The Man Behind Hogwarts

I feel that the more I write, the more I feel. It was a little awkward at the beginning, but the characters in the back are becoming more and more full-fledged, especially in Chapter 95, tsk tsk, Jue Juezi... Fell in love with Evelin all of a sudden. [Personal feelings, family opinions, don't criticize if you don't like it]

Come on, come on, come on, work hard, work hard.

I seriously doubt that the author has actually read Harry Potter 😎

I feel that the author lacks his own understanding of Harry Potter and his understanding of magic. The author did not make a clear definition of magic, but only based on the use of magic in the original work. For example, the protagonist did not learn how to do magic before school started. There was no clear and practical explanation at the beginning. For example, there was no response after chanting the spell, or there was still a response but the effect was wrong. The later explanation for this borrowed from the system, saying that there is no "devil-suitable physique." The important point is that there is no "devil-suitable physique", which does not mean that there is no magic power. If you take it literally, it means that he has magic power, but his body is not used to it. Is there a logical conflict? This means that there is no relationship between magic and magic in the author's outline. Including Chapter 35 when Professor McGonagall asked about the role of consciousness, the author did not give a detailed definition, just using ellipses. This shows that the author has no self-understanding and self-definition of magic. The author does not "believe" in magic, nor does he consider magic to be part of the logical relationship of the world. There is also the problem of character design. To be honest, it is not particularly strange. The behavior and psychological logic are quite reasonable. However, the character change is a bit abrupt in some places, giving readers a feeling that the protagonist is inconsistent. I hope the author will be better and better, there are still too few Ravenclaws T^T

Just like a child, if you set a boss or something, it would be better to start with an orphan.

Is the third Dark Lord the protagonist 😏😏😏 (It's too small, the pattern is too small 🔨), he should be the master of the magic world, is he the male protagonist 🪖

Why does the protagonist seem like a different person after Chapter 18?

It's boring, the setting is a bit broken

You are really a genius in naming the owl Uncle Cat. You are bored by saying one sentence after another.

The protagonist will later establish his own wizard organization. The prototype is a school club. Do you have any good names, such as Readers Club, Library Club... It is difficult to choose a name.

I still feel that the main character in the middle of Chapter 18 to Chapter 20 is too awkward.

The entire article is about doing things that can be done without magic. Magic has not been applied or integrated into life. It is good to build a force, but the entire article is 200 chapters and it has not skipped 1 year. At the same time, what kind of paper can be written in a week? Is this a normal paper? Has the author ever written a meaningful paper?

Um, isn't it because Hogwarts accepts students because they are afraid of the appearance of the Obscurus? I remember that in the mechanism of the appearance of the Obscurus, there is a setting where a young wizard becomes an Obscurus without systematic magic learning.

It's too dramatic to create a fraternity when you're a student... You might say it's to inherit the family business, but there's really no substitution and it just feels like a drama

It's very well written, why is there no one here?

The novels you wrote are so profound that I felt a little dizzy while smoking and reading them in the mist.

It's over 110 chapters, and it's still a daily routine. The system, except for a few novice skills, is still in the process of overdevelopment. The protagonist also follows the general arrangement of the system, and writes daily routines as sweet stories. I feel that the framework of this book has not yet been determined, and what kind of writing style it is.

I have only read Chapter 66 so far, and I am a little confused as to why a Ravenclaw student does not go to the dean of his own house but has to go to the dean of Gryffindor to get permission. In any case, the dean of Ravenclaw must express his opinion on matters related to Ravenclaw students, right?

,,, I really can't accept that a primary school student becomes a gang boss after just a few years of work 🙂🙂🙂,,, Why such a weird setting?

The author would like to remind you that in Western countries, people are called by their surname. People are called by their first name only if they are familiar with them.

I don't have any special opinions about teenagers being gangsters. After all, time-travelers always have to be a little special. But author, do you have some misunderstanding about aloofness? After reading more than ten chapters, I didn't see anything cold! I was an adult before I traveled through time, brother! Most adults wear masks and live in society. In my opinion, the main character is at best a little clever kid. It's a bit disconnected from adults. Poison spot

It seems that Snape is going to be played to death by the protagonist

Very good book, I don't know why no one reads it

It's really well written and supported, the author keeps the pace steady!

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It's really well written and supported, the author keeps the pace steady!

Just give me more, it's not enough at all

Collect all kinds of imaginative magic and spells, come and see if you have the qualifications of a wizard.

I saw Snape being targeted to death by the protagonist, just because Snape forced himself to see the protagonist's memories? If I were Snape, I would do the same thing. You have to know that the protagonist is a gang leader, and he is only eleven years old. Do you think this is reasonable? An eleven-year-old gang leader manages the gang in an orderly manner! This is of course unreasonable. If something goes wrong, there must be a demon. Snape should check the other party's memory to see what's going on! Ask yourself what you would do if you were Snape, should all this be normal? If I were Snape, I would ask the school not to let such people come to study! After all, Voldemort's villain is there. Who knows what an eleven-year-old gang leader will do after learning magic! I would say that Hogwarts' recruitment standards should be raised higher, instead of recruiting all the random people.

It's well written, but too little.