Let You Be Used as a Hostage and You Chase the Empress of the Enemy Country?

A little opinion I really don't like it. The title of this book is The Empress, but the Empress and the Empress' wife are a failure. It may take someone with high status to cause conflicts. In fact, it is enough to focus on Hua Chao and Xiao Bai. It will be confusing if there are too many people. The author's writing is first-rate, but he still cares about one and misses the other. Except for Xiao Hua and Xiao Bai, the other heroines are actually not very ideal, so it is better to simplify them Moreover, if you write about the extraordinary world, this one is not extraordinary at all, or it will become a martial arts conspiracy, which has extraordinary and a golden finger. This is a bit different and very frustrating. I probably want to write about immortality again, but a good feature of immortality writing is that the protagonist must have the heart to seek truth, otherwise it will not be developed at all. Immortality is to highlight a struggle. This character is obviously an everyday novel. The protagonist just wants his wife and children to be on the hot bed.

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First of all, the writing style is very sophisticated and the rhythm is well controlled. The villain is not smart, but it is a bit long-winded to open a bookstore. This writing style is either an old author opening a trumpet, or a big hand from an outside station. The book is really good, especially after it is put on the shelves, it is very dense with interesting points, one after another. But, if the author wants to achieve good results, he has to update it every day, because the plot is coherent and enjoyable to read, and there are few chapters that make it feel torn. Please support me by subscribing.

I read about a hundred chapters and read it in Taoist classes. I came back and resubscribed Chapter 116. After seeing this, I subscribed to this. Overall, the novel is quite interesting, but it looks really awkward That is to say, this is probably a fantasy novel. In the setting of this book, although personal power cannot destroy the world, it is still considered a high martial arts. It looks like he is brushing up his emotions. It turns out that after more than 100 chapters, he has only reached level 11, which is a level of progress Speaking of this strength setting, it is even more far from the big picture. I have to say that the author of the system article has really worked hard, worked hard, and tried everything to suppress the realm of the protagonist. The setting of the first three realms has made the intention of suppressing the realm not obvious, so it must be slow And it has been more than 100 chapters. In a novel classified as a fairy, the protagonist only really takes action once. To be honest, did the author put it in the wrong category In fact, I think the author of this book should stop writing it and turn it into a historical novel. Then change the golden finger of the protagonist and lower the world's martial arts settings to the level of martial arts. Well, it will probably be more like the feeling that the prince is very fierce. I think it will be more interesting than now. At least in the martial arts world, no matter how awesome, ten people can be enemies of hundreds of people. According to the prince being very fierce, the protagonist can be regarded as the god of martial arts in the world, and he can kill thousands of enemies. In this way, even if you crazily mention the protagonist's strength, it will not affect the world structure. The protagonist has unparalleled combat power. Then he does business, enters the court, and flirts with girls at the same time. What about you now? The Moh family can block 200,000 people in one field. You want the protagonist to grow too fast. One person can conquer the world. So you try your best to suppress the realm and prevent the protagonist from upgrading. How are you suppressing the protagonist? Isn't this purely suppressing me? It takes a month to save 500 emotion points for level ten to eleven. Even though we were scolding each other, I got more than 1,000 after flirting with Li Caimei for one night. He also has a prefecture-level skill. Let's say that Li Zai is not prone to mood swings. He just looked very... Speechless Maybe the author feels that the protagonist takes advantage of the situation to trick the enemy. Does it mean that after hundreds of thousands of words, it still can't be spread? It seems that the protagonist will not be able to become a saint in the next life And I actually planned to read on, but it is really uncomfortable to press the protagonist's realm The overall novel is really interesting. Some places may be unreasonable, such as Li Caimei's palace. There are only a few people who know the identity of the crown prince's daughter. The guarding force is strictly guarded, but it seems that not many people are paying attention there. Of course, none of this is important. After all, Li Caimei can't leave the palace. How can we be together if the protagonist doesn't take the initiative? It's not a big problem. Just ignore it. It's a pity. I really feel that it's frustrating to watch the fairy tale. In a historical novel, even if the protagonist doesn't know martial arts, no one will say anything. Although I don't like the protagonist who doesn't know martial arts. After all, historical novels are not about martial arts. I have nothing to say. But the fighting ability of the fantasy fairy hero... Oh, it doesn't matter anymore. I don't want to think about it anymore. Let's wait for the author's next book What's the name of the author's previous book? I think you can take a look at it, if it's not about fantasy and immortality.

Is Li Caitan considered a sex offender? In the plot, her charm skills have obviously reached the level of affecting other people's thinking, and she is the work of a charming girl. If it were a man who was obsessed with a woman and committed the crime, his death wouldn't be that miserable in ordinary novels. Why do I call her disgusting and others call me a double standard? She only talks about women but not men. Wouldn't it be more disgusting if a man did what she did to a man? She is pitiful. It was not her fault in the beginning, but then she was willing to degenerate. Isn't it disgusting? Everyone should be responsible for their own choices. If what she does is disgusting, others can't be disgusted with her?

I would like to ask other readers, don't you feel that the protagonist is aggrieved after watching it? It's a good subject matter, but I always feel a little bit unhappy about it. Especially the protagonist's situation, I can't see the protagonist's future without relying on others (the empress).

Doesn't anyone think that the author's thinking is very confusing after seeing that the protagonist is pushed by various things (it feels like he writes whatever comes to his mind), which is at the level of a vernacular novel five or six years ago.

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The recent chapters have become more exciting. Didn't you write this earlier and become popular? It can be seen that the author's writing skills are still very strong. In just one short plot, the characters of Ying Wuque's mother and son were established, and he could also write down all the exciting points that should be made. It's just that the preparation is a bit long, and some of the fun points are given up because of so-called rationality. The early results are not specified well! Keep having fun, it's still possible to get up!

