Farm Life Starts with Getting Stone Beads

From the first chapter, you can tell that the author is a 100% newbie! I wanted to speak harshly but was afraid of attacking the author too much, so I just asked a question, which can be regarded as a suggestion. In order to rest my eyes, I use the reading function that comes with Qidian most of the time. If the author has time, could you listen to your first chapter as a bystander? It doesn't matter if the setting is complicated, but your writing is too lengthy and many plots that can be passed over are explained in too detail. As a listener, I feel that it is long-winded and tasteless, like chewing wax. This is very important, it will affect the rhythm of your work. How a book attracts readers has an interesting plot and smooth writing. These are the basic elements. If you want to go further, "plot rhythm" is the top priority: too fast and too dense will make readers tired, too slow and too fragmented will make readers sleepy. If it can be relaxed and relaxed, the performance of the work will not be too bad. Little suggestions, I hope the author will work hard!

Come on, come on, work hard, succeed, success. I like Zhongtian Wen very much and have invested 5 votes to send it.