Journey to the West: Forcing My Way into Laozi's Discipleship

Forcibly, you forced yourself to be slapped to death by me

How should I put it? The writing is obviously very good, but I feel a little depressed watching it. The protagonist can be said to do nothing and the plot does not change. There is no difference. The Bull Demon King stole the protagonist's things. The protagonist said that he wanted to deal with him. As a result, the protagonist found a thing and watched him carefree. Then I said, why did you write this disgusting person? Just because he has a role in Journey to the West, the protagonist just doesn't move at all.

The writing was good at the beginning, but the more I wrote, the less good it became. 1. The protagonist is a leader of Taoism, but not many people in the world know about him; 2. The protagonist or the author is very nosy; 3. Originally, Tongtian's reputation lies in teaching people without distinction, but the protagonist's recruitment of disciples is all based on personal preferences and deviates from the public; 4. As a leader of Taoism, the protagonist does not have any dignity or inferiority, even the younger generations are Taoist friends to the protagonist. The protagonist seems to have a perfect level of cultivation, but it gives me the feeling that he is 50-50 equal to everyone, without any sense of superiority. The character of the protagonist is also very lazy. If the protagonist is asked to be a Taoist leader, he can only say that he is bullied by Buddhism to the point where he dare not even say anything. The protagonist is not worthy of the word "Taoist leader" at all.

Let me open a post to explain. This book is my first book. It is purely about Journey to the West, mixed with some history, some myths, and some Buddhist and Taoist classics. It is actually called the Suture Monster. It will not mix anything about gods or prehistoric times. It will only follow the path of Journey to the West. This is my first time writing a book, and there are a lot of shortcomings. I can't write the Journey to the West that some readers have in mind. There's nothing I can do about it. If you don't like it, you can move elsewhere and find something you like. As for the writing style in semi-literary Chinese, I can only say that this is how I usually speak. If you ask me to change it, or use pure vernacular, I don't know where to start, so I can only do it like this. Just let it go. If you like it, I will be happy. If you don't like it, let it go. It just depends on fate, and I don't force it. In addition, whether to reward or not is entirely up to you, thank you! Thank you!

The protagonist just insists on opposing Buddhism, as if he wouldn't be able to write if he doesn't oppose it, and just like collecting rags, he accepts all the famous ones as his disciples, as if there is no one else who can be his disciples except these people.

The author has offended people or something. There are so many people shouting, and it is obviously well written. It has the feeling of a true immortal with good fortune and a peaceful and scattered person. What is the True Immortal of Fortune? Can those who fight, kill, and use all their mechanisms to be called the True Immortal of Fortune? The theme of Journey to the West is to subdue the mental ape and tie the mental horse. What is the meaning of writing it according to the general routine of ancient novels or cultivating immortals?

The author doesn't know whether the writing is good or bad, but the title of the book has persuaded most of them to reject it and force them to become disciples of Lao Tzu. It feels like they don't know how to live or die, and it gives people an awkward feeling. I hope the title of your book can be changed.

I suggest the author to read Journey to the West: Won Laojun in the Opening Game by the same author Sen Luo Wanxiang. People really write about Journey to the West without touching the prehistoric times. Although the protagonist is also in love with me, it is logical that he can justify himself.

This book is a mess, and the timeline is mind-numbing to read. I gave him the name Tongtian Cult Master, which gave me the impression that the protagonist is like the Tongtian Cult Master. Without that strong character, he cannot bear the title of Tongtian Cult Leader.

I don't want to subscribe anymore, it feels like I have copied Journey to the West again with some words changed.