Zhutian: Starting from Biochemistry and Becoming a Special Effects God

It is understandable that the author wants to use the Spring and Autumn style of writing to avoid the clichéd opening of the opening to get a golden finger. But it's too old-fashioned, and without the narration about the origins of related things, it becomes very abrupt. Although this can solve the problem of the protagonist taking out something that has never been explained in the subsequent story, it will greatly affect the reader's reading, as if the book has many chapters blocked. Therefore, it is a good thing for the author to have a story in his mind, but if he does not write it out, it will look a bit self-indulgent.

When I see Chapter 5, I would like to make some suggestions while the author has not written much yet. Frequent system tasks are no longer popular nowadays. There are only 4 chapters, and each chapter has at least 1 system task. Many system articles now only serve as a "gate" for the protagonist to operate and use his own ideas; if the author has an outline and must have system tasks, he can just start with a main task. As for the detailed branch lines, don't pop up again and again. Otherwise, the protagonist will completely become a "slave" of the system.

Um... If you have more heroines, you should have more heroines. But as soon as you become your wife, something will happen to you. She will be disabled even if you are not dead. Why do you do so many things?

For a while, he was very affectionate towards his wife, but within a few days he started to have sex with her. His personality was wrong, so let's cut him off.

After watching the beginning, I have no desire to continue reading.

Take a look at the introduction. What is a Lucky Chaser?

😏, how did the big boss sign the contract, can you tell me 😄

Your writing of the three golden chapters is really a mess.

The introduction is very good, but I don't know what the content is like.

😁, I would like to recommend my new book "Breaking Out of the Prison". Please give me your advice. Collected.

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😁, Good morning everyone, it's another day full of energy!

It's so confusing, I don't know what I saw😓

"Sweet Home." . . . . . .

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