Elf: Pick up the Reborn Eevee at the Beginning

I saw it in the top 30 of the final list and then came in (I took a look before writing the comment and it was already outside 170. It was only half a week later that the list was so unreliable). I thought I would be on the list and had some strength, so I managed to see 50%, but I couldn't stand it anymore Every Pokémon I write has its own setbacks, and as a result, I always encounter enemies that exceed the upper limit of strength, which makes it seem quite risky before every fight... Although I still win in the end, the feeling of the enemies constantly getting stronger seems very tiring. The scientific research debate and article publishing parts are also quite childish, but considering that the author is not a scientific researcher, forget it. The last thing that made me unable to stand still was Darkrai from Dakdo. Before this plot, a "Legendary" was specially created to evaluate Pokémon that surpassed the champion. Not long after the World Youth Championship started, Darkrai of Darko was said to be legendary. What about the map of Yan Kingdom in front of the co-author? If he really has the ability to collect and pay legends, why is he not the Sinnoh champion? How much hatred did this guy draw from the champion who intercepted DP wisdom halfway through? Didn't the author feel the same way? It's really annoying to strengthen it so bluntly. Seeing this, the resentment accumulated from all the previous unpleasant points suddenly burst out, and I couldn't bear it anymore. Every dream in life is wonderful. I hope the author can write better and better in the future, but I can't stand it anymore. Goodbye

The legendary Darkrai poisoned me to death. I tolerated all the problems in the front just for the sake of Eevee, but I really can't handle it anymore in the back. He's still cheating so much.

I can't stand it when I see 73 on the square. Is it really true that there are 7 developers, and then the producer is responsible for a series of problems such as the production line and can only get 3? Too cool

Kamiri-ryu·chanmie

I have read chapter sixty-three so far, and I feel like I can continue reading as long as I don't think about it and don't read comments. The daily scenes are well written, but the two aspects of battles and scientific research are really quite poisonous...

I advise you, kid, to hurry up, otherwise your monthly pass will be torn up.

I don't understand why Mr. Menas is said to be very poisonous. He is not humanoid like Gardevoir. It is also said that Menas is a public company and 2/3 of them are directly advised to leave. Nonsense? Not to mention Menas, Gardevoir is a male, and I don't believe that 2/3 can be persuaded to quit if there are no major problems with the author's writing. The most important point is that Menas's system is a talking dragon, brothers, not a human being. As for dragons, don't you think the male ones you ride are more handsome? They can't transform into humans anyway.

If there is Crimson, I don't think your elf game is very big. Ibrahimovic was a gym elite or king in his previous life, and he will definitely not be able to defeat Crimson. Ugly Fish develops too slowly, and combatants improve very quickly. Even if you become a god, you may not be able to defeat Chi, so cheating!

The mystery of Ibrahimovic's time travel: I have seen many friends questioning why Ibrahimovic was reborn and whether he died in his previous life. Here, let me help the author explain, the truth about Ibrahimovic's rebirth (fantasy version) is this: One day, Dialga and Palkia fought again. The avenues were obliterated, time and space were shattered, and the long river of time fluctuated violently. It happened that a little Eevee was born, and was swept up in the fluctuating time and space. His soul was about to be wiped out. The bond and cause and effect between the future traveler and the protagonist traveled through the universe, condensed the universe, and protected Ibrahimovic's soul, allowing it to briefly jump out of the long river of time. He transcended the shackles of time, stood on top of time, and followed the fetters in his heart to glance down the long river of time. This glance represented ten years of Ibrahimovic's life. He saw a corner of the future, experienced a possibility of the future, and then was re-involved in the long river of time and returned to the body he had just been born in. But this momentary experience left a deep imprint on the little Ibrahimovic's soul, and the warm bond filled its heart. It secretly swore: In this life, I will definitely find Xia Chen again. Our future will never be like the salty fish in the previous life. We will definitely reach the highest step by step. The sky cannot bury it, the earth cannot destroy it, truly transcending time and space, jumping out of the long river of time, opening up a world on its own, and becoming Alzubu 😜

If you don't even know that Eevee and other elves are really good after a few dozen or even when they are put on the shelves, it will collapse, and you will lose your collection and stop reading. Sooner or later, the aesthetics of a model will become tired. After all, there are many Pokémon books. Every good subject matter and good writing are the prerequisite for attracting people, but how to retain readers after attracting traffic is another aspect. There will not be a cookie-cutter survival soil at the starting point.

It's gone, the rest is not for children to see

I feel that the protagonist is too arrogant. Apart from being good at cooking and making cubes, and relying on reversal of luck to create beautiful cubes, he acts like a liar and takes a few photos to give an entire PPT presentation in an academic report. I feel like they are all rotten antiques. In terms of fighting, training basically depends on the skill, and the command is better than the audience. Maybe he was really good in his previous life and trained such a powerful Ibrahimovic, but he really has no ability in this life, but he looks aloof.

