My Cyberpunk Simulator

The setting was pretty good at the beginning, but unfortunately the problems started to show up later when the setting was almost exhausted. First of all, the characterization is too monotonous, and the characters are always the same: the protagonist, the female character, other supporting characters, the villain, and the big villain. The author did not establish the characters, which is a shame. Secondly, the description of the characters is too stiff, the character's movements are not coherent, and the description of the expression is simply a disaster, there are only various "laughing, laughing" and "angry and angry" (the protagonist's face can freeze with a smile after one chapter) Then there is the problem of procrastination. If it can be explained clearly in one sentence, the characters have to explain each other in two paragraphs. This is not explaining the setting, but writing a running account. The last is the most troublesome plot problem. There are too many flaws, so let's pick one or two. When the protagonist recruits David's mother, the author spent a lot of ink describing the restaurant environment and Gloria (there are too many things to complain about here), but there are no scenes of her in the follow-up. There are only bland descriptions such as "she is on the first floor of the base, very serious." There are no such prominent shots in the subsequent plot, so we can completely downplay this person and have no impact on the development of the plot. There is also the rescue of the blond secretary. The villain knows that a very powerful thief has entered the house and can turn off all his turrets and open hidden doors. This proves that this house has long been unsafe and he has been targeted. In this case, is it a bit contrary to common sense that a high-rise person who can buy the entire building does not choose to move to another house... I originally thought there would be some small twists (for example, adding some surprises, setting up a trap and being cracked by the protagonist, etc.), But it turned out to be unexpected. (The above is purely a personal opinion, please don't comment if you don't like it~)

The current progress is Chapter 92, which is just a few chapters after it was released. So I just express my current personal feelings. First of all, there is the protagonist. The protagonist's life on Twist Street and the real life before the simulation are one of the origins of the behavior, but the author briefly mentions these two plots. Therefore, many of the protagonist's actions and choices made me feel inexplicable. Where does the protagonist's anger come from? Is it the noble character of the young master? Then there is Lucy. Judging from the few chapters that have appeared so far, the author hopes that the protagonist and Lucy will have a good relationship. Only David among the Edgewalkers knows about the desire to go to the moon. The author wrote this plot of giving away the travel ticket by accident. I can't say, although it is not harmful, but I feel sick to my stomach when I think about the possible removal of the CP or the gift of a daughter. There is more than one choice to build a relationship with Lucy, and the author chose the simplest and easiest way to retaliate. In the end, the protagonist's journey was too easy. I can't say it's a bad impression, but it's really not a good one. He beat the villain with great principles all the way, and the sword was as bright as the moon. He was indeed handsome, saving lives and healing the wounded, and he was also very handsome. But I have already watched Cyberpunk, and of course I didn't watch it for this. The author said that he has a weak heart. I didn't want to criticize anything, so I tried to be as tactful as possible. The logic may be confusing, so just think that my language skills are relatively weak.

Well, I've seen about 200 pictures, and my impression is acceptable. Although the male protagonist smells like a eunuch, that's it. You can't force this environment now... From what I've seen, it's okay. It's really good to have the blessing of Wen Qingfeng in the details of the environment. However, it is also because of this that the male protagonist is average in character and has a... Pull relationship with everyone. The writing is heart-to-heart, but he will always be troubled by various reasons (maybe this is the pain of predicting the plot). Then there is the issue of the female protagonist. It is not a problem for fans to split the cp. The trajectory of fate has been changed. Then whether it is possible for the male protagonist of the original work to fall in love with another person (just a random possibility), just treat it as a parallel world. If you feel unhappy, then it depends on the fan. In my opinion, the greatest value of fan fiction is to make up for shortcomings. It is enough to fill up the grievances. If you want to eat the candy of the original work, you have to eat the candy of the original work. If you don't eat the knife of the original work, then don't always think about eating the candy of the original work. Because the candies in the original work are set off by the knife. Without the knife in the original work, the candies in the original work will not be sweet enough and interesting. Finally, if there is no female protagonist in this book, the current male protagonist (about 200 chapters) is a eunuch. It is not like he had scruples before because he did not have the capital to establish a foothold. It will be calculated in the future. Anyway, this large plot can be regarded as problematic.

