My Cyberpunk Simulator

I advise you to write less about Lucy and David. No matter how you write it, people will be dissatisfied. If you play the matchmaker, you'll lose half your readers.

In my opinion, 2077 is a martial arts film set in the cyberpunk era: a behemoth of a corporation cruelly exploits its people (while the tyrannical government makes life unbearable for the people), and the protagonist blows up the Abandoned Tower and kills the capitalists (a chivalrous hero burns down the imperial court and kills the corrupt emperor to rid the people of evil).

It's as long and tedious as an old woman's foot binding cloth, so long it's really off-putting. It's like the protagonist says one line, and the narrator rambles on for ten, which is incredibly distracting. And this "Single Cleaner" is almost 30 chapters long! The climax, the killing scene, is the same—you added way too many meaningless descriptive words!

David isn't even a legend, okay? And don't bring up the "Alcohol of the Afterlife." In the Afterlife, even if you're not a legend, you can still leave behind alcohol just by going there. Jack also had alcohol in the Afterlife, but back then, he hadn't gotten involved with any Night City legends. Johnny is a well-known rebel against the Corporation, a legend still talked about after 40 years.

Most of those who break up the original couple are those who lack the ability to write a compelling original female lead. Don't people read fanfiction to fill in gaps in their reading and compensate for imperfections?

Those who shout "no breaking up couples" and "pure love god" (referring to characters from the original main universe), please don't use the ending and character relationships of the original work's main universe to judge fanfiction parallel universes, okay? The timelines are different.

I'm baffled. The first few chapters clearly state it's a simulator, yet some people still want to break up couples and create a harem? Building a harem in the simulator and then abandoning it after exiting? Isn't that just like that protagonist who resurrects his lover? If they're going to manage it, they'll have to add several more storylines, which will definitely affect the main plot.

There are too few authors! You haven't written enough! If the foreigners next door see this, they'll think I don't have enough data to read novels. Who would read this little bit? Give me another chapter! One chapter per person! I'll cover all the data for everyone reading novels today.

Author, just tell me, are you going to accept Lucy or not? To put it simply, I read fanfiction because I want to see the male lead sleep with a few more pretty girls; otherwise, I'd rather read the original work.

The main character's personality is really bizarre; he's like a frivolous young hoodlum.