Time Travel at the Same Time, Starting from the War on Top of Subversion

I don't quite agree with the author's handling of the fight against Xiao Yan's master and disciples in the latest chapters, so I'll express my opinions here. The reward given by the protagonist to Xiao Yan did not match what Yao Lao gave. Yao Lao gave him the inheritance of an 8th-grade peak alchemist (complete inheritance, including the single recipe and alchemy techniques mastered), the secret method of resurrection, and the soul cultivation method of a high level that the Soul Palace and Dan Pagoda have in the entire continent (excluding the Imperial Clan) (the Dan Pagoda championship prize cannot be of a lower level). Author, let's take a look at what you repaid others with? The fifth-grade elixir that was easily refined. The front foot agreed to help find the strange fire, but the back foot gave the new student's fallen heart flame to Canaan College, and took this news as part of the reward? Let them exchange it for the Mang Tian Ruler with a heavy reward? (Is this such a big reward for you in exchange for this information? The audience's eyes are sharp. Everyone knows whether this is immoral or not.) Plus a level of fighting skills such as Yanjue. Talking about the protagonist, even if you beat Han Feng and are kind to others, your kindness is limited. After all, you are not doing it specifically for them. There is kindness, but it is limited. Among the above three items, the most precious inheritance of the eighth-grade peak alchemist is definitely enough (there are not many of this level in the entire continent). The remaining two are your fifth-grade elixir plus the earth-level Nong Yan Jue plus the deceptive strange fire news. They are worth a little more than a resurrection secret method at most, but they are definitely not enough for the soul technique. Only Danta champions can get those things, so you can imagine how much you cherish them. It really fits that sentence: Most of the protagonists in Dou Po fandoms follow Xiao Yan's path, pick up Xiao Yan's girls, and take advantage of Xiao Yan, but their character is not as good as Xiao Yan's.

Damn it, the navy was so idle that it sent a pirate handyman with no bounty to an undersea prison. It would be understandable if the protagonist had eaten a devil fruit. Even if the protagonist is a rare race, it is still acceptable.

Author, just listen to the suggestions and adopt them appropriately. Don't let others affect the rhythm of your original story.

It doesn't mean that good people can't die in a work, nor does it mean that you can't create scumbag villains. This is a normal thing, as long as the villain is killed. As a result, Aaron didn't die, Lao Sha didn't die, and Mingsun didn't die either. Not only did the poison gas Caesar not die, but he also joined the Straw Hats.

I would like to give some advice to the author. Most of the novels in the same genre are popular at the beginning, but they become cold as soon as they are written or the running accounts are left to die. One of the biggest problems is that there are too many worlds in the same world. These authors basically use one world to push a little story and then see how many follow-up readings there are. The world advances at the same time to meet the expectations and follow-up readings of Laila readers. But after writing this for a long time, there may be some plots, settings, and foreshadowing that happened previously that the author himself has forgotten, let alone the readers. In today's fast-paced life, reading novels is originally to pass the time to relieve boredom and relieve stress. What stands out is the word "refreshing". Therefore, it is recommended that the author keep it like this, and finish writing a world later. You can intersperse some peers from the new world, but don't open a new world as a foreshadowing. If you recommend a world and write about it, it will be enjoyable for readers and memorable. Don't be like other novels where you write a little bit about a world and make a lot of layouts, and then you can't see the follow-up of this world for three or four months. It's okay if you keep readers interested for a day, two days and a week. Who will understand if you keep waiting for a long time? The market is so big. Also, what I said is that you updated too few chapters at 10 o'clock, which is really unbearable. Keep it up, this book is the best I have seen in the past three years. Zhutianwen and Invincible Wen are the categories I read more often. In the past two years, I even posted comments about the same outfits, but they have become abstract. Either he writes and the author forgets what he has written, or he takes a pile of dialogue and writes a line of dialogue to explain his own narration for two or three pages and then the next line of dialogue. One chapter is about the same as what you wrote and then he said less than ten sentences. The main theme is not telling a story, but interpreting everything by yourself and feeding it to the readers. The key is to explain it yourself. I think it makes sense, but readers can't read it carefully. If you look closely, it will cause brain congestion. Then dozens of fights were prepared, the thunder was loud and the rain was small, and the meeting was not just a slap in the face, a raised hand, a lightning strike or something, and the person was defeated in seconds. It's not that he won't kill you, but his description is just like raising his hand and slapping him to death. When I read it, I felt like it was finally here, I finally waited for the protagonist to come out, and then I finished writing a few words, and I was left with questions in my mind after reading it. That's it? It's that feeling when you feel a stomachache and go to the toilet, only to squeeze out a fart. At least this one doesn't have these problems so far. I really don't want you to follow the same old path as others. You are not required to be perfect, just maintain the current quality and tell the story you want to tell.

