore your ex-girlfriend? The funniest thing is that you also came up with the question: Is this atonement? I don't even want to open your head to see if the stuff in your head is tofu.

It slipped away. I didn't know what the author had deleted, but after seeing other readers' screenshots, I realized that the author's protagonist is a hateful and ungrateful person. It's really disgusting to look back at the protagonist's past actions like this. This is a life-stealing thief who is indifferent on the surface and pursues immortality for martial arts, but is actually selfish and greedy for fame and fortune. If he is a true thief, he can see it, but it is a fake Taoism. Disgusting! Disgusting!

I'm almost finished reading the updated chapter, so it's time to complain. First of all, the portrayal of the protagonist is annoying. It is not an exaggeration to say that he only benefits himself and does not benefit others. It seems that others should give him things, and giving others some rubbish is like a gift. He felt sorry for all the friendly martial arts masters, especially the Taoist priests who gave him the genius treasure. The most sorry thing is the ex-girlfriend. In today's society, there are still a few such girls. The protagonist wants to pay back 50,000 yuan to get rid of the problem. Did he give all his youth, feelings, and money to the dog? It's hard to calm down... Practicing martial arts requires cultivating virtue. Is the protagonist virtuous? You can't even distinguish between grudges and grudges! Having said that, the author's writing style is fluent, but his human touch is a bit lacking.

When I saw my girlfriend give me money and leave, I didn't want to watch it anymore. The title is Chang Sheng's article, the protagonist's cancer problem is solved, how does his girlfriend deal with it? The author describes his girlfriend as neither being particularly ruthless nor affectionate, but rather finding an intermediate level that readers can understand and accept. In such a situation, whether they get back together or abandon her later, it will be bad. As expected, after reading the next few chapters, the author really wrote the protagonist🤢

I would like to call you the leader of pastoral patriarchy

Is the author a Xin believer? The constant use of technology and ruthless work... Affects the perception very much! Besides, Leader Xin, a person who has graduated from junior high school, is doing science popularization on Douyin. On the surface, it seems to be bluffing, but in reality, it is all a gimmick to deceive fools... I can't complain.

The author and protagonist who came to see Little Fairy Thinking

I started reading Chapter 242. Why is it written? The protagonist is so popular in so many videos, so famous, and yet every place I go there are people who don't believe it and then question it. Then the protagonist will perform a show for them. It's so fucked. If you can't write it, don't write it. It's uncomfortable to watch.

I gave up after watching Pig's Knuckles boxing on the bus, pretending just to show off.

Let me say it again, it is not easy for the author to write, but if the characters are really established, the plot and characters will not feel abrupt. I posted an article for the first time and said that the author made the male protagonist not understandable and worldly at all, not like a terminally ill person who is struggling in society. First, he gave hot food, and second, he broke other people's private belongings in other people's private places several times. Let me say one more thing today, he is really not a child. He competes with others without signing a disclaimer. You have no power and yet you are so naive. Are you a social person? This is an overage giant baby! Therefore, it is strongly recommended that the author pay attention to these small details when writing.

The character design of the protagonist at the beginning is so rubbish, YY is not like you. How did the author do it and create such a top-notch protagonist? This kind of character is considered to be the best in the entire network. The protagonist is almost 30 years old and has achieved nothing. His girlfriend has been with the protagonist for several years despite the huge pressure from her family. Then the protagonist was diagnosed with a terminal illness, and he proposed to break up because he didn't want to delay his girlfriend. Then the girlfriend agreed and gave her 50,000 savings to the hero when they broke up. Seeing this, I think it's okay. This woman did a pretty good job. The spoiler will come later. You can look at my second picture. It turns out that the author explained the protagonist's actions in this way. He has to say pretentious words and put himself on the moral high ground, but also It can make others take it seriously. What is outrageous is that the 50,000 yuan left by the woman was used to atone for sins in the eyes of the author. The girlfriend never delayed the male protagonist from the beginning to the end. On the contrary, the male protagonist achieved nothing at 30 years old. The girlfriend stayed with him despite the pressure of the family and had to atone for the male protagonist when she left. It's so funny. Haha, it made me laugh for a while. It was really fun to watch this episode at night.

