Immortality Martial Arts: Gou's Proficiency in the Demon World

The settings are good, at least the lifespan settings are better than other books, but the book looks too messy. How can I put it, there is no in-depth description, it looks very confusing and has no feeling. I just woke up and the more I read, the more sleepy I feel.

Let me say a few more words. If you want to promote the plot, you can set a jealous debuff on the ability of the death point. Don't force it like this, otherwise the reading will feel like "what am I doing, why am I getting beaten again"; or you can extend the time and downplay it into ordinary bad luck. Also, why doesn't the protagonist investigate the information about his location wherever he goes? Robustness is not about pretending not to care about anything. Robustness is based on intelligence, strength and a mature escape plan.

I can't understand what the author wrote, it's so confusing

The front is fine, but what's wrong with the back? It's the same old trick of showing off and slapping someone in the face.

There are a few points. Can't understand. Plug-ins can absorb death energy and increase death points. Since the death point can ignore the realm and curse the enemy. Such a big killing move. The protagonist has never taken the initiative to find and absorb the death energy. After reading it for so long, I haven't said that absorbing death energy will shorten your lifespan. The second point is something I don't understand. The protagonist has a good proficiency level. The biggest advantage is that you can become a master even if you are just doing it. Don't take advantage of such a huge advantage. Every time, the plot is forcibly added, and every time the protagonist is written so that every time he thinks about it, trouble will come to him, and the protagonist passively participates in some advanced plots. However, at this time, the protagonist's martial arts skills are not great, and the death point is stretched thin. He didn't have the ability to overturn the chessboard, but he just went ahead and brushed off the high-level plot that he shouldn't be involved in. . . The sub-protagonist survives halo-style and non-stick pan style. It looked so awkward. After a while, it can be viewed as a refreshing plot point. But. The author keeps arranging troubles for the protagonist one after another. . . The further I looked back, not only did I feel less refreshed, but I also felt that it tasted like wax and I couldn't eat it anymore!

Too many mistakes, too many ideas, a bit taken for granted, let's cut it out

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It's a bit unclear, and it looks baffling

The front is okay. What is written on the back is a mess.

What's written above is so good! The author didn't have an outline, so things got messy later.

It's really ugly to do something Western fantasy

I don't understand what the author wrote

Have a question?

Why do people who write novels nowadays think that only those who practice physical fitness can be more defensive? Different types of body-protecting Qi for practicing internal skills can add defense. Zhou Botong's internal body-protecting character in The Legend of the Condor Heroes and the Golden Wheel Dharma King of the Ten-Layered Dragon Elephant couldn't be hit. Moreover, Zhou Botong stood still and let him hit him. The Golden Lun Dharma King used all his strength, but Zhou Botong had nothing to do.

The setting is too complex and the author doesn't have the writing skills. This is the classic line (the human heart is not enough, the snake swallows the elephant)

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He learned a hammer in a disorganized manner and couldn't understand it.

It's written in a messy way. Isn't it clear if you don't read it yourself?

If you don't like this cheat setting, say goodbye.

Even if you test the illusion, you can't see the illusion! Bad review!

It's okay, but the writing is a bit messy.

There is no logic in this golden finger at the point of death. Even a pig with this golden finger can defeat the Immortal Emperor and God King! Death points are too easy to get. If killing one person is not enough, just kill a whole country. These two forces have death points. The setting of this novel is even more unintelligent than the setting of those novels written by novices and Long Aotian. Even Long Aotian is not so stupid! ! !

I have started reading. The author's writing is very good. It is definitely worth reading and subscribing! Recommend a book that is decisive, sharp, and full of joy: "Old Man in Time Travel Picks Up Rags and Survives by Making Bad Movies" is hilarious...

Good-looking, struggling to grow, becoming an immortal and becoming an ancestor, the only one in the world, living forever, no heroine, come on! ! ! !