Huangtingxianfu

When you write about mortals, you lack the respect that a mortal has for cultivators, and you are still arrogant. For example, in Chapters 1 and 2, in order to express disrespect for the master, the master is practicing, but you show disdain and ridicule behind his back. Do you think that a cultivator has no spiritual consciousness? Let's set it again, you are a time traveler and you travel as a child. After you come here, it can be said that survival is difficult. Someone rescued you for no reason, did not let you practice cultivation, and did not let you practice martial arts. You were unprepared for several years? Your body was taken away, not because of your planning and preparation, but also because of the luck you set. You got the biggest golden finger, which was the Immortal Mansion. You didn't have the power to refine it, so you just shed a drop of blood, and you got the Golden Finger Immortal Mansion? If you get it in someone else's storage bag, won't they recognize the Lord and the Blood? Your so-called martial arts cultivators fought against cultivators, and actually fought to death a bunch of times, and then luck came and they were teleported away. Are you counting on luck? Why don't you write about Long Aotian? The tiger's body shook, and everything was there,

I haven't read it yet, but I think I need to follow up on the new book. I'll point you to the last chapter. In addition, your realm needs to be changed. I think there are dozens of Xianxia books. Normally, Zifu should transition between foundation building to golden elixir. Some people who don't need to overdo it will directly practice Qi building foundation elixir, Yuan Ying, transform into gods, distract and refining the void, or return to the void, and finally transcend the tribulation Mahayana.

It's so long-winded, the master seizes the apprentice and then throws it into the sea of ​​​​consciousness to popularize science for the protagonist. 😓😓

Who invested in me first? Are you too fast? Man, I didn't even get the first investment in my own book, ahhh, I almost cried.

What a wisdom! The first three chapters foreshadow that this master is so powerful and thoughtful! By the fourth chapter, I started to eat the settings! Your IQ was eaten away

Or a combination of the two, I would like to hear your opinions as a reference.

It looks great. I give you all the recommendation votes. Support!

Everyone speaks freely. When I was scanning other books, I read a lot of this chapter. I found that everyone was the most noisy about the settings. What kind of settings are you interested in, and what kind of settings do you hate the most?

Giving advice during the free period is of no use, and the author doesn't get a penny. It's really good for the author, and giving it a subscription is better than anything else.

It's really poorly written, so don't insult mortals.

This book is okay, but too wordy.

It's so beautifully written, but there are too few chapters. Please give the author a boost and update it! It means you have to fatten up before you read it. You have to at least reach 1,000 chapters before you can read it. The author must write it to 3,000 chapters! ! ! I'm really looking forward to the following plot! ! ! The author must keep working hard to write! Never give up halfway! ! ! ! ! ! !

The author's writing style is very good

There are too many cheats, and there is too much nonsense.

The biggest failure is the heroine. The male protagonist acts as if he has never seen a woman before.

Don't always put it aside and forcefully explain it. It's too disgraceful.

It's a pleasure to watch the plot without any nonsense, and the pig's feet also use your brain. What do warriors say to immortal cultivators? Immortal cultivators don't learn protective spells. Without protective talismans, how can they fight in a life-and-death fight without opening a protective talisman? Is it true that during the Qi training period, immortal cultivators don't have protective talismans and can't use protective talismans? I still can't use the protective spells during the Qi training period. I feel that up to now, the immortal cultivators only attack and don't defend. The story of mortal cultivating immortals. Master Jinguang opened a protective diamond talisman for all the Qixuanmen. I am not criticizing the author. These are just personal opinions. I wish the author a great success in this book.

Mortals kill monks, build foundations and swallow heavenly dicks and get fucked mercilessly by the protagonist, build foundations of Dzogchen and break their waists for three thousand taels for mortals, write some honey and self-confidence, and add points to the halo effect of the protagonists. After coding so many words, alas, it cracked! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! The protagonist kills decisively because the author knows that if he doesn't write this way, whoever reads the book will be a fool, and it's better to treat the reader as a fool. Haha, it's hard for you

Why do we use the terms Shi Ge and Shi'er? Too casual

This book starts off too high. At the beginning, you can directly transform into spiritual knowledge, and in the middle stage of Qi training, you can start participating in the Golden Elixir Stage Fair. Continuously attend trade fairs. I didn't stop practicing in the middle

It's another old-fashioned start like seizing the body.

Ah, this... I felt pretty good after reading the introduction. Who knew I would find out that I wanted to have a tj before I even started reading?

Is this a time traveler? Noob! It's so long-winded that I can't even write a few sentences in a whole chapter.

Not bad, keep reading, recommend, reward, keep going😊

Was he sprayed to death? It seems that there has been no update for several days.

Come on, author, don't be influenced by others.

Recommended book: Mortals: Living in space seeking immortality

The sword knocks on the gate of heaven, mortals shed blood, practice swordsmanship, and kill decisively. Please send me a wave of support from all Taoist brothers. Thank you, thank you.