A Knight's Journey in Another World

It's too stupid. You don't first improve your own strength at the beginning, figure out which of your subordinates are trustworthy, and directly expose the system's capabilities. Are you treating the readers as fools, or are you writing about the people inside as being too stupid?

The protagonist can give a name to the troops under his command, or form a knightly order, how about calling it "Raven Guard"?

The male protagonist can refer to this picture I found these pictures for the male protagonist's legionary battle flags, you can see which one is suitable Viking's raven flag The raven of Hall of Valor Flag Raven Guard Logo Looking at the introduction, the protagonist is taking the technological route, and found a few pictures

I read more than 80 chapters, and I feel like two authors are writing it. In the first part, the protagonist was brave and fearless, but in the later part, he was like a fool when he returned to his own territory to clear up the settlement. Moreover, the knights he strengthened actually went too far. It felt like his own knights were made up of nobles who did not completely listen to the protagonist. The protagonist wanted a completely loyal cavalry, but after a long time, he built a noble knights with evil intentions. It is very poisonous.

In the second chapter, I don't know if the author wants to write a foreshadowing or what? Anyway, I feel that the second picture can be regarded as a failure. I guess there must be a lot of people who were poisoned after seeing the second picture. Speaking of the author, why don't you change it? No one likes the foreshadowing you buried, so I might as well change it to another one. At least the readers of this book won't be driven away in the second chapter.

Since the strength advantage is so great, why use a sword? Apart from being useless, wouldn't it be better to use heavy weapons like hammers and axes?

Chapter 2 is so poisonous that it will probably dissuade 80% of people.

Does the author have a group? I want to add fifty-nine chapters

Why do you have to make excuses for Goldfinger? Do you have to find a big daddy for yourself? What is the benefit of letting others think that it is the power of the God of Light? This hidden danger is too great. If some priest from the Church of the God of Light comes to the army, who will the army listen to? Aren't you properly working for the God of Light?

The name of the knighthood is too weird, Knights of the Long Sword. What kind of third-rate knighthood is this?