Tokyo 1979: Yangquan Tavern

The frequent long passages of scientific information really disrupted my reading rhythm; I was enjoying it, and then it suddenly interrupted me.

It's a pity that the Tokyo TV station director's book was cut short; there were so many parts that were censored and never published. I was really looking forward to the remaining parts of that unpublished book, and I hope this one won't suffer the same fate. Keep it up!

The interspersed content in the novel was a bit of a headache to read; it was all very disorganized.

I wondered why the writing style seemed familiar; it turns out it's Kenpachi.

I've been a bit confused by the last few chapters. What's going on? Is it going to take the divine messenger route? I feel like the protagonist's character isn't as good as Kenpachi's.

Your writing is actually quite good. However, the plots of those TV dramas are unrelated to the main storyline, and the Japanese social history popularization is also not very relevant to the main storyline, seemingly padding the plot, but overall it's acceptable.

There are too few book reviews, which is abnormal. I suggest the author not delete them. Generally, at least one review per chapter is normal. Too few reviews can sometimes be a bad standard.

Aside from those long, unnecessary science explanations... Everything else is good. Using famous quotes from movies and TV shows can be both an advantage and a disadvantage.

Although it's mostly the author indulging in self-gratification, and although the author's fantasies are practically overflowing throughout the text... —But it's quite beautiful! The author is an upright young man with broad thinking and a wealth of knowledge. It has exciting moments and educational content, making it perfect for watching quietly! Hey!

I knew the last book was doomed when I got to the middle, so I decided to give this one a try.