I Am a Small Stone Covering the Sky

There are a lot of failures. The greater the hope, the greater the disappointment. Why don't you look like a child when you drink the spring water of life in the wasteland? Why?

Brothers, I want to see how many people read this book and see how many of us there are. If you see it, please give me a deduction.

Let's talk about it! Based on the identity and configuration of the protagonist, I wouldn't think it's outrageous even if you write him as the Saint Qian Zhundi, the Great Holy Hammer Supreme. I would just feel that he is worthy of being the son of Huangtian Emperor. That's awesome!

The son of an Immortal Emperor, who is an Immortal King himself, why do all the opportunities come to Ye Fan?

Why are the writings becoming more and more white? This is not an urban novel, this is a fantasy novel, more rigorous, and the protagonist takes too much care of Ye Fan. He has to take Ye Fan with him for everything. I just saw the protagonist go to the ancient forbidden land for the second time, and the desolate tower actually stopped fighting? I'm still afraid that both sides will lose. I wonder if the Emperor-killing War Spear is a living thing? Don't say unnecessary things. What is Huangta's identity? What is the protagonist's identity? Can a ruthless person be worthy of an emperor? The author did not correct the identity of the protagonist, and it seems that the protagonist must be cautious in everything he does. The protagonist is not like Ye Fan, who has no backstage (even if Ye Fan has one, he doesn't know it). He still has to act like a junior when facing the Qing Emperor 😥😥😥 The protagonist can walk sideways in this world now, okay~_~, can he beat the forbidden land of Huangta and Emperor-killing Spear? Has the Great Emperor been able to defeat him? You can just push across the forbidden area.

Not like the Immortal Emperor, not even like the Great Emperor

I have always thought that the Great Emperor of Zhetian was created by fighting. His passion and invincible belief along with sadness run through the entire Zhetian. There is Emperor Ye Tian who can defeat all enemies in the world, there is a ruthless man with eternal talents, there is Wu Shi who is known as the end of the Tao, there is the indomitable Luan Gu, there is the miserable Emperor Void, and the Holy Sun Emperor who has sacrificed everything for the human race... Those emperors are so passionate, and each has his own personality charm. In just a few strokes, the pride and sorrow of a generation of emperors are all told one by one. And what about the protagonist? Forgive me for not being able to represent you, but what is Zhetian fighting for? It's fate, it's the tragedy of one emperor's success and the death of thousands of bones. However, the author did not show the pride of the protagonist as the son of Emperor Huangtian, let alone his predecessor as the Immortal King. Even the author has repeatedly emphasized that he does not rely on external objects, so he has been forcibly weakening it. I can even agree to being coerced into looking into the sea of ​​suffering, please. You have a trump card, just do it when it's your turn! If you are always worried about this and that, then why not stop fighting! To be honest, this protagonist looks very useless. This is just my reflection. Goodbye, I wish you write better and better.

To be honest, Huang's son should be Long Aotian. He was born with unrivaled talent and was accompanied by an imperial weapon and unparalleled resources. How can I say that I can't kill a supreme sacrifice genius to deserve such a start when I debut? However, I read in the comment section that it was a bitter experience to be investigated. This is equivalent to me pressing your head and watching your wife change clothes. How do you think the contrast between before and after makes people appreciate it? Zhetian pays attention to an invincible heart, and I am invincible. The world is centered on me, and everything revolves for me. In the beginning, Long Aotian just wrote the flavor of the break-up-of-engagement style. The starting point of the theme is only very strong. Brother, please refer to the original work more and write with character. You can expect to become a great god with strong character

The emotional line is inexplicable, a saint is directly tied up, and then Stockholm syndrome occurs and she falls in love with the protagonist? What kind of saint is this? Even a passerby can carry it more clearly than this saint. Moreover, why is the main character, a CEO of a company, written and behaved like a ten-year-old child, innocent and childish? Then he starts talking to the Qing Emperor and the Ruthless Emperor to talk about terms and conditions for friendship, holding the Desolate Tower and the Immortal Emperor's War Spear, and then suddenly he can't beat the Saintess and Saint Child level characters in the next second. Isn't this just that he can't beat a three-year-old child with a gun? It makes people think it's a big deal, but the protagonist is quite useless. In short, the imagination is quite novel among Zhetian fans. After all, many people who write about Zhetian are like the reborn Emperor Beidi, but this emmm... Both the writing style and the description are all Long Aotian-style short stories. New readers can read it, and old bookworms should run away.

The son of the Immortal Emperor is still like this. Anyone can step on them. Are those two Immortal Dao weapons just for display? No one can beat them. They are slipping away.

In the original work, the Immortal Emperor is the enemy of Ye Fan, so the protagonist of the novel also has to find trouble with him.

If he really were the son of Emperor Huangtian, he would have immortal weapons lying around at home, and the immortal scriptures would be delivered to his door automatically. If that person dared to go against him, he would be killed by Tiandao before he could take action. After all, Emperor Huangtian was equivalent to the Lord of the world. Would he dare to please Tiandao, his son? The son of Emperor Huangtian written by this author is simply too bragging. Not only is Heavenly Dao ignoring him, he is stepped on by others even when he goes out. It feels like Heavenly Dao is targeting him. Moreover, you are also the reincarnation of the Immortal King, but in the end, you can't even defeat someone in the same realm. Your predecessor, the Immortal King, has practiced in vain. You might as well find a piece of tofu and kill him.

The finale of the Holy Ruins will be rewritten. The Red-Haired Emperor finally suppressed the unknown and lived out his second life 🤓

You don't actually need to write the author. The protagonist is the son of Emperor Huangtian. Even if you write about a random person and add a little reason, this book will be perfect, the son of Emperor Huangtian. This is a bug.

