
Perfect World: Ten Crowns to Become the King
完美世界之十冠成王
- Status
- Completed
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- 1.9M Words
- Genre
- Eastern Fantasy
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Eastern Xuanhuan
- Updated
- 10mo ago
- Source
- Qidian
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Some suggestions
1. The image of the protagonist is not three-dimensional enough. Take the most successful fan of Perfect World, Double Undercover, as an example. I remember that the protagonist seems to be wearing a white robe, which matches his own time and space very well, so it is easy to imagine in the mind. I think the protagonist of this book is the Emperor after all. Many people read the Zhetian and Perfect World fanfics to see if the character is high enough and cool enough. The bishop's current external image is basically the same as in the original work. If the description is changed to someone wearing a black gold robe with a dragon pattern, and some more visual changes are made, the character's external image will be established. By focusing on describing some of the oppression in the aura, the character will also be established. 2. The description of a good perfect fan Chen Dong's style must account for a high enough proportion. I think the term "ex master" is quite inappropriate. It is more suitable to describe it as a peerless genius, monster, tyrant or other giant. 3. Because the protagonist is an indigenous non-traveler, if the plot of the original novel is followed, it will be at a huge disadvantage compared to a novel in which the protagonist is a time traveler. After all, they are all indigenous and most of the plots are original. So what is the difference from the original? Therefore, I suggest that if it is an event in the original work, you should not delay it too long. Unless it is a very exciting plot, such as the overpass battle between Nine Heavens and Ten Earths and a foreign land, you can slow down when writing some self-created plots. After all, the emperor does not appear too often in the original work.
No, how could the Emperor, with such a powerful background, still be made things difficult for him at the Imperial Pass? Aren't you just pretending to be cool in this city? Why is this fantasy? It's not fucking worth the money to renew.
Yuanhai, Shengong, Tianji, Tenglong
In the later stages of writing, the author gradually hid the World Tree. Why? It's just that the author couldn't think of what the protagonist said at the beginning, "On the basis of the ancient immortal method, find a way to explore the small universe of the human body", so he could only reproduce it with perfection in mind. Author, please see for yourself, what are the differences between these four secret realms and the original work? It's just a change of name. Oh, no, the magical power was changed from the original five internal organs to the five internal organs plus one pair of eyes. Everything else remains unchanged. Author, have you forgotten that when you first started writing about the Secret Realm of the Origin Sea, there was a sapling of the World Tree in the secret realm? As a result, what use is he now? It didn't show any use at all. I guess the author, the fifth secret realm, will change the name of Sendai, such as Shentai or Soul Platform? In fact, in this novel, the name of the emperor is replaced by Huang, which is basically the same as in Perfect. What I want to read is the fanfic, not the original work.
It's a waste of money. With the same plot as the original work, it's better to watch the original work.
Diguan is being made difficult for me, but I just give in. The more I write, the more rubbish I get. It's a waste of my money.
Create your own training system, completely copy No. 10, Write a chicken
The character of the Ten Crown Champion.
The image and character of the Ten-Crown Emperor are not distinctive enough. Judging from the original work, he should be a relatively taciturn and domineering but extremely reliable person. But I didn't see this in the article. Did you confuse him with No. 10? I think No. 10 May behave like you did before, which is a bit inconsistent with the emperor's character.
The emperor with the title of "Ten Crowns" is so domineering. It would be very funny to come up with such a bad name.
After reading it, I thought it would be better to read the original work. Pretending to be 13 is so awkward, and it also gives me the feeling of being too high and too low. I can't compete passionately with my peers. It's probably because I'm cheating. I'm a little higher than my peers. You can't compete with the older generation because your cultivation level is not enough. In the early stage, the plot of the original work was basically unchanged. After seeing No. 10 Being sent to a foreign land, I couldn't stand it anymore. I don't know what happens next.
It's almost time to reach the Supreme Mirror and should go to other worlds to develop.
When Shi Hao from the Supreme Mirror left for the Emperor's Fall era, he came back as a quasi-immortal king. He had actually practiced for half a million years longer than anyone else. Unless he is captured by the soul trapped in the dark prison, it is impossible to catch up with No. 10. The next realm requires time. Immortal kings of hundreds of thousands or tens of thousands of years have all trained in the dark cage. If you don't save time, your combat power will collapse.
I'm speechless. The Immortal Sutra is innate and is derived from the world itself, not created by humans at all.