The author's mentality is too easy to break. He couldn't continue writing the last book. Now this book has several problems. The first is that the elves have systems and there are many mythical beasts, so it is easy to lose focus. Now several elves are a bit invisible. The second is the emotional drama. Why don't you write about emotional drama in the next book? Originally, elf literature requires emotional investment in cultivating elves. Now you have multiple female protagonists. In the last book, the emotional drama with a single female protagonist was not written well. With one elf and multiple heroines, there are too many dramas to share. The third thing is not to make too many magic changes, and the changes should not be too outrageous. There are so many people who are dissatisfied this time because there are too many magic changes. The original Darkrai of Dakdo is only average in strength and cannot even reach the level of the King of Heaven. You just come to the top of the championship. Although it will be patched later, the plot behind it still needs to be complete. Moreover, the combat power system of this book is really a bit messy. It's actually quite good to use normal levels. For example, you can divide 40-60 into gym levels. Now there are gym levels and elite levels. The key elves are all stuck, which makes the upgrade fast or slow, and you don't know what level it is.

To be honest, you should stop writing emotional lines. It would be much worse than writing about elves. Really, you either have to make it clear that I am a scumbag and want to open a harem. You are all my wings. I am sincere to you. As long as you love me, I will find a way to solve the Shura field by myself. If I am caught by a good guy, it is because I have no ability. Stand out and dare to take responsibility. Or it's better to be single-minded and have a single emotional line. This is easier to write. Although I know you love me very much, I already have someone I like. I will send you the good guy card, sister card, and brother card. I will only be a good brother after breaking the relationship line, and highlight a pure love god of war. This is much better than the evasive coward you are now who keeps fighting and flirting but not taking it seriously. What do you think? In the end, the heroines were forced to start a harem half-heartedly? Then I can only say ex, how can the owner, king, and champion like him with such a cowardly look? When you open a harem, you must at least make people think that you are worthy of having a harem.

Shen Nong is here, the plot and writing are okay, food level, but Menus is a male. I personally can't accept the setting that beautiful elves like Gardevoir and Menas are male (the monsters can't accept that they are female), so I left after seeing this. There are no other poisonous points at the moment. Those who can accept it can take a look.

It's a headache to write the competition. You, the elf, have all kinds of plug-ins turned on, and the results are impressive. Other elf's who don't have plug-ins can fight against you with ease.

Ibrahimovic

Yayi's one-character horse

Why do some people always think that it is easy to breed Pokémon and just take the rare ones? Aren't those bug catching boys, boys in shorts, and fishing uncles all clowns? Why don't you go and lead Yu Sanjia? See who Xiaozhi comes into contact with in the movie version? Relatives of the king of heaven, heirs of museum owners, daughters of mayors, children of aristocratic families, and assistants to doctors, it is not normal for these people to take out quasi-god rare Pokémon casually. Which immortal came down to earth and thought they were passers-by and common people ( •̥́ ˍ •̀ू )

Am I the only one who feels that the recent chapters are a bit weird? I always feel that the male protagonist is written as a scumbag, always deliberately flirting, wishing everyone would fall in love with him, and I always feel that it is quite ex. Most of the articles about elves have become about how the male protagonist seduces girls. It's okay to have a harem, but I think the hero should be written as a straight man who doesn't know what others mean to her. The author's writing in this way directly destroys the character of the male protagonist. I think it's best not to write about ambiguity before the relationship is confirmed. But maybe I'm too sensitive, but I really can't stand these chapters ˃ʍ˂.

If you want to read about elves, you can check it out. As for the protagonist, it has basically no role to cultivate and cannot be used to learn skills. Most of the elves can use themselves in battles, and the plug-ins are too large. They ignore that the most important thing in this type of article is to grow with the elves. Each of your elves has flaws and grows alone, so it is not as good as the protagonist having flaws. At least they can grow together. You, the elf, have become stronger by yourself, and you have reduced the presence of the protagonist in the battle. It is really discouraging, not to mention that you are also flawed in other aspects.

I have read more than two hundred chapters, and the more I read in the youth competition, the more strange it becomes... I jumped directly to the ending and took a look. The good boy looks like different girls. Is this written as multiple heroines? Why is there such a contradictory element like harem in modern literature? When the author asked for opinions before, I saw that the author liked two comments about separate harems, so I thought I wouldn't write it anymore...

Every elf has weaknesses, but it's ridiculous to always have a 55 vs. Other elf of the same level. . .

Is there any difference between your elf cheating and not cheating? Such rubbish, and being on a 50-50 basis with everyone, isn't it pure rubbish?

