Wuxia Crossover: This Bitter Realm Is a Little Too Powerful

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What are you writing? Do you even know what you're writing?

Pili was already long enough; adding so much more makes it a complete Frankenstein's monster. It's pointless.

The world of Pili is already vast and chaotic, and the author still insists on adding even more unrelated worlds. I seriously doubt whether the author has the writing skills, plot development, and control to do this! It's like mixing many exquisite ingredients together; a skilled chef can create a delicious meal, but an incompetent chef will only ruin the ingredients by haphazardly stewing and cooking them!

This book is so boring. Are you writing an outline? What about the main character's story? What about the plot?

Since your protagonist is so powerful, he should have ascended to heaven long ago. Let his avatar roam freely in the lower realms. You've elevated this half-baked character to a level that doesn't belong to him.

What the hell is this? I can't understand it at all. It's all so pretentious and flowery, it's annoying. You can't read this too fast, or you'll end up like me, remembering nothing.

The world of Pili is already vast and chaotic. Why did the author insist on incorporating other timelines? Without considerable writing skill, it would be impossible to control. The only result was the inclusion of Yandu.

Author, do you even know what you're writing? The Bitter Realm is chaotic enough, and now you're adding a whole bunch of other nonsensical stuff?

The first chapter has so many settings; it's just the same old thing in a new guise, transplanting the fantasy monster-slaying and leveling-up formula. Pili Puppet Show doesn't have that many level systems; it's not about who has the highest fighting power to win. Besides, martial arts isn't about leveling up by fighting monsters; it's about using the story to embody chivalry and martial arts.