The writing is really good. Part of the plot will make your heart beat faster, especially the part about blowing up the Arasaka factory and kidnapping Moore Technology executives. The author gives you a lot of support

The writing is really good, everyone has flesh and blood, the story is very immersive and enjoyable, and the whole process is non-toxic. I just beg the author to update it soon!

Although I watched the plot yesterday and forgot about it today, it feels very good. Keep it up. It's good enough.

I advise you to write less about Lucy and David. No matter how you write, some people will be dissatisfied. Your role as a matchmaker will directly reduce the number of readers by half.

In my opinion, 2077 is a martial arts movie of the cyber era: the corporate behemoths brutally exploit (the imperial court is tyrannical and the people are miserable), the protagonist blows up the Arasaka Tower and kills the capitalists (the knight burns the imperial court and kills the dog emperor in anger to eliminate harm for the people) However, the game is only picture 1 Le 🙄, the real cyber future is very cruel: in a cyber world with extremely advanced technology, no matter how powerful an individual soldier is, he cannot change the situation. Even someone as powerful as V will be powerless in the end. Arasaka Tower can be rebuilt countless times, but there is only one as awesome as V. Arasaka Tower exploded, but gangs were still rampant in Night City. The capitalists were superior, and the poor were exploited to death like consumables. Even though Night City had changed, it seemed that it had not changed. No matter how strong the individual soldiers were, they were helpless in the face of mechanization and nuclear weapons. The path the protagonist is taking now feels like an enhanced and upgraded version of v. It feels like the protagonist might as well use the correct usage of the simulator: constantly restart and learn various advanced technologies to create a nearly almighty super bucket number. Create a force, unite and control AI (AI should be the strongest variable), and finally simulate and push 2077 again to achieve a perfect ending. The loot can be brought to reality. The perfect ending of the Bucket has no shortage of equipment. The protagonist can basically change reality 🙂

It's as smelly and long as a little old lady's footband. It's really discouraging to watch. Just like the protagonist of the story speaks a line, the narration must be ten lines, which is very dramatic. Your scavenger alone is almost 30 chapters, and the climax of the killing part is also the same. You added too many meaningless descriptors. The climax was watered down by your excellent and detailed description. It is more uncomfortable to watch than constipation. On the plus side, I can only say that the plot is good. Although there is a sense of déjà vu that forces the protagonist to forget the plot. The writing is more compact. Don't break things that can be said in one sentence into 10 sentences. Even if you try to cheat on the word count, you will end up losing more than you gain.

David is not a legend at all, so don't talk about the wine in the next life. As long as you go in the next life, you can still keep the wine even if you are not a legend. Doesn't Jack also have wine in the next life, but Jack didn't hook the thread of the Night City legend at that time. Johnny is a legend who rebelled against the company, everyone knows it, and some people can still talk about it for more than 40 years. The others are people like Spider Murphy and Morgan Blackhand who report on their force and hacking abilities. David can only be regarded as a mercenary who has just established himself in the next life. There are too many in Night City.

Most of the people who dismantled the original protagonist's CP were unable to write an original heroine that was outstanding enough. Don't people read fanfiction to make up for their regrets and fill in those imperfections?

Those who shout for not dismantling CP and pure love for God of War. Don't use the ending of the main world of the original novel to judge whether the parallel world is good or not? The time points are different. The entry point of the novel is when David Lucey didn't know each other, so it means that in this parallel universe, they are not CP at all, and they don't know where the CP comes from? So where does the CP come from? And where does the NTR come from? Just like the parallel universes of Marvel and DC, Spider-Man in the Zombie Universe eats Aunt May and the others, but does it affect the main universe? Someone said Spider-Man, right? The parallel Gwen Spider-Man is with Black Spider in the parallel universe. Did anyone say anything? Has it affected the main universe or other universes? If you feel bad, then go find a parallel world where David and Lucy are together. Why are you shouting about a parallel world?

There are too few authors, and you have written too little. If the foreigner next door sees it, he will think that I have no traffic to read the novel. This little bit is enough‌​​​‌‌‌‌‌​‌​‌​​​​‌​‌​​Who will read it, here is another chapter! One chapter per person! Today, if you want to read novels, I will cover all the traffic.