Miscellaneous fish are not qualified to enter the underwater prison. 😴Without tens of millions of bounties, I would be embarrassed to stay in this place

In fact, the article is a bit wrong. It says that starting from the subversion of the war on the top, the plot should start from the war on the top. Even if it doesn't work, the plot should be quickly advanced to the war on the top.

Can you tell us that the average flame you mentioned is 3000℃? Where does this usually come from? Is it from the sun? Or is it that the average flame from your lighter can be 3000℃?

I hate traveling through time at the same time. To be honest, this is really boring.

I haven't watched Demon Slayer, so I only know one thing. When you write, can you, the author, write more about famous worlds? Just cover the niche like Demon Slayer.

Speaking of which, since we plan to use the fight to break the world as the main narrative, I have an idea. There are too many people in the world who can be called alien fires. How about arranging a peer of Ashes or the Destined Immortal? The personality of Chu Huo may not directly grow into a god after it is refined.

The cover is Pirates, and the title of the book is Pirates. After reading Chapter 20, I felt like I was reading a Demon Slayer fanfic.

It's so short, the author's sister-in-law worked really hard

1. If you want to enhance the protagonist's fire ability, can you write about Fairy Tail (the protagonist learns all types of dragon-slaying magic, including fire dragon-slaying magic), Tutor (learns the super-death mode and controls the flames of death), Yu Yu Hakusho (flying) Shadow's Evil Eye, Devil's Flame? The ultimate trick: Evil King's Flame Killing Fist, the most powerful trick: Evil King's Flame Killing Black Dragon Wave), Shana of the Burning Eye (Shana's Sky Tribulation Fire, learn "True Red", "Flying Flame", "Judgment", "Judgment" and other free methods, determined to use the "most Defeat Yuji Sakai with the "Strong Freedom Method"), Blue Exorcist (Rin Okumura inherited the power of the devil Satan, and can emit cyan flames symbolizing the devil Satan when he is unconscious or conscious. At the same time, Okumura Rin also possesses the demon-suppressing sword), K (Shu Fangzun's Attack·Fire Control, the power held by the Red King, can control violent flames), Shaman King (Asakura Hao has "spiritual vision" and holds the spirit of the spirit fire spirit. The witchcraft power of the spirit fire is obtained by sucking the souls of other people.) Wait for these worlds? The fire power of these worlds is super powerful. Which of these worlds can the author write about?

At the same time, traveling through time is not bad, after all, the original work is a cool article, and some authors feel aggrieved when they write the same thing.

The writing of Naruto is very bad. The author's political sense is basically non-existent. Basically, he is still playing the deus ex machina style. It is better not to write. Hurry up and switch the world.

It's disgusting to be able to share your senses anytime and anywhere. What if there is a person who does nothing all day long and deliberately shares his senses to disgust people from other worlds? 🙂

Even if you have typos in your introduction, you are awesome.

Most of the protagonists in One Piece feel a bit awesome when they first enter Impel Down. What grade and at least hundreds of millions or the same level. You need to be baptized to enter the impel city. If you are weak, you are not qualified to enter. If you can't bear the first step, you will die. Without the Devil Fruit, he would have been killed directly.

2 Author, can you let the protagonist get the formula of the drug that turned him into a ghost in the memory of Ghost King Mutsuji Muzan? After that, the protagonist gets the blue Higan flower and creates the finished product of the medicine. After the protagonist takes it, he becomes a monster that surpasses Ghost King Mutsuji Muzan. A perfect creature that is immortal and miserable, it not only has upgraded and enhanced versions of all the abilities of the Ghost King, Onibutsuji Muzan, but also possesses some new abilities and skills that the Ghost King, Onibutsuji Muzan, does not have. The most important thing is to share them with other worlds. After becoming the protagonist of the world, the protagonists of other worlds can use their own blood to make their women and subordinates immortal and powerful, and have some new abilities and skills. At the same time, the protagonist can also control everything including life and death of the person who gives the blood like the blood curse of Oni King Kibutsuji Muzan. Even the information about the protagonist cannot be leaked. After all, in the original plot of Demon Slayer, as long as the ghost tells the information about Muzan, his body will collapse and he will destroy himself, right? Author!

Combining the Barrier Fruit with the Susanoo Eye Technique

The advantage is that there are no poisonous points, the power system seems to have no problems so far, and the writing style is also smooth. But there are a lot of typos, and some of the original plot descriptions are a little too watery.

Have you stopped updating? There has been no movement for three days.

Let's not talk about anything else, let's just talk about the Nine-Tails Incident. With the Nine-Tails' shining blood eye, it's normal not to let Uchiha participate in the war. Who knows if you really come to the war to help or secretly sabotage. There's nothing to complain about in terms of the operations of Konoha's top management.

It's okay, but not enough. 😃👍

At first, it looked like a top-notch battle between Dian Lao 😭

Is there a Shennong? How about this book? I'm planning to get into it recently.

Please help the author read these two messages next time!

Does this book have time travel characters? I really hate that