Abyss Puppet Fairy

Using women to drive the plot makes me speechless.

See Chapter 23. There are some poisonous spots. For example, in the previous chapters, there were dirty things looking for the protagonist. Because it was dark and rainy, the road was difficult to walk, and the protagonist's combat effectiveness was low, so he had to wait until dawn. I can live with this. But later it is said that the protagonist knows some divination. In the first few chapters, after the protagonist was harassed by dirty things, he did some divination and left immediately (big bad luck) and left tomorrow morning (little bad luck). When you save that young lady later, you can say (it may reduce the risk, take a gamble), plus someone threatens you, no one will say you are a holy mother. It feels silly to admit that you have special eyes when choosing a weapon. The other party is here to make trouble. He wants to mess with you no matter what you say, so why tell the truth. Anyway, the head of the family will know about the possible strangeness of the protagonist from the second uncle and others. Also, you will be punished by God if you change someone's life/reveal secrets. Seeking good fortune and avoiding misfortune is not that serious. Although it's a bit of hindsight, I still hope that the author can set up the character's abilities/personality first before writing. Otherwise, if you are in danger ahead and don't use this skill, if you use it later out of boredom, a lot of people will criticize you.

It feels like the pace is deliberately slowed down

It's better than 90% of the books on the list. It's definitely not a loss after reading it. It has the flavor of the previous novels. I'm already desperate for this novel world that starts with xxx. Come on, author, be sure to subscribe

The subject matter is good, but it's frustrating to watch.

The subject matter and writing are pretty good, but if the protagonist continues to struggle with his family, the book will be useless. People can't see this now

He Yuechan doesn't quite understand her liking for the protagonist. Is it the reason why the hero saves the beauty?

Didi

Puppet master! My XP😍

Not bad. Puppet is what I like to watch recently.

Only then did I realize that there were so many typos and omissions... I corrected them.

Overall it's okay, but I don't see any connection with Cthulhu