Reborn in Coiling Dragon

I think it might be better in the early stage. I don't know why most Panlong fans like to tease people around the protagonist. Like in this novel, his female apprentice became a six-star demon in less than a thousand years. She is a super genius. She is probably about the same level as Lin Lei. The resources and knowledge of the main god family of the Shura family in countless planes are not better than hers. The level of a six-star demon who has understood the mysterious laws in a million years is considered a genius! A mythical beast around you can grow up in a short time. . . . Without Beirut's cheating on a super mythical beast like Beibei, it is probably unknown whether Coiling Dragon will be able to become a high-ranking god after it is completed. There is another poisonous point. Even though they know that the highest plane is dangerous, they still like to carry oil bottles. Hey, the more I look at it, the more uncomfortable it becomes

Some people may think that the protagonist in the first few chapters is too licky, please reply here. Because the protagonist didn't know that he was talented in cultivation at the beginning. In addition, Lin Lei is the protagonist of the original work. Think about it, if one day you traveled through time and your neighbor was a billionaire, and now you had the chance to get to know him, would you subconsciously be shorter than him? There is also the issue of the ownership of the secret room space. Boss, that secret room is in the Principality of Baruch! ! You can't just say you come first and then take over someone else's territory, right? It's really tougher than a fist. Lin Lei has so many sanctuaries that he can beat the protagonist to death in a beating. Furthermore, after reading the original work, Wang Sen was mentally unreasonable to be the first to open the secret room, so he was timid when facing Lin Lei. When your cultivation level rises in the future, you will naturally become tougher when facing Lin Lei. Think about it, most people will feel a little scared when they suddenly face someone very powerful. Okay, the explanation is over. If you feel it's unreasonable, don't criticize me too harshly. I'm just a newbie, and my writing isn't very good. Try your best to improve (Thank you for reading this, I love you!)

The writing is too licking. You really don't need to lick Linley like this. He can't give you anything. Even when I went to the highest plane, I was shocked every step of the way.

I would like to make a suggestion and hope that the author will adopt it. It is the title of Wang Sen and Hedson. It is very unsubstituting. I don't know if the author's real name is this, because there are indeed authors who like to do this and think the writing is exciting. However, we readers feel quite inexplicable when reading it. This is a small problem, and the West In fantasy novels, even if the protagonist travels through the party, he or she will quickly integrate into the world view. If you think about it, the Panlong world view requires hundreds or thousands of years of practice, and the thinking should have been transformed into localization. The Tang suit section is indeed a bit poisonous, but it is not a big problem. As long as the author feels comfortable writing it.

If death is not restrained by the thunder element, there is no such thing as attribute restraint in the Panlong world. The light element and the dark element are both competing for mysteries.

I feel that the main character's skills are a bit small, with only Series 2's soul mutating. I feel that it would be more normal to write Series 3, not supermodel, but not weak either.

Brother... Please give me an accurate answer... Do you want to write it or not? Don't put it off... When you want to write it, when will there be an update? Let me know when it comes. If you really don't want to write it, let me know. It will be deleted from the bookshelf. Don't waste everyone's feelings here, okay?

The main character is just a loser and doesn't have the spirit of a strong man.

Why have you been so smart lately? Since you don't want the main godhead, you still hang out with the Beirut guys. Isn't that sick?

Book friends who come in should not be dissuaded by the previous chapters. I personally feel that it is still very good after entering the underworld. I hope the author will work hard.