My Parallel World Last Wish

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It is invincible when it is turned on. It has the characteristics of Daluo and is the only one in the world.

Looking at the background, it seems that the protagonist has experienced setbacks and has a mature mind, but the plot development really does not show how much the protagonist uses his brain. Killing someone in public? Don't you think about the consequences at all? Behaving in the world is as if you have never seen the world.

Walking on the street, you see the enemy, chase after him, don't attack, block the enemy, write ink for a long time before starting the battle, crush the situation but fight and taunt at the same time, wait for the enemy teammates to come to rescue, surround the pig's foot, the pig's foot can't be beaten, don't run, pretend to be cool, taunt, the pig's foot companion arrives at the critical moment, the pig's foot companion only knows The enemy can kill Pigfoot for the sake of his subordinates, regardless of whether such a genius as Pigfoot has any shocking background, but Pigfoot's teammates will not fight the enemy over Pigfoot. They only know how to be submissive and shout, including Pigfoot, like wild dogs with a fierce appearance and a soft heart.

Your ability is innate and eternal

Jet Li has a movie where every time you kill a parallel world self, the remaining self in the parallel world will become stronger. When you become the only existence in a parallel world, you become invincible.

This is a life-long system. Legend has it that the steps are not stable.

The start is thunder and lightning. It's a pity that the pig's feet don't make magnetic fields. Bioelectricity > Current push > Magnetic field rotation = Give me a whale-killing fist. Kouya. Today I'm going to kill you to ashes. Kouya.

Good guy, if you don't become Daluo directly, you will be dead in the parallel world. Logically speaking, you can become a Daluo Jinxian in an instant, unless you want to play a game and deliberately set something up to prevent you from gaining power.

Can you please stop writing about female protagonists? Many people write so disgustingly

Maybe Da Luo himself in the future has been beaten to death. He is the only one who has died in countless timelines due to accidents.

The beginning felt good, but the first last wish dragged on for fifty chapters and it was a bit embarrassing before it was resolved.

It's too shabby. There was a point that I was interested in but the author pushed it back and wrote a lot of other plots. When I lost interest in it, I deleted it.

Poisonous. He is beyond the timeline of the world. He is still fulfilling his last wish. He died at the same time. He can still travel through time. Time is suspended. He also plays rubbish routines about traveling through the world.

How can I put it, the creativity of this book is really amazing, but the content development and the development of the story are really a bit unsatisfactory, that is, it is not satisfying, and it is too terrible if the article is not satisfying. There is a lot of content in the chapters to explain the background story settings, but it feels like it is still in the clouds for a long time, and the point is not mentioned. For the first copy, it must be fast and accurate to catch the reader's attention. You can be faster and shorter, but not Write a chapter and make up for the settings. For example, in the last chapter about firearms, it was the Continental Gun, and then the machine gun came out in the next chapter. It was too abrupt, and the sense of separation of context was too strong, which made people feel uncomfortable. You can post it according to my Daqing history, but you have to distinguish it. You should follow the actual situation for the data of the gun. After all, there are still martial arts powers in this world, and they are very common. As a result, everyone has extraordinary skills, flying over walls and walls. When they pick up a gun, they all become ordinary people. Even in reality, there are gods who can dodge bullets through prediction. However, in the book, everyone has martial arts, but it is useless. It really makes people feel speechless. When the Eight-Nation Allied Forces entered Beijing, Mr. Cheng Tinghua of Baguazhang was not afraid of dozens of foreign guns. He was just afraid of being blocked by a large group of people and had no range of movement. They were all martial arts masters. They had martial arts, but they were not faster than guns. You repeatedly emphasized many times that the ones who fired were all trained. Ordinary people who have practiced martial arts only need to react faster than others. Don't talk about different worlds or parallel time and space at the slightest suggestion. If you want people's reactions to be the same whether you practice martial arts or not, then you are the one who makes guns and generates electricity. To tell a story, the most important thing is to justify it and make sense, rather than write a paragraph with some sand in it. A well-made idea is like a foot wrap, smelly and long

Judging from the title and introduction of the book, the current mythological setting (not mentioning this book) is that the self (the only) has already restrained the various timelines, but it still has to do tasks, probably to relieve the cause and effect? ​​But in theory, this is the only one. Let other thoughts interfere with an existence with Daluo (the only). Do you think this is okay? It feels like ants are threatening the universe. Wouldn't it be better to change it to an invincible text and use Da Luo to descend (a clone or a projection)?

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Golden Immortal, gold is eternal and immortal. The world is destroyed but I am immortal. The sun and moon are decayed but I am immortal. One thought opens the sky. Dayi Golden Immortal, consolidate your own timeline, prove your true self, the only one in the world. Daluo Jinxian, transcending the long river of destiny, projects all the heavens, all for others and me, and has infinite power.

Go ahead, your plot background is as good as my dream. Someone really wrote this! ! ! !

After four days of interruption, is the author infected with bacteria or infected?

After seven days of interruption, the new book investment failed. 😒

You borrowed too much from other novels. You basically copied the previous plot of that novel, but you just opened it up a bit. I hope you can write something original of your own. Goodbye.

Long-winded, ink-stained, and full of nonsense. They are completely opposite to what you wrote. I recommend two books to you. Read it yourself and then read yours. One is I Have a Game World, and the other is Sideways Pushing Starting from the Yakuza. Both directions are clean and crisp, with less nonsense and rich plot. There is indeed something wrong with your writing. You can't even say enough in this chapter.

I'm a little worried. I haven't updated for so long. Maybe I had to undergo surgery 😰

Am I yang? I was yang and I woke up very energetic after a nap. Except for my throat being a little uncomfortable, nothing happened.

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Is the protagonist the only one in the world who is hungry at the beginning?

The introduction is just in line with what I have thought of before, and there is another similar possibility of reversing one's own death (the protagonist can see his recent death, as long as he does not die)

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I'm not interested in this setting anymore. Can you get an inheritance by fulfilling your last wish? Feel sorry. I don't care about it either. If only I knew there were so many parallel worlds. And I'm still dead. I especially want to try what it would be like if I did it too. If I can destroy all the multiverses together, I will make a profit.