Tokyo Handsome Guy Doesn't Make a Choice

The author's writing is very good, but the audience for Japanese light novels like this is very small... But it is very interesting!

After reading more than a dozen chapters, I think the author's writing is not bad, at least not dramatic, and the characters of the heroines are very eye-catching. In this section, he is a rare author who does not follow a template and is willing to work hard to create characters. What is more discouraging is the design of this system. I don't quite understand why a system is designed to force the male protagonist to make a fool of himself in public. If the author of this part is referring to the setting in "The Pervert Prince and the Laughing Cat", then I must emphasize that Yokodera Yoto's character is like this, so he has a comedic effect when he does these things, and it is very uncomfortable for a normal person to be forced to be a 🤡. If the author really likes the character of the "perverted prince", then my personal suggestion is to let the male protagonist be himself in front of the public and have his own normal life. When facing the female protagonist alone, the system will forcibly trigger some perverted tasks, so that there will be no sense of frustration (some people may prefer your way of writing, the author, I am just giving a personal opinion).

Author, there is a problem. There is no other reward for each choice. If that is the case, I will definitely not choose again in the future. There is no difference between social death and death.

Due to physical reasons, that is, insufficient blood supply to the brain, I cannot sit in front of the computer for too long. I have to make sure to rest, otherwise I will feel dizzy, so I only have one chapter a day. If I get better later, I will have two chapters. Sorry, the results of this book are not good, so everyone can read it with confidence, at least it will be finished.

Is it strange that my wife wants to be paid overnight? Why don't you get paid for some reason? The male protagonist doesn't help either, has the author forgotten?

Come on, author. I have to go to school at half past five. I'll go and read the updates I haven't read these days due to homework.

Introduction to StarCraft Wings of Liberty, right?

After reading the introduction for the first time, there was a very familiar dubbing in my mind. After thinking about it for a long time, I finally remembered that it was the words of the Wings of Liberty CG in StarCraft 2.

Platinum capital, sleepless nights

Buge is fully ordered It is best to write it longer, 80% of it can become a god Much better than most light novels It feels like a handsome guy in Tokyo Come on

No one reads it, but the writing is okay.

The system is not the problem, the problem is that you have invested the hero's action power, but barely strengthened the plot and character creation, which makes the hero's behavior seem very meaningless. Choose This system is from Zhenlian, the author should take a closer look. As the saying goes, the writing is good but can be broken. The plot should not be written so immaturely. It should have more ups and downs. To put it simply, it should be like a riddle. (pointing)

After reading about 30 chapters, I feel that the heroine's design is not outstanding enough and she is basically not well-characterized. The male protagonist has no short-term or goals. I always feel like I have some shortcomings

If you can't write it, give me an outline or finish it quickly.

Three chapters, I don't feel like a newbie, just invest in it