I'm just confused. It's stated in the first few chapters that it's a simulator, but someone still wants to dismantle the CP and create a harem? Have a harem in the simulator and then quit the simulation and ignore it? Isn't this the same as a certain hydrogen protagonist who resurrects his lover? If you want to control it, you will have to add a few more lines, and the main line will definitely not be well written by then. It is best not to accept the original person who participated in the simulation. If you accept it, you will exit the simulation and find a way to get back the cp setting. If you don't get it back, the book will be bad. It would be better to write about family affection. After all, my sister really cares about the protagonist. (I won't watch the female v and river lines either)

Author, just tell me whether you will accept Lucy or not? To put it simply, when I read the fanfic, I just want to see the male protagonist have more beautiful girls, otherwise I might as well read the original work.

The protagonist's personality is really weird, he's like a spirited guy who's a bitch

In the character, Lucy is the heroine. In the comments, the original cp of Lucy is not removed. What does the author think? Is Lucy the heroine?

Why does the protagonist always like to belittle himself and say that I am not worthy? It's really embarrassing to watch. It doesn't matter that I am a middle school student and a literary youth. I have endured it and almost collapsed at this point.

When I read the third chapter, I knew it was over. Forget it without the golden three chapters. The first two were okay. It was the first time I saw him feeding Shi in the third chapter. Tell me, why is the protagonist who is wearing a top-notch prosthetic body and can be killed by a scavenger not a stupid pig? If your plot isn't a battle-suppressing one, what is it? If you don't want the protagonist to grow too fast, then don't "wear a top-notch prosthetic body" in the second simulation😅

Wouldn't it be better to directly travel to the cyberpunk world? After reading a few chapters, you have to enter the simulated cyberpunk world through a simulator. After looking through the table of contents, it seems that I have been in this simulated world, so why not delete the previous part of the real world? Being in the virtual world all the time will cause readers to have a sense of emptiness. The protagonist's gains do not really fall into his pocket, which affects the sense of immersion.

Type 3 versus Type 2 in the Scavenger still has 10 reactions. It took so long. A Scavenger only dealt with thirty chapters. No, let me ask you, the author, what do you think? You have also played the game, right? Do you know how big the direct difference between Type 3 and Type 2 is? Even his reaction of 20 is enough.

It's a good subject matter, and the ideas are good, but it's too fragmented. How could a martial arts novel like this appear in cyberpunk? Was the author a martial artist before?

This book actually had the potential to take up the banner of cyber fandom, but it had too many shortcomings, and then it fell apart. First of all, you don't have a prosthetic body installed at the beginning, just use a knife to attack someone with a gun. Even if your reaction is high, it is just a high human attribute. After installing a prosthetic body, you will be stronger. But in Night City, even the gangsters are all wearing rubbish prosthetics, and they are not pure human beings. You can at most be a little faster than them, it is just a hard copy. Secondly, I spent 50,000 gold to hire a team, but only the hacker was of some use. They provided a communication and electronic door, read the chip, and then it was gone. It's over, and I spent another 80,000 to hire this team. It's okay to be rich, and it's okay to be generous, but the silly son of a landlord's family is a bit too much. He has money to burn, right? He cares more about combat experience, reputation, and connections, and he doesn't fight much. Moreover, if the protagonist is like this, others will only think that he is a rich and gentle weirdo. Is this considered reputation? If you have connections, you can do almost anything in Night City if you have money. Finally, I feel that the protagonist is too inconsistent with Night City and has too much sense of justice. The protagonist is not required to become evil, but to be non-evil. A righteous protagonist always feels that he does not belong to Night City.

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When I saw Mann's team, I sensed the extreme danger and couldn't hold back. The protagonist took out a prosthetic body and could buy the lives of their entire team.

A hammer in the east and a stick in the west. What the hell are they written in? The ink is terrible. The most disgusting thing is that they keep emphasizing that the protagonist is young, a teenager or something. He is obviously an adult with a soul in his 20s before time travel.

The male protagonist of the Japanese manga Asashi wanders into cyberpunk. It's really disgusting to write about the cyber world in Japan. The meaning is unclear.

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The most popular characters in Wei Sa are only a few supporting characters, while the main character is so low in popularity

I stayed up late and finished all 10 episodes of Edgewalker. I want to find a novel to calm my mood. I want to see David and Lucy go to the moon together. Can I open the cp for this book? Are there any fics you recommend?