I feel a little numb after seeing more than 200 chapters. This novel is simply a big stage showing birth and sleeping dragons and phoenixes.

Can't the author reflect and reflect? What you think is cool is the coolness of historical writing, but what you write is about a transcendent worldview! 700,000 Words have passed and you are still in the first realm. Who wouldn't feel aggrieved after reading this?

Put the category in history and waste my time watching Where is the Immortal and Where is the Hero

Why does this book have so many monthly subscriptions? I don't know that there are many people in the book circle. It is still a small account opened by the veteran author. The key is that the monthly subscription is almost 20,000, and there are not many people commenting on it.

Overall, the quality of this book is pretty good. I read 180 chapters in one go. It's not a mindless article, but it shouldn't be read too mindlessly. The plot is rather draggy. The author may be the author of early online articles, so the protagonist opens a harem, but not randomly and does not kill women. Even if the woman wants to kill him, as long as she shows her tragic past, the protagonist will let her go.

I was afraid of writing failure, so I deliberately used group portraits to slow down the progress, causing the main line to be pushed very slowly. This is actually a kind of failure. The novel can be written slowly, but it cannot be written lazily.

I saw Chapter 96. The writing is good, but the content is bland and boring. It's not that exciting at all, I just saw a bunch of lip-syncing dramas. Has the protagonist grown up? Yes. But can you see it? No. I got a bunch of spells with my golden fingers, and then the number of spells was close to zero. The main line is kept on the lips but there are too many literary dramas interspersed in it. A few titles were good, but they turned out to have nothing to do with the protagonist. Every time the protagonist appears, others are happy and he appears to finish. The author has the ending in mind and knows where the fun will be, and there is no problem in suppressing the protagonist. Because it's nice to know that the protagonist is the protagonist in the ending. I don't know the ending. I just hope that there will be a climax every dozens of chapters and it will be refreshing. Whether I can finish the book is also a question. This is a problem of many authors. They only keep watering down the number of words, thinking that they are foreshadowing the plot, but in fact they are wearing down the readers' patience. I hope the author will read the article from a reader's perspective before publishing it, and find out what points at the end of each chapter make people want to continue reading. Don't break the chapter for the sake of word count. It seems that a few more words will cost you a lot. Excluding symbols and dialogue character names, half of the content is actually very good. Seeing this, I feel that the food is tasteless and it is a pity to abandon it. 🤫

I feel that the system is a bit broken. I have gathered a bunch of skills and spells but they are useless, and the emotional scenes are too embarrassing. And the golden finger is so unbelievable. It can be used as a detection skill. You can also get skills and experience. Since you are so powerful, you need the blood of Emperor Zhuanxu to dry your hair. You don't rely on blood and rely on the golden finger.

Damn it, we have conflicted synopses. The synopsis of my new book is also about the protagonist acting as a hostage, marrying a princess, and acquiring an empress. Mad, I just wanted to come to the starting point, but I was so killed.

🤔I just finished reading the free chapter, and I don't want to subscribe. It's really slow to upgrade, and I don't fight. I always push the plot with my words.

The author's technique is sophisticated and doesn't look like a novice at all. The plot has both ups and downs. It's old but useful. Depressive plots account for the majority. After all, the reason why so-called slap-in-the-face novels feel good is that they have to be bullied first, and then being looked down upon and then slapped in the face will feel better. The author still understands this aspect very well. It's just a pity that it's a bit wasteful to write this kind of formulaic writing in this style. In the final analysis, the plot is just a process of starting from a proton who is despised by everyone, and getting slapped in the face step by step. This kind of plot is a bit like a formula written in batches by the studio. The underlying framework is the routine of "the three-year period has come, and the Dragon King returns to his throne." However, the author's writing style is really good, and he has a good grasp of the relationship between uplift and depression. It is true that other formula novels cannot do it. So I have a sense of contradiction. I feel that a novel with this kind of frame logic is not worthy of the author's writing style.

The pacing of this book was decent in the early stages, but it sucked in the later stages. The timeline kept changing from 3 to 5 years later, and now it's directly 7 years later. The protagonist's child is 20 years old and he hasn't written a single sentence. Written after 7 years, it feels like a day has passed. The protagonist and the people around him haven't changed at all, which is outrageous! There are so many saints in the human race. Like the nm mascot, they have no fighting ability and cannot be written about. Is it really just the protagonist? ? ?

Sorry, it makes me want to curse, what a piece of shit 🤔

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This is a new book. The level of this previous book is a bit different. I feel like it can't be used as a meal replacement.

The author didn't write the emotional plot well, which made me unable to listen to it, which is a pity. A good book is ruined by the author's inability to write emotional scenes, which makes the male protagonist seem scumbag and disgusting, Hua Chao becomes stupid and annoying, and the IQ of the princess and the prince have also dropped a lot. In just two or three chapters, all four characters were completely destroyed. By the way, I heard this on Xima Tingshu, and this is also the original version.

A very perfect book, with good writing, good plot, good characters, and good emotions. I just don't know why so few people have read it. The author could consider going to the forum to promote books. It would be a pity that the author of such a good book will not continue to write books in the future.

The new book has been sent out for reading, collection and investment.

The book is quite good, but the wording is too modern and feels fragmented.

I was frustrated from beginning to end, but I managed to endure it until the end. . . The result is still the same at the end, which is really not good.

Please let me know if it's unfinished. It's quite enjoyable to watch. If you feel unhappy, you can just skip over and continue reading. Except that it doesn't look like ancient times, everything else looks pretty good.