Hogwarts Arcanist

Stubborn authors often like to give their protagonists a Chinese name in Western fantasy stories 👍

I think the protagonist's character is well-developed, but I feel the author treats magic like a weapon, failing to capture its mystery and its manipulation of rules. It's worth a look, that's my assessment.

It feels like I've been writing the plot all along, just adding a main character and a fish.

It feels like the author hasn't really shown just how strong the protagonist is.

A newly enrolled Muggle student, being a time traveler, knew about the Room of Requirement without any problem. However, upon arriving at the school and encountering the headmaster, he directly told him he wanted to practice magic at the Room of Requirement, and Dumbledore, such a shrewd person, didn't suspect a thing.

The start was good, and I hope the story will get even more exciting later on. It's about not following the group and creating a completely new main storyline, which will test both your imagination and your writing skills.

It's alright, but the main character is just average; he doesn't have much of a Hufflepuff vibe, and he doesn't have any standout moments.

If the soul is split, then it'll just have to tough it out against Avada and eat the melon.

The Death Eaters can fly, right? Let Snape teach them, and Avada Kedavra too!

What would happen if a wand were made into a Horcrux?