Become a Magician from a Pirate

I hope that even if there is a bounty on his head, the protagonist will not call himself a pirate. What kind of pirate flag are you hanging?

Do you want to persuade me to quit?

It's really poisonous for Nami to join the pirate group.

I really think that the Master will be ecstatic when he arrives as a pirate, but forget about the mage who can only lose skills.

After reading the previous dozens of chapters (more than 20), the words and sentences used are not quite right. For example, the fish man called Lord Aaron, or Nami asked the protagonist to help her, and the protagonist smiled and said with a backhand: Just do what you want. Why are you laughing? There are other places where you can sneer and lick your lips, you are such a villain. I hope I can improve if I practice.

There is that sense of pursuit of knowledge, but not much. The main sense is still based on the online game type magician. To put it simply, it is quite straightforward.

I talk about the male protagonist every day, so forget it. In Chapter 30, the male protagonist was forced to join the navy. This is where I was persuaded to quit.

I just read it and couldn't stand the second chapter. Are other people's comments really right? If you fell into the sea, wouldn't you think about it silently and enter? I'm quite speechless. When I saw the orange hair, I knew it was Nami. The main character is Cocosia and Nami Robin are related in the beginning. I basically don't read it. Sometimes I really hope you are original. Nine out of ten pirate novels are about Nami Robin.

Hello author, I am the mother of a child with this account. My child has recently been diagnosed with severe depression. I just learned that he likes the articles you wrote recently. I am very happy to read your book. The doctor said it can effectively curb depression. Please update hundreds of chapters a day. It is not too much.

I specially rewarded you with a dollar because I wanted to say that the main character would be a bounty hunter and a pirate. Why would you want to join the navy? You are a magician and you don't need the guidance of the navy. Maybe the world government will be interested in your unknown power. At least 8 of the ten pirate novels currently have joined the navy. I really wanted to abandon the book in an instant. The previous article is really good.

I saw Chapter 2 first. As soon as the first chapter appeared, there was an old man giving this and that, and I just wanted to say who are you? Why should they give it to you? Chapter 2: As soon as he appeared in the pirate world, he met Nami. . . , Such a big world, with only a few protagonists, your plot is too blunt, and then you just rely on Nami's side. . . Simply speechless

Things started to suck from the moment the protagonist joined the navy. Let's go now.

The last few chapters of Bawangxe have been written in such a way that they have persuaded many people to quit.

It's only 110,000 words, so the author might as well start from scratch. I suggest the author get to know a magician. The most basic requirements for a magician are mystery and scientific research. If you write about a magician, it will feel out of place if it is not mysterious. I have read so many novels, and I am very experienced in judging whether a book is good or not. The subject matter is okay, and the author's writing style is okay, but the theme is wrong. If the author doesn't change it, it will definitely be a waste of time. No one can read it. It's too far-fetched and out of place. I suggest the author start changing it after killing Aaron. Modify the previous part with text to make the protagonist look more mysterious. Friends can know the existence of the magician, but if you are not a friend, there is no need. After being captured and sent to the Navy, he was changed into working as a scientist in the Navy (when he knew how to clone himself, he let the clones come out to do things). After entering, he engaged in scientific research, asked the Navy to capture people with Devil Fruit abilities to draw blood, and gave the Navy some simple medicines (blue bottles of recovery medicine). Use the navy to support yourself until you become invincible.

Can Nami join the Straw Hats? ? Poison spot

Although I think the protagonist is such a good plug-in, it would be great to be a lone ranger or build his own magic force, but I didn't expect that in order for the protagonist to join the navy, a tortured plot was set up. It was such a coincidence that while doing harm to the people, I met Garp directly. The plot arrangement was a bit stiff.

Is he the kind of magician who pursues arcane knowledge, or is he a traditional magician?

Why do you start traveling to other worlds in the next 100 chapters or so? At least finish the pirate chapter first.

I can only say what is the meaning of the overlord color? The most basic thing about a mage is mental power. If the mental power increases, it can crush the mountain of mental pressure. Not to mention that when it reaches a certain level, the planet can explode with mental pressure. So what is the meaning of the overlord color? I can only say that you should stop writing about these abilities that cannot be put on the table in front of the mage. I don't have any strength or imagination at all. That's it.

The visual appeal of "Magician" comes to mind as soon as I see it. "Magician" generally feels like it has high attack and low defense, which means it is not very good physically. Enemy sneak attack: "Shave" in front of the protagonist and stab him. Protagonist: "What, my eyes can catch it mentally, but my body can't keep up, poof... Uh... Ah." I threw myself on the street, but I couldn't get rid of this scene. I haven't read this book yet, so I don't know how the author solves this problem...

Are there few people following it?