I Just Want to Be Healthy, but I Start to Evolve

Under normal circumstances, there is an upper limit for the number of times you can practice the Eight Parts of Vajra Kung Fu per day. It is impossible to practice effectively all day long. Of course, this can be explained by golden fingers. But you practice from morning to night and stay up late to practice health-preserving skills? Adding and subtracting at the same time, right? Pursuit problem, right?

Last year's book only had 40,000 words, please update it quickly!

The author can make a paid chapter where nearly half of the content is copy-pasted popular science knowledge.

If it sounds good, the street challenge is an outdated routine. If it sounds bad, it means provoking confrontation and even worshiping foreigners! It's best to delete it and re-write it. The stunning opening has been completely ruined.

After the middle period, at least half of the chapter is science popularization. If you pay to read science popularization, you can still get it on Baidu.

In fact, the various plot developments are not toxic to me, but the various "side effects" in this evolutionary process really made me feel on pins and needles, like thorns in my back, and like a lump in my throat. He has been growing taller, so abnormally tall that the protagonist has to shrink his bones every day. This way of writing makes me awkward enough. Another skin deterioration occurs. I really can't stand it. It's too disturbing. Is there any point in writing this? What sense of immersion can be added? It's really hard to say, I wish you success.

Why is the protagonist keeping shrinking his body size? You are getting bigger anyway, shouldn't everyone know this? It's not like other people don't know that your body shape has been changing. It's all recorded, and you can tell by comparing it. Why is this person hiding all this time?

None of the poisonous points and bloody plots in modern cultivation novels are avoided. Chunchun Studio's novels

It's okay at the beginning, but at the end of the day, a lot of world records are put up, and some analysis is added, and how many records equals how many points of physical fitness, strength, etc. It has no impact at all if you skip it.

Save everyone, show yourself as a saint in front of everyone, this is a rotten street routine

It's 2024 and we're still working on spiritual energy recovery and human body enhancement potions

I feel a little crooked when I see the back

Did you write about tigers? A tiger wrote five or six chapters, Pinpin, who cares? It's all gone away from the main plot.

Most of it is probably copied from AI's writing, so I can give it up. The plot didn't develop at all for a long time.

After my search of pdd, tb, b station, ks, douyin, there is no Liangyi acupoint or Qishenquan. This is starting to turn into fantasy, unless the author comes out and posts a video.

It's all copy-pasted popular science content.

Withdrawn! There is so much popular science knowledge in the paid chapters!

To be honest, when I read the latest chapters, at least half of each chapter is about popular science. Some even have just a few sentences in the plot. The whole chapter is about popular science. What should people read? If I want to read popular science, don't I know how to go to Baidu and look it up online? The key author hasn't read the feedback yet. You think there are too many readers, right? Let's read a few more chapters. If this is still the case, the only choice is to withdraw.

Withdrawn, one main character only exists in 2 pages, and the rest are all introduced in popular science. The whole article is popular science.

Damn it, some chapters are just popular science about what happened.

A good hand of cards is played badly. The subject matter and creativity are very good, but your popular science that accounts for most of each chapter forcefully drives away most people.

The author only reads the manuscript to himself, which is too sloppy.

You're just copying and pasting. Large sections of popular science

You! He keeps growing, but he doesn't want to be exposed, and keeps his collarbones, and loses his attributes when he shrinks. Isn't this weakening the protagonist?

Isn't this plagiarizing the only extraordinary thing in the city? ? ? Pixel-level plagiarism, exactly the same

Although it's a bit confusing, aside from the popular science, the rest of the content is very well written! It's a pity that the author stopped writing