I've heard most of it from Himalaya and came here to complain. The author has a lot of ideas. The setting of this book is quite novel. However, the author really doesn't know how to write battles at all, and the design of character growth is also a mess. It's good that each Pokémon has its own hooks, but each one is more outrageous than the last. However, how does the author think? The cheating of the group of cheating elves is as if it doesn't exist unless it is specifically described. The strength of a few elves will only be slightly improved when the plot requires it. The protagonist has been cheating for a year and defeated the students of his own school. In the plot, he still needs to use tactics to fight against the defeated enemy half a year ago? What's even more outrageous is that the protagonist has a bunch of titles and rare elves, and then dares to travel with a strength that can't even be defeated by miscellaneous fish (amateur level?). Whenever he encounters people or elves on the way, he can't defeat them, and he relies on luck to survive (arranged by the author) And the author sets the main character Jiao doesn't even know what skills or characteristics his own elf has, so he writes about tactical duels in battles all day long. It's completely baffling. At the end of every battle, his own elf comes up with a skill that no one else has thought of and ends the game. So you write a gross tactic? Moreover, it is completely incomprehensible that the elf's hard power cannot directly crush ordinary students after being idle for so long. It also requires tactics and strategies to fight with all the bells and whistles. Another point is that the Donghuang League set by the author is completely weird. First of all, it is outrageous to set it based on the actual population of China. There is no one who can win the Eighth Master Championship among more than one billion people. It is rare for top college students in the country in their twenties to even have a gym leader level. If you want to write like this, why don't you bring in the place names and characters from the elf world? The champions of several other leagues are all in their teens and twenties, and their population bases are not comparable at all. Is the Donghuang League more than a billion morons? The focus of this book often jumps from side to side, sometimes on elves and sometimes on trainers. Some people may think that wouldn't it be great for trainers and elves to grow up together? But it's not. It's the kind of game where the elves take care of their own affairs, and fighting depends on free play. The protagonist focuses on cooking and hooking up with girls. The two are completely unrelated in terms of growth. I don't know what the author thinks.

I feel like the main character is too weak. I open so many tricks and even lose all the time. At the same level, I feel like I have 55 open.

To all the book friends who support Juice: This book has reached the final stage, and Juice also wants to give himself a happy ending. Please give Juice some time, and he will definitely finish it. Thank you very much~

I can't bear this. I don't have to worry about which one to choose between Charmander and Foam Chinchilla. Charmander is indeed very good. Foam Chinchilla has a wider attack area. It can hit you no matter you are a skilled player or a continuous attack. Charmander can't hold his head up. Do you understand the gold content of King Chinchilla 😡

It's not rigorous enough. When the bird Pokémon uses Feather, it loses its flying attribute and is left with normal attributes. The electric type does not have 2x damage, but the fighting type has 2x damage.

The author's idea is still very new. Every elf has its own problems. Both parents are dead at the beginning. The gourmet cuckoo pigeon is actually very attractive. But the author is not good at writing battles and infinitely strengthening the combat power. I am stronger than him, but I am the one who wins in the end. I can't finish three chapters in one battle, and more than four hundred chapters of elves are still not at the gym level. It all depends on the legendary elves to raise their combat power, but their combat power is still damaged. If fighting is viewed as an assembly line, it actually means nothing. Don't bully young people into being poor. Don't bully middle-aged people into being poor. Don't bully old people into being poor. Another poisonous point is that the author did not write down the daily cultivation and training of the elves, and all the elves were cheated. The protagonist is just like the camera following the plot passively, the teacher, senior, sister and principal... By the end of the game, the protagonist has become a pseudo-legendary elf (laughing) The protagonist's numerous titles do not make people feel very happy. They are almost stuck in the timeline and forcefully set up a lot of people who dare to be pioneers and sought after by the world, and then they are young and have listed companies with assets of over 100 million... These achievements are almost only shown when needed. If the assets exceed 100 million, the protagonist's basic necessities of life should change. There is no description in the clothes, and there is not much description in the gorgeous contest. Food, the main character himself is the cook, and there is not much description of the ingredients. He lived for about 400 chapters before he considered changing his house and buying an island to use as a gym. Just to have some fun, I went to Groudon again on the island. It's really procrastinating. A bunch of titles have no real description or usefulness. The protagonist first appears in a new form and then publishes the paper. The timeline is stuck to be first, first, first, once or twice is okay. Almost every time it is too much. After more than 400 chapters, the protagonist has no two teams of elves, and it can be said that it is delayed and repeated again and again. Only the plug-ins are relatively novel. There are a few moves coming and going in a new area. The skill pool of novel moves does not have the surprise in combat, and it does not make it exciting. I can't complain about Die Wu anymore. I just want to say that I can't wait to spray water at the beginning of Chapter 30... The battle really makes everyone feel powerless. The emotional line is actually hard to say, the rich woman Qingmei Tiansheng, the royal sister Loli... Almost several types are very dragging. Is there any medicine in the rice? Although it's normal to have emotional lines, he's also too watery. So many types of protagonists are the same as the camera... There are many emotional lines, and the only emotional scenes can be said to be the camera. Perhaps the most vicious thing is that the old man transforms into a two-year-old elf and travels to another world to be reborn as a medicine master. Is this your grandpa?