Hunter: My Telekinesis Ability Is the Zanpakutō

Generally speaking, you don't want to read Zanpakutō if you see multiples of them. You would rather see the author's brainstorming about one Zanpakutō. To be honest, multiple Zanpakutō were almost completely written down a few years ago, but with the addition of Nen ability, I can look forward to it. I hope the author will not be anxious and polish his work seriously.

The title of this book should be changed. It should be called Invincible Me Pretending to Be Pretentious in the Hunter World. What is the use of your Zanpakutō ability? ? Is the Yan Ling Pill of the swastika just a thunderbolt? ? The initial solution is to give you lightning-like speed? Even if the original work did not describe the power of Enreimaru Shikai, can you write about a familiar Zanpakutō? Look at the three knives you chose. They are all knives that barely appear in the original work. Before the Thousand-Year Blood Battle of Yan Ling Wan, he just appeared and put a lot of people in the sea. He was instantly killed by a family. No one knew what Shijie was used for. The Swastika Jie Thousand-Year Blood Battle appeared all of a sudden, and the usage was not what you described here, so except for the way of appearance, his ability basically depends on editing, and your editing is also very poor. The five-star head itself is useless, and it was originally useless. The same goes for Hongji. If you don't know about Swastika, Shijie's specific abilities have not been explained by the store manager. Apart from putting up a shield, he basically doesn't know any other abilities. As for the ability of swastika, I don't think your writing and creative abilities can be well controlled. I don't know if you gave up those Zanpakutos whose abilities are already very clear in order to highlight your creative ability and write something that no one has seen. But after reading almost 300 chapters, I can only say that your abilities are simply not possible. Not to mention your original Zanpakutō abilities, your control of the plot is also very poor. The plot should not advance as fast as it should, but not as fast as it should. Furthermore, the protagonist's strengthening makes no sense, the strengthening mechanism is inexplicable, and the upgrade of the Zanpakutō is also very outrageous. The protagonist's Zanpakutō will gain experience points as long as it kills monsters, and it can be upgraded. It's okay, but it's nonsense if you can swastika your LV3. Besides, how long did it take for him to awaken his ability and kill the ant king alone? He didn't experience any life-and-death battles. He was always in a crushing battle. He upgraded his Zanpakutō and improved his telekinesis ability. It didn't take long for him to be able to overwhelm the ant king. Then, if the previous battle includes the description of upgrading the Zanpakutō on the spot and improving the ability to read while alive, then the battle with the Ant King is the most inexplicable. You go from being no match against the guild leader, being unable to defeat even the Swastika Enreiwan, to instantly killing the legion leader, and then defeating the Ant King with overwhelming power. During this period, there was no battle plot, and there was no upgrade of the Zanpakutō. In the final battle, the protagonist defeated Catwoman with one blow as soon as he appeared on the stage, and then died in seconds, leaving two legion commanders. Why? Like I said, the plot should be fast and slow, and the plot should be slow and fast. There are less than 300 chapters in total. How many chapters have you written about the succession battle of the Cajin Kingdom? How many chapters did you use for Greedy Island and Ants? ? If you want to make the Dark Continent chapter the main content, then why not just awaken Ryūren Ruohuo? ? There is no need for a swastika. As long as the swastika is released, the entire hunter world cannot be dealt with. The 6,000-degree high-temperature flames cannot be blocked by any hunter, not even President Nitro. Such a good idea, the abilities of various Zanpakutō VS various telekinesis abilities, direct attack swords, Kidō type swords vs various series of telekinesis abilities, through the improvement of one's own telekinesis ability and the liberation of each Zanpakutō to strengthen the protagonist, hunter exam, fighting arena, and battle brigade , the protagonist's Meteor Street origin, Greedy Island, can be used to improve the protagonist's telekinesis ability, improve the Zanpakutō test, use different swords or the combination of several sword abilities to defeat the enemy, or survive in battles with powerful enemies. In the Ant King Chapter, you can swastika the first Zanpakutō, and then defeat the ant king through swastika. What about you? Just go to the invincible style. Let's say the invincible style is invincible. For example, you are invincible with the Zanpakutō. There are so many invincible abilities in the original book, but you can't be invincible with any description of combat, whether it's a supersonic attack, the 13km distance God Killing Gun, or Senbonzakura's billion blades, let alone the heaven-destroying Ryuken Wakaki. It turned out that it was almost 300 chapters, and there were only three swords that barely appeared in the original work. Except for Yan Lingwan who made it up a little bit, there was almost no description of the rest. Then what is the significance of your ability to be a Zanpakutō? You just said that because the time traveler merged with the soul of the original native, it is not necessary to awaken the special ability.