Man, you are one of the few people I've seen who can write perfect fan fiction and still have such bad grades.
It feels like the guy next door has better results than you in writing the failed Diablo. Shouldn't you think more carefully about your own plot? 😥
The protagonist of this book, the Immortal Queen, is not as powerful as the Ten Crowns King in the original work. The performance of the Ten Crowns King in the original work in the final battle is definitely at the level of a giant. The Ten Crowns King in the original work is not a worldly fairy, nor does he create any magic.
I feel like the domineering spirit of the Ten-Crown King is not captured in detail.
This type of character is relatively difficult to write. You can use An Lan as a template. Let's not mention the others, but you must be able to show off.
There are only two female protagonists, and one of them is original and not very attractive. At least the witch must be taken away, and Shi Hao won't do it.
I feel that the author's Ten-Crown King didn't have any characteristics, and is almost the same as the original Ten-Crown King. It is said that the Ten-Crown King has changed his life. With the accumulation of ten lives, he should have cultivated the immortal energy faster than Shi Hao, and he was stronger than Shi Hao. As a result, he was caught up with the second immortal energy in the ancient immortality. As well as cultivating immortal energy, one should have a rough idea of the path to be taken in the future. For example, Shi Hao's three thousand ways of burning the body to cultivate immortal energy can tell the way. The inner path of the human body and the universe can be compared with the outer avenue, so that the body is not affected by the external environment. The path of the Ten-Crown King should have been initially based on the World Tree and the True Dragon Art. As a result, the immortal energy cultivated was very ordinary. The World Tree did not play its due role and was only used as a weapon to hit people.
Oh, I still gave up. It's really unpleasant to read your book.
What the hell, I can't describe the late emperor's prestige at all. Who among you has ever seen the late emperor sweep through many stars?
All ordered, don't let me down, author
Isn't Shi Hao coming back to life yet? It's almost time to push into foreign lands and set out to conquer the world sea.
Why hasn't Shi Hao been resurrected yet?
Update it quickly😡😡😡😡
The author will update soon The author's soul is back... 𓀃𓀅𓀇𓀋𓀌 The soul is back... Driving a long whip and setting up six bridles.... 𓀌𓀎𓀠𓀤𓀫 The soul is back... Climbing over the mountains and singing... Returning... The soul is returning... 𓀋𓀌𓀎𓀙𓀠 the soul is coming back... Singing high and triumphant... We are all in the same robe... 𓀋𓀠𓀤𓀥𓀫 soul Come back... The soul comes back At the first watch, the flaws are revealed in the hair, and the ridicule is like a tide; At the second watch, the sullen expression fades a little, and the viewers begin to turn their ears; At the third watch, the slight reputation sprouts, The alliance of the future is hidden; At the fifth watch, the righteous men will rush to arms, and the debates will continue; At the tenth watch, the Confucian scholars will revitalize the church, and the chants will fill the streets; Sigh! Nine times out of a hundred, the disadvantage lies in the delay; only by waving the keys like rain can the crowd's beaks be stopped. May your ink be as long as the long river, so that the starry night will be flawless and readers will forget to eat.
The author will update soon The author's soul is back... 𓀃𓀅𓀇𓀋𓀌 The soul is back... Driving a long whip and setting up six bridles.... 𓀌𓀎𓀠𓀤𓀫 The soul is back... Climbing over the mountains and singing... Returning... The soul is returning... 𓀋𓀌𓀎𓀙𓀠 the soul is coming back... Singing high and triumphant... We are all in the same robe... 𓀋𓀠𓀤𓀥𓀫 soul Come back... The soul comes back At the first watch, the flaws are revealed in the hair, and the ridicule is like a tide; At the second watch, the sullen expression fades a little, and the viewers begin to turn their ears; At the third watch, the slight reputation sprouts, The alliance of the future is hidden; At the fifth watch, the righteous men will rush to arms, and the debates will continue; At the tenth watch, the Confucian scholars will revitalize the church, and the chants will fill the streets; Sigh! Nine times out of a hundred, the disadvantage lies in the delay; only by waving the keys like rain can the crowd's beaks be stopped. May your ink be as long as the long river, so that the starry night will be flawless and readers will forget to eat.
Not enough
When will there be an update?
Please update
Can it be sent earlier? It's really slow to send, so it has to be sent at night?