I Can Help You Add Some

Before it was put on the shelves, Lao Gu said that he likes to hear criticism and ridicule, so I plan to make a comment every day from the day it is put on the shelves... Ahem, to talk about the pros and cons of this book and Gu Xi every day. In short, it is to be a troll. Those who have not read this book or the novels written by Gu Xi can read the comments first to know how poisonous they are, and then be persuaded to quit by me. First of all, of course, let's talk about the title and beginning of this book. The previous book had the least amount of humor among the ancient works, which made people mistakenly think that this book is following the same path as the title. In the end, only the beginning creates an atmosphere, and our salty fish protagonist starts his comfortable life, and actually starts to add a little more! It's really a disgrace. In the past, Laogu had always been able to write the pleasure of system flow without having to write the crude effects of system flow. But here he suddenly started to do this. For most people who are familiar with his works and those who are not familiar with but tired of the system, they feel like they are seeing a degenerate white text. And looking at it, where is the horror. . . But Lao Gu said: I am not a system streamer. This extra point involves some important things later. Is it scary? In fact, it has already arrived but it is not obvious. Although he has his own considerations, this guy thinks about sexy operations and reversals every day. He deserves to be criticized! Thinking of a long-term plot to pave the way, readers have already run away. If you fail to attract good readers in the early stage, you will be said to be a late addition. People who invest can't make money, so they should be criticized! If you have any dissatisfaction with him, please come out and complain. I will sort it out tomorrow and continue to complain.

As a high-achieving student who traveled through the past, the male protagonist knew how to call the system as soon as he passed by. He should be like those who read the novels imagined, without any disconnection, sloppiness, mother-in-law, mother-in-law, and many worries. What are people who have practiced together for a period of time after time-traveling? Seeing strange things What do you mean by being a demon? Since you have become a time traveler, you should kill and grab and level up quickly as expected by the masses. You will kill whoever you meet, hug your thighs when you meet, and your character will change instantly. Although it is said that nothing serious happened to hurt him, this is how our time travel novels have always been, what? Not Xiaobaiwen? You've added some points and you still say it's not a novice? What's wrong with the broad masses of our people understanding it this way? Even if we, the broad masses of the people, can travel through the past, they can be resourceful and decisive, brave and fearless and kill countless powerful enemies. There is nothing wrong with upgrading along the way! Chapter 100: Still lingering at the entrance of the village to cultivate feelings is just a waste of words!

This book feels completely inferior to the previous one. I want to give up after reading it. There are a lot of small white texts in the starting point. It feels like it was written by a novice.

Lao Gu loves all kinds of old routines. After the old routines are over, he will try to reverse them. I also like to add some new ideas. But how did he stuff it? He didn't follow the rules. He always didn't set up the settings first, but polished the plot first and added it later, because he didn't want people to guess. The result is that I often forget to mend it. What should I do? Don't worry, there are hidden clues and hints ahead. In fact, there is no need to write it down. If you read a lot, you can figure it out in your head. Some logic and settings can be guessed by the reader before they are written down. However, this is too unfriendly to novices. It is recommended to increase the number of words in advance to prepare for the "natural flow" in the future, because online articles must cater to the Internet market to make money, and you have to increase the number of words to make money. For example, when we travel through time, we must first explore the important setting memories and show them to the readers. Otherwise, if some settings are suddenly proposed later, Xiaobai will not be able to react. To give an example that can be optimized: There was a Mr. Ye in a certain world who wanted to find a way to save his lover Bai. Finally one day he met Bai and found out that Plan A was not working. . . At this time, plan B can be introduced clearly at an inadvertent moment earlier, but if I mention it again here, it doesn't need to be so detailed and can focus on the lyricism.

It is really difficult to write a good novel. The old-fashioned rhythm and plot design show the skill Even if it is an industrial novel, it is also a top-notch industrial novel.

I've read more than 10 chapters, and the protagonist's IQ is touching. I bought the account and wrote it with someone else?

After watching Gu Xi's pirated copies for so many years, I suddenly felt a little bit embarrassed today. Hahaha. So to support the new book, I still like the character who uses guns the most. Come on Gu.