? ? It's too complicated. Just write about one ability when writing a book. Keep it simple.

Personally, I feel that your writing style is okay, but your characterization is too weak, which doesn't give me a very high impression, and you don't know much about some of the settings of the original work. To be honest, hunters are not suitable for multiple Zanpakutō. Hunters are more inclined to think. A single Zanpakutō is enough.

Author, please don't mess around, Hunter World is 24 hours, not time. If you blindly change the second setting, it will only make readers run away!

There's no need to have too many knives, it's good to have a specialized one

This book is ruined. This kind of book that gives N many abilities at the beginning is basically 100% sure of TJ's life, even if it takes the comic book route and has too many abilities, it will collapse.

With so many abilities, it's better to write a dog protagonist, just a husky. Anyway, it doesn't matter if it's human or not, dogs can do it too 🤭🤭🤭

The ability to read is flawed. With so many Zanpakutos, what is your flaw? There is no perfect reading ability. There are always shortcomings

Did the author write the soul-cutting sword backwards? Mankai can increase spiritual pressure three to five times. You wrote it backwards. In the Thousand-Year Blood War of Bleach, Captain Mankai was held down by the hammer because there was no Mankai to increase spiritual pressure. There was consumption, but it also increased several times. After the consumption, the captain in Bleach could only hold on for about one minute after he was able to increase spiritual pressure. No such setting

It's too slow. There's nothing wrong with it. You don't have to use your brain so much to think about the plot. It's almost ok. It's basically the same as a large amount of food. It's not like a virgin who doesn't give away her daughter.

Is the author a college student? His writing techniques, thinking angle, and starting point are too immature.

To be honest, the plurality of Zanpakutos really affects the reading experience. I don't even want to click on it after reading the introduction.

This thing is called Nian, not Qi. The ones on the body are called spermatophores, not stomata.

The old thief is back again, and the god of death is restarted, so I started writing this, please give me some advice~

It should be based on the setting of the protagonist of One Piece, but the protagonist's Zanpakutō system is already super powerful. The creation of the Swastika Ryuren Wakahui can probably overwhelm the Dark Continent. There is no need to work hard to develop the telekinesis ability. Just upgrade it and it's done. It's quite cool to read as a cool article.

The plot of fighting a gangster for a little girl was really embarrassing and inexplicable, and it immediately put me off.

Starting from the Phantom Troupe, the author went into a misunderstanding and chose the swastika. However, the attraction of hunters is the strange abilities, and those who read this book hope that the different abilities of the Zanpakutō and the collision of Nen abilities

One or two Zanpakutō are enough, and you don't need many more expensive ones. One of the swords owned by Ichito and the captain is used as the main output; one of Aizen's swords is used as an auxiliary. The three of them are also the ceiling of the death profession.

The book has become very popular. There is a reason why I haven't drawn new swords. I wonder if people come to read this type of novel just to see how different abilities can be used?

Meteor Street people cannot directly register for the hunter exam in Meteor Street. It would be much better to delete this sentence than to write it out. Just register on the spot

The essence of the Zanpakutō, which is to kill souls, is not written at all. It only focuses on the ability of the sword.

Let me tell you about my own feelings. I have only read the chapter where the author said he was positive and asked for a day off. Up to this point, it is actually more like a biting sword to develop various abilities. Emmm, in my mind, the Zanpakuto is actually more like a manifestation of the soul. The response of the sword is actually its own response to itself. Then it feels like the protagonist's golden finger, the Zanpakutō, is like a demonic sword that eats people and upgrades. Generally speaking, the writing is smooth, which I personally think is very good. Moreover, the author will send a single chapter to ask for leave when he is angry, and he will only ask for leave for one day. I am also following some other books myself. Recently, these authors have all become popular one after another. The most outrageous one is (yhzh), which has been suspended for more than 20 days, and no single chapter explanations are issued during this period. The single chapter explanations are also for book friends to ask, and to urge the management to ask about the situation. It is indeed a reflection of character.

Finish spreading flowers 🙂

Write more about the neglected Zanpakutō. After all, write about the same Zanpakutō: Hyōrinmaru, Ryukenwaka, and Kyōka Suigetsu. I hope to see Muramasa letting his telekinesis ability or telekinesis beast betray him

Keep writing, it's to my liking

It can be written but the update is too slow 😴

I'll give you a monthly pass, come on 😍

😍Update quickly

I watched it as soon as it was updated, but I still can't get the first place☝️