Everlasting Night Journey

I just finished reading Chapter 19. The old man took the newcomers to observe, saying that they were hunting for E-class, but they couldn't even beat D-class. Are they so sure that they will only meet E-class? And then, can't the beasts be kept in captivity? That's OK. The private organization was the first to appear. The little girl seemed to be in captivity. She escaped and was beaten to death, and then was taken back. This official organization is a bit lax. I saw that the male actor had been teaching for only a few days, and some of them had not become regulars yet. He was not treated very well, and his teaching was very perfunctory. He was officially required to join, but he didn't pay attention to the teaching. After a few days, he was called to observe how to kill the beast It was said to be "hunting", but the leader was not very strong. , If you go to "hunt" and encounter a strong one, you can only run away separately. After opening your eyes, the male protagonist is called to see if you can see the E-level beasts. They can be captured and imprisoned. Practicing killing E-level beasts under the watch of the instructor is better than searching carefully outside, and there may be a fight. But the situation is okay Then there is "Mom". Ever since the male protagonist can see things around him clearly, the first thing he sees is "Mom", and he is strictly prohibited from going out. He doesn't want to be found out, so he can only try to get used to it. For "Mom", he also tries to remember her living habits and so on. This lasts for three months. The male protagonist knows that "Mom" is fake and knows that she is not the same creature as him, but he has never seen other creatures, humans come in. He was killed, and I think the male character identifies with this "mother", whether in memory or in his heart, I don't see any rejection I feel that the male character has become more recognized after joining the official, and those fighting skills, "food" and so on are basically taught by "mother". On the contrary, the official has not seen what is taught, and when seeing dangers outside, he will always think of "mother", and I feel that he is dependent on "mother"

I'm convinced, what a great book, but I feel like it's been dragged down too much by updates. If I couldn't quit, I would have given up long ago.

I read the author's King of Darkness several years ago, and I was shocked at the time, because it is rare to see such a protagonist who breaks first and then stands up, and there is not much to say about the plot. It was definitely the best choice in the online literature world at that time. It describes the class conflict in the end of the world and the protagonist's psychological growth. After talking about the advantages, let's talk about the shortcomings. The shortcomings of this book are obvious, that is, the collapse of the power system is too serious. Looking at it now, it is also the most serious collapse. First of all, I can't understand it at all. What is the need for the existence of the Dominator Realm? There are not as many characters in the Dominator Mirror as there are in the Abyss Walk in the whole book. In the later period, it even gave me the feeling of a running list of killing monsters, upgrading and changing maps. There are also some inexplicable additions such as inner wilderness and outer wilderness. I advise readers to write books with the names of power systems as simple as possible. Realms with only one word difference can be easily confused if the transition period is short, and it is best to control these realms to no more than five. Don't ask for more, just level up slowly. The sense of hierarchy will be gone if you level up too quickly. It's easy to produce this and that and a bunch of bugs. I hope my experience can be of some help to you.

The author's writing style is quite mature, but the plot is a bit cliche, and the conflicts are very deliberate. After seeing too many similar plots, people have no expectations for the progression of the plot. The portrayal of the protagonist's character is relatively novel, but the group portrait description is not very good and the emotions lack realism. Generally speaking, except for the master, the writing is very good.

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The writing, imagination, and plot of this book are all good, but when I read it later, I felt that the pace was fast, the villains were stereotyped, and the tasks they did were almost copy and paste. As the saying goes, only three things can come true, not to mention that this is not a fun article. Reading too much will really make you tired of reading. In my humble opinion, I really don't want a good book to go to waste like this.

I hope the author can have a good ending for Jiang Yueli, the Mosquito Queen, etc. The characters are well portrayed, and what happened before is gone, but unfortunately she is dead. Although she is a chicken girl, she is really good, and her selling meat is also a helpless behavior. It is really cruel. I don't want the protagonist to become a loner in the end. If the joy and sorrow are gone and she doesn't care about anything, is it any different from a stone? Why is there always only one heroine, why is it always just Maeve? There were many people along the way, but in the end it ended tragically. The girl who once fell in love with the protagonist at first sight, the girl who wanted to attack the protagonist's overlord, the girl who gave the protagonist the mask that is the core weapon of the family and symbolizes her own glory. , Now that she has become a king, her emotions are missing, and the protagonist is just a passerby to her now. From the setting, I have already felt the author's sword, which is a pity, but author, if you always do this, you will have no friends, and those former subordinates, the woman from the Illuminati, Chen Han in the two states, no longer have pen and ink!

First of all, I will order all the original copies of this book. Because a long time ago when I was a student, I read all the old books in pirated versions, such as Dark Civilization, Restarting the End of the World and The King of Darkness, plus the Pet Shop, I read several books for free 🤣 Then let me tell you my thoughts on the current chapter. Overall, the writing is very good. Because I thought so too about the last book Pet Shop 🤣 It was really a magical book in the early stage, but it collapsed in the middle stage. In the later stage, it was crazily filled with water and lost a lot of book fans. The current unsatisfactory performance of this book is most likely related to the update. If you want to achieve success in online writing, you must at least keep up with the second and third in updates. On the basis of 6,000 words per day, add updates from time to time, otherwise it will be really difficult to achieve results. Lao Gu has the strength of a great god, but he doesn't have the liver of a great god🤣 Another reason is that writing apocalyptic articles will be very difficult, and if you write a little darkly, you will be reported, so the road to becoming platinum is not easy. Another issue is the poisonous plot. There are some very criticized plot designs in some ancient books. In this book, it starts with killing a rich businessman with a second-rate money bag in the inner city, causing a series of troubles. The enemies get stronger and stronger, and even leave pigtails. The classic beat the younger one, and then the older one is betrayed by Liu Ju, trapped in the Moonlight Church, tortured and skinned. This series looks very ex, and it should also attract some book fans. I don't know why this plot is designed in this way. There are actually more comfortable ways to make the protagonist grow up. Why write it like this?