This talent bears the name of the son of Emperor Huangtian, and is written directly according to the original work with slight changes. It can't even withstand a move from a bullshit prince, and it also hurts people. The resources in Ye Hei's original work are not as good as yours. Are there really no guardians left? The methods of cultivation are from two different eras!

The author didn't know how to trick the protagonist, so he used the Qing Emperor trick, which made him hide; he used the Desolate Tower trick, which had a lot of power but basically didn't take any action; he used the War Spear trick, which could suppress the Qing Emperor when he was strong, but couldn't even defeat Fluttering Light when he was weak. The author wanted to write a lot of them in a more enjoyable way, but then he found that it was too disruptive to the balance and banned it. There was no Bodhi Seed by Ye Fan, which is practical for human desire. If you don't use it now, in the dark and turbulent time later, the protagonist will be awesome but won't need to hang up. Using hang up will make the protagonist useless. Using hang up but not instant will make the protagonist even more disgusting. The protagonist's most practical skill is the Kunpeng Technique, but the author's combat scenes need to be improved. It is recommended to read more of the original work and other fans. Most of the Zhetian fanatics who have written well use combat power, which can be used at any time. As for artifacts, they will at most get an imperial weapon, and it is basically to defend against other imperial weapons. This book is too open, and the quasi-immortal emperor weapon appears in Zhetian, which is really difficult to write. If it is set too high at the beginning, it will be difficult to connect later.

If I were Xiao Shitou, I would dare to tie Heihuang with a rope and go to the restricted area to walk the dog! ! ! There is a quasi-immortal emperor spear, a desolate tower, the status of an emperor's son, and fear of hair!

It looks really disgusting! Looking for that innate Tao fetus is not as good as looking for Xia Jiuyou. At least Xia Jiuyou is very charming and has a high level of cultivation for such a young age. Also, the part about looking for the Green Dragon King to exchange for the holy body felt so awkward! It's been a long time since the conversation between Huangta and Qingdi! The dialogue between the protagonist and them! It looks so frivolous! There is no trace of the dignity of a strong man. Don't think this is a trivial matter, often a small detail can persuade a lot of people! In addition to these, there are many questions! To be honest, what you wrote is generally fine, but some of the details are really bad, which is very discouraging!

After a rough reading, the ideas are good and the creativity is there. However, the character of the protagonist is not like that of Emperor Huangtian's son. Emperor Huangtian's son should be indomitable, and his physique and opportunities are not as important as his clear mind and character. The description of the character of mind is not up to par. Having fragments of past life memories means you are no longer a mortal. For practice, social interaction, and fighting, you have to clarify your own path. I feel that the protagonist is a bit muddled, even soy sauce, without his own characteristics.

I feel that Little Stone does not have Shi Hao's wit and bravery as a child, his eccentric true temperament with a diamond in his mouth, I have the hammer in my hand, everything is mine, Shi Hao's tenacity, Shi Hao's survival in adversity, blood stations all the way, risking life and death for the common people, Indomitable, fearless, heroic, etc., These are not seen in Xiao Shitou. The Xiao Shitou in this book is strict and lacks experience in life and death. It is too far away from Shi Hao's growth experience, and it is not as good as Ye Fan and Chu Feng.

After the completion of the trilogy, what most people want to see is Shi Hao's battle in the sky, and the trio's experience after entering the fairyland. I have to say that the author has a very good idea. The role of Little Stone as the protagonist and the time when the story begins can really interest readers of both books. But there are some things I still want to say. There are two most difficult things to deal with in fan works. One is to continue to use the words of the original protagonist and how to face the tragedy in the original work after knowing the plot well. The little stone in the book avoids this problem very well. The second is the interaction between the new protagonist and the original protagonist. I don't think anyone would want to watch a similar growth trajectory to Ye Fan's again, but if it's completely original, how can it be considered a fan? So far, Ye Fan's appearance rate is a bit low, but this is not a big problem. However, I think that the upgrade progress of the protagonist can easily reach a bottleneck, because it is easy for the author to grow along the way according to the plot of the original work. The first and most important thing about online novels is to be enjoyable. The author should come up with something from time to time to stimulate readers' interest and maintain creative inspiration. For example, the interaction with the Qing Emperor of Huangta, and the dream of returning to the ancient times, it seems quite refreshing. Well, actually what I want to see most is the plot after entering the fairyland. After all, these magnificent and touching scenes are not written in the original work.

The small reward is 1,000, keep it up, and Xiao Shitou is not only the son of the Immortal Emperor, he is also the reincarnation of the ultimate Immortal King, and he has the blood of the Celestial Race. His early talent performance is definitely better than that of ordinary emperors, and may even be stronger than the Emperor Wushi before he became a Taoist.

Xiao Shitou was definitely worthy of being an Immortal Emperor. After his resurrection, he was beheaded by the First Ancestor himself.

I was shocked at the ending of Holy Ruins. I just want the fanfic to not be unfinished. I will keep following it even if it doesn't get published.

Book friends, this is my first time writing a book. If there is anything I didn't write well, please feel free to correct me in the comment area. If you think the writing is good, give me all your recommendation votes. If you can share it, I won't refuse.

The author may have forgotten that Wang Teng was killed earlier because he used the former word secret to predict that a small stone would be destroyed by cause and effect. There will actually be Ye Fan beating Wang Teng.

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Shi Hao's relatives and friends have long been resurrected by Shi Hao using the method of reflection.

I gank the author offline and ask him to update quickly!

The author doesn't want eunuchs, he just hit 1500 points