Wuxia Crossover: This Bitter Realm Is a Little Too Powerful

Yandu is recruiting, the author is welcome to join, Gu Ling will personally grant the palace position

What are you writing about? Do you know it yourself?

Thunderbolt is enough to write, and so many things are added to Super Stitch Monster. Not interesting

The worldview of Pili is originally huge and chaotic, and the author has to forcefully add more unrelated worlds into it. I doubt whether the author has the writing power, plot setting, and control ability! It's like a lot of exquisite ingredients are mixed together. An excellent chef can make delicious food, but an incompetent cook will only ruin the ingredients by simmering and cooking!

What a boring book. Are you writing the outline? What about the protagonist's story? What about the plot?

Since your protagonist is so well-written, it should have ascended long ago, leaving it to the avatar to roam the lower realms. Raising the half-ruin to a height that does not belong to him again

What the hell is this? I can't understand it at all. It's fake and the meaning is very formal. I don't feel comfortable watching it. Don't read this too fast. If you read it too fast, you'll be like me. You can't remember anything.

The world view of Pili is huge and confusing. Why does the author have to integrate it into other world lines? He can't control it without some writing skills. The only result is to join Yandu.

Author, do you know what you are writing about? The plight is already messy enough, plus a lot of other messy things.

There are only so many settings in the first chapter, but it's better to change the soup without changing the medicine. The fantasy monster-killing and upgrading set has been transferred over. The Pili Puppet Show does not have so many level settings. It does not mean whoever has the highest force value will win. Besides, martial arts is not about fighting monsters and upgrading. It is necessary to use stories to reflect knights and martial arts.