I Have a Martial Arts Attribute Board

Emmm, one and a half years of entry-level assessment can actually cover so many chapters, and except for a few that need to be written, the rest can be completely omitted. The result is that the word count must be improved, and if one person comes out, a lot of narration must be added, and there may not even be any plot about these people. What is the point? My writing style is mediocre and I'm still working hard now. I don't blame my grades for not improving. I'll exhaust the readers' patience and no one will read it when it's released later. Just wait for the eunuch. In what age are you not a master who expects readers to be spoiled by your writing?

The author may not have thought that it will take half a year to get started with the first level of Kung Fu, but later on, wouldn't it take several years to even get started with Kung Fu? In order to suppress the protagonist's growth rate too deliberately, it will definitely collapse later. The second is that a woman appears out of nowhere and she joins in to cause trouble. You can imagine the weird and classic plot behind it. It is really embarrassing. I just want to say, I dreamed back to the 1980s, and it is still the same old protagonist who casually helps a woman, but he is extremely talented, and the speed of advancement has caught up with the protagonist's cheating. I have to say, awesome🐮 And the author's martial arts setting is a bit unclear. If you want to get started with martial arts, you need to learn the skills first? ! Good guy, and shouldn't the extreme technique describe a martial arts realm? Integrate the whole body's energy and blood to gather a little. As a result, the effect is reduced when you reach the next level 🙂 If it doesn't work, let's not describe the effect of extreme skills. It's easy to cause drama. Just write how strong it is. Generally speaking, the logic is a bit loopy. The plot is a bit cliché. Others are barely readable. You can still read it when there is a book shortage. At least there is no big poisonous point at the moment.

Wei Ni immediately transformed into a bloody drama. I have created various characters for the protagonist before, but this is the result?

The plot of the younger brother's genius felt too artificial

First, the protagonist has traveled through time for 4 months, and his 12-year-old younger brother and sister are still like little white rabbits. In the ancient gang world, 13-year-old girls can get married, but the protagonist raises them so ignorantly that even a rich family would not dare to raise them like this. Second, cheats are points added on the attribute panel, and the source of the points is the conversion of energy absorbed by the human body. This cheat is destined for the protagonist to break through quickly. The only thing that restricts the protagonist is kung fu and resources. So why not take the genius route from the beginning? Third, the article always uses the words of passers-by to show how capable the protagonist is, but the protagonist's behavior is completely substandard. Zhao Jia was kind to you and allowed the protagonist's younger brother and sister to live in his house and play with his two children. Even though he said this, the protagonist still didn't understand. This was someone who wanted to get closer and they just happened to get two couples together. The protagonist was a fool who didn't know how to refuse. . . . . Go to a restaurant to eat, and fight against the Jin Dao Gang. The protagonist can't even guarantee to be alone now, and wants to help the world. From the beginning to the end, the Jin Dao Gang has not caused any substantial damage to the protagonist, but the protagonist's behavior directly made enemies for himself. Do you have a good relationship with him? The boss didn't even move. He was looking for trouble here. How capable? The war has already ceased, but the protagonist is fine with this challenge and may benefit from it. Have you ever thought about how many escorts will die?

I can't imagine whether I can get started with the Blizzard Kung Fu pig's trotters. I hope I will never be able to get started. I'll make pig's trotters instead for my younger brother.

Another virgin bitch trash protagonist

On the one hand, it is necessary to cheat, but on the other hand, it is necessary to deliberately suppress the cheating, which is anticlimactic. It is difficult to describe the author's fighting description in one sentence, but it is the first time for every new author. .

When I saw Chapter 38, Gu Tao was arrested by the Jin Dao Gang because of his grandson. When Neiying ambushed the Mingchuan Escort Bureau, he was killed by the protagonist. Later, the Mingchuan Escort Bureau rescued Gu Tao's grandson. The protagonist should have died of stupidity in the end. If you kill his grandfather, can you guarantee that he will not seek revenge from you? Even if the protagonist cannot be killed by the system, what if he kills his relatives? Is it necessary to lay hidden dangers for himself?

The plot is old-fashioned, the plot is awkward, the writing is rough, and there are too many flaws.

You are so awesome. These two works were written almost exactly how long ago they were. I have to consume all my fans

How can there be such a rubbish protagonist? He is watery to death.

From the first glance, the name of the realm I chose was written to practice my skills. Is it possible to continue to perfunctory with the blood boiling and the blood boiling?

Give me an ending, it just cuts off your character.

The blood-steaming realm test forcibly tortured the master, driving away at least half of the readers. Author, just do it

Why write this kind of plot that is controlled by others? This is to increase the difficulty of your own writing. Isn't it good to defeat monsters and level up? The key is that it can't be updated, and it looks even more boring.

He traveled four months and still had short hair, so he acted like a maverick. Do you think he is Nie Feng?

A good book, completely in line with the literary style of 20 years ago

There are too many points to complain about. The protagonist himself is a waste in martial arts, the junior sister who helps him is a genius in martial arts, his brother is a monster in martial arts (he can compete with the high-level burning blood at the age of nine without having practiced martial arts), and his brother accidentally encounters a super expert master with a very powerful background, haha

The advantage of your first panel article is that the panel is extremely simple. Nothing fancy at all.