Pirate: I Have General Pai Daxing

Personally, I suggest that the author either rewrites the previous chapters, or gives a summary and tells everyone where to jump to start. Although reading the author's post in the comment area, the crew members appearing later may be interesting, but I really can't stand the last part, the writing in the front is too bad.

Possible crew members: [Welcome to add] 1. Admiral Pai Star 2. Golden Flying Pig - Toph of the North 3. Dragon Man - Connor 4. Red Queen in Wonderland 5. Cub of Light - Little Fatty

I can't understand it. It's written like this and everything I just read has been wiped out. Later, the author blames the poor grades and starts not wanting to write. Who can blame this? , Do you really think free chapters don't matter? Even if you write well later, what's the use?

Cub version - Smoker [Arrogant Imp]

Young version - Moonlight Moria [Gothic class representative]

"I am Lu Bu, I just became a pirate, Whitebeard wants me to be his son" 😏

Can you write so many characters? The various characters and abilities are enough for you to drink, and then you have to analyze who is strong and who is weak. An ordinary author writes a hodgepodge without any self-awareness. Just write one or two characters honestly and it will be enough. You can't handle writing too many.

117 And 118 are so easy to persuade. Not to mention that there is no woman in the heart to draw the sword of the natural god. The protagonist has also met the ancient god. Shouldn't he like black goats?

The style is too out-of-the-box, with a hammer here and there. Chapter 11 is about the protagonist's duel with Moriah, and then in Chapter 21, the protagonist starts to fight with Moriah, and the middle part is full of messy things like Pinocchio's commentary. It gives me a headache to watch! I still don't suit this style, so I moisturized it.

To be honest, this paragraph of Moonlight Moria you wrote is too long. Just play Moonlight Moria. The chapter you wrote is too long. In the early stage, I was attracted by the various people you summoned. But your fight has no description and no meaning. And what they did when they came to Pirates was also very inexplicable. I didn't know what they were doing. I don't even know why they invited Roger.

After more than forty chapters, Pai Daxing finally appears. To be fair, this book so far shouldn't be called I have General Pai Daxing.

When I saw Chapter 20, the captain was sparring with Moriah, Pinocchio met Bucky with red hair and Smoker, and there was Kizaru watching a theater on the rooftop. There was no other substantive content. What is his ability? How can you shake people? Does the ship travel through all realms or can it find crew members from all realms? Who was locked up in the dark room?

Everyone who can read Chapter 5 is a big boss

I was already persuaded to quit when I saw the introduction. Thank you author, you are a good person, and a good person will have a safe life.

I've read Chapter 20 and it's so embarrassing😅

I've read a few chapters and I don't know what the main character is doing.

When it comes to Naruto time travel mode, it changes, it's almost like grafting. What used to be a new species of tree is now grafted back.

The content is not as interesting as the introduction. The character descriptions are messy and it looks very noisy. The subject matter is very good but ordinary people cannot grasp it.