Journey to the West: Forced to Become a Disciple of Laozi

The content is great, with various allusions and connections such as antelopes hanging horns I just finished it, let me share my feelings 1. The name is too discouraging, whether it is Journey to the West or The Great Desolation of the Gods, [forced] always means bad things 2. The white jade is slightly flawed, cut in at the beginning, the name of Ritsuko, it took me a long time to find out that it was made by papermaking, so it is better to just lay it out directly, it is not comfortable to interject the narrative. Then there are the chapters about Sun Wukong, which are bland and feel like pasting the original text ………… Personal suggestion: [Journey to the West: Master of Xuanmen] After seeing the latest chapter, the protagonist becomes more and more tall, and I feel like a boss, but as other book friends said, he has a high status, but his pomp is too low. He is a human leader who cultivates Taoism and immortality, but not many people buy it. There is also the opening chapter. You can dream about thousands of years and time travel, and then make paper and pen, etc., Gain fame, and then become a disciple. There is no need to write it hard and lick it, publicize it everywhere, and kidnap you to become an apprentice If you choose to accept you, you can set a test, and there is no need to write [forced] If you don't want to accept you, this This approach will only cause disgust It may be a bit confusing, but in short, the spontaneous apprenticeship of pig's feet can be said to be *#& Reason: Journey to the West, I am the God of creation, it will be easy to fish you out from the future through the long river of time, or let you dream for thousands of years, right? Choosing you is more acceptable than being clever and cheating.

Forcibly, you forced yourself to be slapped to death by me

How should I put it? The writing is obviously very good, but I feel a little depressed watching it. The protagonist can be said to do nothing and the plot does not change. There is no difference. The Bull Demon King stole the protagonist's things. The protagonist said that he wanted to deal with him. As a result, the protagonist found a thing and watched him carefree. Then I said, why did you write this disgusting person? Just because he has a role in Journey to the West, the protagonist just doesn't move at all.

The writing was good at the beginning, but the more I wrote, the less good it became. 1. The protagonist is a leader of Taoism, but not many people in the world know about him; 2. The protagonist or the author is very nosy; 3. Originally, Tongtian's reputation lies in teaching people without distinction, but the protagonist's recruitment of disciples is all based on personal preferences and deviates from the public; 4. As a leader of Taoism, the protagonist does not have any dignity or inferiority, even the younger generations are Taoist friends to the protagonist. The protagonist seems to have a perfect level of cultivation, but it gives me the feeling that he is 50-50 equal to everyone, without any sense of superiority. The character of the protagonist is also very lazy. If the protagonist is asked to be a Taoist leader, he can only say that he is bullied by Buddhism to the point where he dare not even say anything. The protagonist is not worthy of the word "Taoist leader" at all.

Let me open a post to explain. This book is my first book. It is purely about Journey to the West, mixed with some history, some myths, and some Buddhist and Taoist classics. It is actually called the Suture Monster. It will not mix anything about gods or prehistoric times. It will only follow the path of Journey to the West. This is my first time writing a book, and there are a lot of shortcomings. I can't write the Journey to the West that some readers have in mind. There's nothing I can do about it. If you don't like it, you can move elsewhere and find something you like. As for the writing style in semi-literary Chinese, I can only say that this is how I usually speak. If you ask me to change it, or use pure vernacular, I don't know where to start, so I can only do it like this. Just let it go. If you like it, I will be happy. If you don't like it, let it go. It just depends on fate, and I don't force it. In addition, whether to reward or not is entirely up to you, thank you! Thank you!

The protagonist just insists on opposing Buddhism, as if he wouldn't be able to write if he doesn't oppose it, and just like collecting rags, he accepts all the famous ones as his disciples, as if there is no one else who can be his disciples except these people.

The author has offended people or something. There are so many people shouting, and it is obviously well written. It has the feeling of a true immortal with good fortune and a peaceful and scattered person. What is the True Immortal of Fortune? Can those who fight, kill, and use all their mechanisms to be called the True Immortal of Fortune? The theme of Journey to the West is to subdue the mental ape and tie the mental horse. What is the meaning of writing it according to the general routine of ancient novels or cultivating immortals?

The author doesn't know whether the writing is good or bad, but the title of the book has persuaded most of them to reject it and force them to become disciples of Lao Tzu. It feels like they don't know how to live or die, and it gives people an awkward feeling. I hope the title of your book can be changed.

I suggest the author to read Journey to the West: Won Laojun in the Opening Game by the same author Sen Luo Wanxiang. People really write about Journey to the West without touching the prehistoric times. Although the protagonist is also in love with me, it is logical that he can justify himself.

I don't want to subscribe anymore, it feels like I have copied Journey to the West again with some words changed.

Are there any people who are rushing to recruit disciples? You Tongtian Cult Leader is really worthless!

This book is a mess, and the timeline is mind-numbing to read. I gave him the name Tongtian Cult Master, which gave me the impression that the protagonist is like the Tongtian Cult Master. Without that strong character, he cannot bear the title of Tongtian Cult Leader.

I find it strange. It is said that he is a disciple of Lao Jun and takes charge of the Taoist sect in the world after Lao Jun ascends to heaven. What is the result? As a result, few immortals in the world know you. Is this the leader of the Taoist sect? It's really funny.

The writing is okay. I saw the scene about the Seven Fairies and couldn't stand it anymore. In the eyes of immortals, the essence of immortals is different. Immortals have their own N-fold microscope and they can tell at a glance why a hundred years of mortals are related to immortals. The Seven Fairies themselves are a drawback. There are too many filial people and their appearance is like bones in the eyes of immortals. As a result, the writing was not done well.

How did you learn from Laozi and learn Pangu's teachings?

Didn't the narration poem at the beginning of Journey to the West say that Pangu opened the sky? Doesn't "the founder of the world" mean the ancestors who existed at the beginning of the world? What are the comments about? The pure Journey to the West story written by the author is really good. Other novels about Journey to the West always have something to do with Fengshen, which feels like a lower grade. Fengshen is like a fan novel with a broken combat power.

I can't stand it anymore when I see Xiang Yu as his disciple, it's so disgusting

Those who say they are copying Journey to the West should list the exact same ones, otherwise the trainee will not be convincing.

Passing by again, I would like to remind those in the comment area that it was Pangu who created the world in Journey to the West, and there is no such thing as Pangu being the greatest!

This novel is like this, imitating the ancient novels and novels without getting the point right. Talking about setting poems, character descriptions, and limericks describing scenery, you really write about people when you meet them, mountains when you meet them, and water when you meet them. If you write like this, even ancient people wouldn't like to read it.

Is the author a Taoist priest? Fans want gifts

This book is not good at details. The plot is okay

You are so cheating and you force yourself to become my disciple. I don't even want to see it.

Ah, how come you have finished this book? Author, your writing is pretty good.

I didn't read the content, I only read the introduction. In a world where personal power is paramount, the weak force the strong. I can only say haha. You wrote that Laojun saw that the protagonist has traveled through time, so accepting the protagonist as his disciple is better than this.

Taking on Xiang Yu as a disciple, he also brought Yu Ji and three thousand ghost soldiers. This author is really good at collecting private goods. Taking a disciple with a family and a family is invincible. When it comes to fans of Xiang Yu, Sima Qian should be ranked behind you.

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It's scary that there are so few comments and I don't dare to check if there are any explorers.

How come you haven't been working hard these days and there's only one chapter in one post?

The writing is very good, very good, it is really Taoist style, the story line is mainly Taoist mythology, I am looking forward to the author's next book