Children's Channels Invade Reality

Your children's channel is too new. In the past few years, there were a lot of things that were horrifying to think about.

Yes, but there is a habit in reading novels. Your protagonist must have something outstanding, which can be a golden finger or a talent. In this novel, anime invades, and the protagonist's things must be good, but those who can't stand reading novels like to think randomly, there are more powerful ones, there are more embarrassing ones, why not this or that, etc. Therefore, the protagonist must have outstanding points. Fuyuan is just standard. As mentioned earlier, the protagonist's talent is very strong, so strengthen this point. The same thing, the protagonist is better than others, such as martial arts, Pokémon favorability, item affinity, etc., Highlight the talent of the protagonist, so that it will not say that the powerful props do not belong to the protagonist, which will make some people uncomfortable.

Don't be afraid, children, Arceus is here with his utopian world

The idea is great, the writing is poor. This author actually wrote two books before. I thought he was a newcomer to this narrative. Why do you say the writing is poor? Even the author's words can't be understood clearly, and what he writes is so confusing and confusing. No, it must be incomprehensible. If it is not fed by AI, my suggestion is that the author should read it twice. You don't need to be very good at writing like this, you just need to be able to make people understand. If you want to improve as quickly as possible, it's easy. Speak clearly and don't let people guess. I have also read a lot of books and understood a lot of settings, and I can barely understand what the author is saying. I am not asking you to explain in detail. You have not explained many basic things clearly. You are not setting up suspense, but consuming expectations. There is also the sentence fragmentation, which is not necessary, and it is also confusing because the sentences are randomly broken in many places. I don't think you wrote the book to make money, otherwise you wouldn't have published your third book and you wouldn't know how to retain people. This is the simplest one, there are many more like it. I only read ten chapters and was very disappointed. Your next book will still have the same theme, but if the writing is better, people will still read it.

The idea is good, but the writing is messy. It makes me feel like I'm on fire. I feel like the main character doesn't know what he's doing.

The author exaggerates the pollution monsters too much. The pollution monsters in the Environmental Sword are resurrected by throwing pollutants into the rebirth pool as materials. They are not resurrected because of human beings' desire to eliminate pollution. King Zilda complained that the resurrected Yellow Tornado consumed a large amount of the pollutants he had hoarded. The reason why it is said that all human beings need to maintain environmental protection and use their hearts and souls to defeat the dirty king is because the value of the dirty king is higher than that of all existences in the world view of the environmental sword, so it can only be restrained, and this restraint condition is the concept of environmental protection in human hearts. As long as the value is higher than that of the King of Pollution, there is no need to have environmental protection concepts and souls in your heart, you can just push it equally.

I don't know how many times in the book, Beyblades have the highest combat power and can reach the multiverse level. The protagonist also knows about it and persuades others to play it. There are also Beyblade towers for training, but the protagonist himself does not play it.

There's not even a main plot, so it's hard to watch.

No, I can't stand it anymore. I really want to complain. Although it is not like those disgusting protagonists, your protagonist is both honest and impure. Author, what kind of protagonist do you want to write? Why do you have to be so selfish about small details? I felt a sense of suffocation in my chest after reading this. You must be too petty. You deserve to have no enthusiasm at all.

The first is the protagonist's initial ability. What the heck, if I don't have a choice, it's my father. If I have a choice, he's not even worthy of being my grandson. And the introduction also states that the protagonist's main ability is light xx, a light messenger? Giant of light? Emperor's armor? Or what? Anyway, no one can get along with this thing. So all I can say is that this book is a dead end!

This book is not as interesting as the previous one. The key is that you brought the fantasy world into the real world. In fact, it is really difficult to write.

Good news: I picked up an emperor's armor Bad news: I don't have the Five Elements bloodline

The barbell alone weighs 20 kilograms. I should check the data before writing.

Pray to heaven, eunuchs pray to heaven

Can't the armored warrior defeat dinosaurs? I just feel like the protagonist's strength... I can't understand

The idea is good, but the writing is too bland.

What if Ye Feng comes playing with a spinning top?

Since it is a children's channel, why don't we have these ·Peppa Pig ·Bluey ·Bebe's Life Diary ·Hi! Dodge ·Bobo the Mouse ·Funny Robin ·Sarah and the Duck ·The Paw Team makes great achievements ·Happy Nana and Moon Baby ·Blue Koala ·Teletubbies My Little Pony Little Flower Fairy Balala Little Fairy Baby Bus Garden Baby

Shangxiang, I thought you would end up in a bad way, but I didn't expect you to go directly to the palace.

I didn't expect that the accelerated plot the author mentioned was referring to the accelerated eunuch.

It's over, it's over, I'm still raising you to death, I still want to see it 😭

The main line is not clear, the system is too complicated, and the power system is not clear. Like the main line, what to protect and how to protect it, from the perspective of ordinary people and the perspective of the protagonist. The inconsistent power system makes it almost impossible to write about the rest of the story. The armor system is indeed large, but considering the physical quality of the summoner, and the armor system is in the city in stages, the gyro system, the hurricane spirit system can explode stars, and the armor is still in the earth. No matter how big the Guobao special attack system mecha is, it doesn't have these at all. I have seen few others. Or simply unify, first level, second level and third level, what is the strength in each stage, what strength can explode the star. The big main line has been decided, pollution. Pollution is too small. After all, the later parts involve the universe. Pollution is the main line in the first half. After all, we all know that pollution cannot be eliminated, and then the main line will be gone. You can write about space exploration, technological progress, civilization levels, etc. It can be anything, from cities to countries to the earth, and finally to cosmic survival, any civilization can be written! Of course I'm just giving you my thoughts after reading it!

Bro, update! ! ! !

Brother, I miss you

Use your precious land to advertise I am a villain on a children's channel By the way, do you still write? When will I open another book? I really like reading this book, but there are too many things and too many things, and the villains are also some pollutants. In fact, it's not necessary. It's just about killing monsters and upgrading. No need to talk about pollution. I also liked reading the previous books, that one, "Zhetian". Some of the descriptions about toys were quite interesting, but I was not very interested in the subject of "Zhetian".

I remember when you started the book, you vowed to finish it, but you ended up having a big problem here 😅

It's already August. You haven't written yet?