I Am a Peach Blossom Fairy in the Red Mansion

Forget about cultivating immortals. The article is too long-winded. I skipped a lot to read it, but I really didn't have the patience to read it. I could have finished the 3 chapters in one chapter. I had to insert the language art that I feel good about. To put it simply, it is a batch of water. The sea is all water.

What the hell are you writing? The Red Mansion is not Machiavellian, it's all about cultivating immortality, it's also wordy, it's terrible, it's terrible

It can be said that the writing is too bad. The setting of Golden Finger is quite mentally retarded. Then a monk who is about to become a god goes to exercise and learn Tai Chi. I am speechless.

There is no problem with the setting, but the author's writing skills are too weak. When it comes to specific details, it seems very verbose and the wording and sentence construction are poor. The character descriptions are too deliberate and a bit too facial-like and not flexible enough.

This is the starting point. It's the most verbose book I've ever read. If you read it for fifteen minutes, you've wasted a quarter of an hour.

The Golden Finger of the Peach Tree is okay, but The Time Traveler is both Heavenly and Luo Liba. The writing is not good, it is too watery.

Let Jia Cong and Lin Daiyu's children be named Jia. If their children are not named Jia, is it not enough to write a book?

Well written! Don't write it next time! Rory is so rude

My brain is refusing me to read this book

Too much nonsense. Just explain.

One batch of water, that peach tree alone would be filled with water.

The subject matter is good, but the writing is so poor that it's at the level of a junior high school student! Online articles must also be written vividly and interestingly to attract people.

When I saw the second chapter, I thought it was bullshit. Tiandao has a personal consciousness and can scheme! In the second chapter, the protagonist is given such an awesome enemy, and all the messy settings are thrown out! Rory is so rude

The setting is too cumbersome and rigid, and getting the golden finger is just a coincidence. It's too unreliable for one person to have so many coincidences at once.

Don't write it. I've read dozens of chapters and my head is spinning It's too wordy.

Identification completed! It's definitely the instruction manual for Dream of Red Mansions!

After reading Chapter 15, I can't stand it anymore. It's all nonsense and background settings, with nothing useful at all.

I think the biggest problem is that it is too wordy. After reading the previous chapters, the same question was repeated many times.

It's written like it's a joke! ! ! This description should make everyone understand how the content and writing style are! ! !

Save the Jia family? Is there anything to save? Except for a few young ones and a widow (not counting Jia Baoyu), the rest are innocent.