After seeing the protagonist being skinned and abandoned, those who like to write tragedies and torture the protagonist are not suitable for writing online articles. There is also the deformed and twisted world view of the entire novel. In a world where the jungle is strong and the strong eat the strong, the super power of slaying ghosts, flying into the sky and escaping from the earth is actually disliked by all kinds of people. Since the author wants to play with reality and tragedy but does not respect logic, this deliberately created harsh environment and villain are really disgusting.

Xu Shen (Wu Min)

The author's new book is another invincible novel. Although I don't like it, I still support it because there is no money to write dark novels. Writing invincible novels makes money. When I have no money, I write invincible novels, and then write a dark novel that I want to write. I am waiting for the next new dark novel. The author is really smart, unlike other authors who insist on just one novel, and then work themselves until they have no money and no popularity. Writing in this way gives me face.

The shitty name of Wanshi has been renamed again and again, and the ranking has finally dropped. I am very relieved.

Maeve

Readers who have subscribed from the beginning to now are really disgusted. First, the protagonist is about to be skinned (in fact, he doesn't know that he will only be skinned, and he may even be killed directly), and then he said here that he can't go back after summoning Maeve, so I only saw an extremely cowardly idiot. Secondly, the meaningless sadist appears again, which is actually quite fatal in serialized novels. You didn't have enough preparation to do this right away, and you didn't have the necessity to cash it out. This is so similar to Dudian back then. I can only say that I can't stand it anymore. The author writes well, take care, delete the book, retreat, and never see him again.

I hope I can win the title of Master with this book

I hope Gu Da will continue to write about the world of the Dark King. This world is very charming, highly original, touching, awe-inspiring, and full of infinite possibilities. When writing about a protagonist with another identity, such as a person from the tribe outside the giant wall, write slowly and unfold slowly. There are successful cases here, such as Lord of Halanza, which is a world with stories of protagonists of different professions. It has now opened its third book and is still very popular. I believe that the author must have many other ideas, ideas, and settings, but they were just discarded during the update process. After sorting it out, I will continue to write more richly and delicately, and the upgrade will not be too fast. I can write more stories about team battles, farming and construction, participation in various forces, and adventures.

Has Laogu withdrawn from the Internet, or has something unexpected happened? Please ask if anyone has contact information. I started reading your novel "Dark Civilization" when I was in elementary school. I have been following it for 10 years now. Now you have disappeared inexplicably and I feel uncomfortable all over. What is going on, Lao Gu! !

I thought there was still a long way to go, but who would have thought that yesterday when I was looking through the catalog, I suddenly saw the words "Grand Finale", now it's done, I can kill it beautifully 😍

Chong Cong Chong

Why does he stay with the protagonist from the beginning? If he only raises food in captivity, he will obviously not show so much kindness to the protagonist. Moreover, Xu has many similarities with humans in the book, and many of them even look exactly like humans. I believe everyone feels that Maeve is more like protecting the protagonist. Maybe the protagonist is Maeve's kind or a superior in the bloodline. Maybe the ruins themselves are transformed from humans. The protagonist is not a pure person, but a ruins exactly like a human being, but retains human memories and personality. Of course, it is not ruled out that Maeve may just be curious about the protagonist's physique. Maybe in her eyes, the protagonist is a wolf among the sheep. There are many hints here, such as the protagonist can eat food directly, has superhuman power, etc. So she has been staying by the protagonist's side, waiting for the day when the wolf's disguise is discovered by the sheep, and how the protagonist will react. Of course, all this is just my conjecture, a possible guess that rationalizes the peculiarities of the protagonist's origin and Maeve's various performances. Just like the King of Darkness, who would have thought that the reason for the protagonist's special physique is because he is an experimental subject. It is difficult to guess the background setting from the protagonist's cognitive perspective. Before Guda fully reveals the setting of Xu, I am just guessing.

It's been half a year 🤔 Lao Gu has not quit the Internet, right? I haven't written it yet, but at least I'll give everyone a notice.

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Believe me, don't read any of Gu Xi's books. I started reading from Super God's Pet Shop. The realm behind it is very messy. The villain has no brains at all. It's like you are the protagonist and I won't let you go until you kill my whole family. I was forced to finish this big lump. When I got to the next book, Eternal Night God's Journey, I also tried to taste the salty taste and found that it was still wet. Gu Xi Jianglang tried his best not to trap money.

Maeve, suddenly thought if it would be more suitable to add some yandere attributes⌓‿⌓

It will be on the shelves soon. Please update the Gudawanzi chapter twice so that we can enjoy it! ! !

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I just read King of Darkness and can't vote for it, so I voted for this book.

Ask Maeve if there is any coming next

Grandma, I promised to rest for two months, but ended up stopping for half a year 🙂 You are so old, I finally opened a new book