I have read several pirated books before, but because they were dark, I converted them to genuine ones. As long as I still have money to eat, I will definitely order all the old books!

The beginning of this book is slow. Although the author has his own considerations, the hundreds of chapters of foreshadowing do not provide actual material for the following content, nor do they fill in the elements to develop a good background. It only helps to heat up the emotions between several characters. The author of this book tried to combine the relaxing warm tones at the beginning with the realistic black tones of the world that the title can bring out, but he wasted too much time. The relaxation and experience at the beginning destroyed the perception of people who were attracted by the title of the book. Later, those who adapted to the addition were easily interrupted by the slow pace and felt uncomfortable. It is predicted that there will be adjustments in the later period to make it easier for many people to accept this book, but the long and contradictory early rhythm will not make many people willing to continue reading.

After reading Chapter 6, it's okay not to have the function of relating to others. If you do, you'll get into trouble. Not all the enemies are out. It feels like watching a pig chatting with the protagonist, and then the protagonist cuts him off.

The early stages of Laogu are a bit long, and the pace is still a bit slow, which makes it difficult to attract new readers.

Where Wu Yan broke his arm, I really don't know what happened to the author

The concept is good, but the layout needs work

Yun Shen didn't know where he was going, and he made one wrong step and another wrong step.      ， Xiao Wu is so innocent and pitiful, while Wu Yan is sweating while holding the bed.

4 Chapters a day recommended tickets 🙂

Toxic comments, please be careful! I have been following this book since it was 30,000 words long. It has many bright spots, but also some bad points to complain about. First, I won't say too much about adding points to attributes. It's a bit cool, but there are so many skills and skills to upgrade in pig's feet, and you don't need any medicinal pills to assist? This is the biggest bug in the book. It doesn't seem like much at first, but later on, after one million words, isn't there a plot of killing people, grabbing treasures and elixirs, and upgrading secret realms to break through the bottleneck? Second, this book has been updated in recent days. Haven't any readers noticed? In fact, I think the author himself realized that the main plot was off-kilter. The original route was good, seizing the town seal and enjoying the treatment of a town-level sect, and even the development of the sect gave the senior sister who betrayed the sect a chance to slap in the face, etc... But no, the main plot suddenly became that people around her were awakening one after another, and Pigfoot and others were almost wiped out! Then I changed the map again and went to the Alien Homeland. It was completely messed up. The latitude of the map change was too large, and there were so many previous contents that paved the way for the development of the sect, all of which were invalidated. A few disciples could have developed together with the pig's feet, but now... The leader's farming development path has turned into a group of people wandering into the dukedom. In my opinion, the entire plot line has deviated too much. Finally, there is no third point. Because my hands are tired from typing so many words, I hope this book can shine.

This book is a safety card. I don't seek merit but seek no fault. It's really miserable.

Ah, I thought it was a bit boring at first, but it got better later on. I've been waiting for the update. It's a pity.

Haha, many people are looking for the unreasonableness of this book, but I am enjoying the short-term happiness. Especially when someone from a dark genre like Lao Gu writes funny plots, maybe it's because of the huge contrast caused by the inherent impression. On the contrary, it makes me happier to watch than the works of authors who specialize in writing happy stories🤣

Lao Gu, I think the money I invested in your book will be wasted soon.

Gu Xi, if you update for 10,000 yuan a day, I will reward you with 10,000 starting coins! ^_^^_^^_^

I feel like the author is an extreme person who didn't save the manuscript! ! !

I still want to say one thing, I advise you to be kind, and I beg you to be a human being in the end of today.

Build a supporting building The ancient conference will choose supporting characters in it as appropriate Please pay attention to the format of reply: Character name + approximate personality

Zhou Yunshen got the job done so quickly. Why did the author design the characters in such detail←_←

Lao Gu's book must end with a tragedy, not the three-speed electric fan on the live broadcast day, as evidenced by this post 😰

After so many years, I still have lingering fears about the author's first book. I am very worried about this author, and I still dare not read his books again. .

King of Darkness is the pinnacle, eh, but it's just a bit too gloomy and dark for most people to watch.

Brother, please don't write dark articles.

Super cool article routine, has Lao Gu's temperament changed drastically?