The ruthless male protagonist, his ex-girlfriend was extremely kind to him, but what about him? Have you not contacted your ex-girlfriend?

Where is my ex-girlfriend Zhang Zihan? Didn't she show up later? Isn't she a bit too cold-blooded and the character is a bit contradictory after breaking up?

It's boring. It's so awesome. In Chapter 252, the sword-wielding master came out, and another internal master with bulging temples also came out. The next master of Anjin is about to appear. The next step is whether ancient martial arts will be everywhere in the streets. Anjin is not as good as a dog. Just a wild guess!

As expected of the second general, he can't grasp any of the cool points, and all the cool points are poisonous. It's been 12 books, and it's still the same. When it comes to disappointing readers, the second general has never disappointed anyone.

The introduction is very attractive and the subject matter is okay, but after reading the previous point and the comments, I feel that the author and I have different views. As for the female protagonist, others married the male protagonist despite the pressure from their families. It can be said that they like the male protagonist very much. I heard that they even gave 50,000 yuan later. This situation is even more rare, and the important point is that the divorce was initiated by the male protagonist. After reading the comments, it seems that the problem in the eyes of the male protagonist is not the female protagonist, making it seem as if the female protagonist is a heartless person, and the male protagonist is justified in finding a mistress. It's a pretty good novel (I didn't read the poisonous points about pretentiousness, it's all about finding a heroine to get back together with the male protagonist). Either the heroine should not be portrayed so well, or she should no longer look for women to be eunuchs or get back together with the heroine, and portray the heroine like this. Isn't this just the missing girl in YY novels? I didn't pay much attention to anything else. I read in the comments that it was too pretentious and too cliched. I don't know if this poisonous point is true or not. After all, I haven't read it.

The front part is okay, but the back part is too low-level. It's obvious that the writing power is not enough, or the care is not enough.

I paid money just to express my opinions. My treatment of my ex-girlfriend was terrible. I said it felt so awkward. I went to the website and found that there was a single chapter explanation. , It has been deleted now. It said that the protagonist needs companionship in the last period of his life, not the 50,000 yuan. Is your portrayal of the protagonist here too selfish? You also said that in the first chapter of the original text, the ex-girlfriend kneeled down and begged the protagonist to accept 50,000 yuan to "atone". Now this paragraph has been deleted. Haha, what sin does the ex-girlfriend have to atone for? It was because she wanted to elope with the male protagonist. After all, it was the protagonist who felt sorry for his ex-girlfriend, right? Your treatment seems to treat readers like eating flies. If you don't know how to write these emotional scenes, you don't have to write them, but you can't write them to make readers happy.

If you like to look at it and don't look at it, go away. Is there something perfect? Maybe others will like it if you say it's poisonous. Really convinced. There are actually people who want to get their ex-girlfriend back, saying that the girlfriend left her boyfriend due to the pressure of reality. First of all, let me tell you, as a person, you must be humane. If you are terminally ill and compensate the other person for his final days, what will delay you? There will always be people who appreciate character. Good character is so rare. If it were you, would you get it back? Putting myself in their shoes, I don't blame her or him, but there's no need to rebuild a happy life.

Congratulations on the ending of the novel. Although it is a case of high opening and low going, it is not bad to finish writing reluctantly under strict review. I quite like the protagonist's behavior in the early stage. In the later stage, I may feel that the protagonist is a bit too debauched and kills too casually - especially when a country dies, there will definitely be retaliatory actions against the protagonist's relatives and friends, or the Chinese and overseas Chinese, or even the country. , Just like terrorism, the protagonist may be happy, but the local anti-Chinese craze should also be prevalent, and no one needs to be directed. After all, the bad style of white people is always so resentful... I like the protagonist's behavior, but the review may be too strict, resulting in insufficient logic in the novel. ㊗️The author's next novel is even more exciting and beautiful.