The Strange Fog Comes to the City, Starting to Evolve from the Cobra

Name: Hu Guoguo Gender: Female Zodiac: Snake Write whatever you want

This book gave me a very strange feeling... It's probably like that: I feel uncomfortable for a day after reading it, and I feel uncomfortable for a day without reading it. This stinky tofu flavored boiled durian chocolate...?

It's great, I finally encountered a real dark story At the beginning, Cobra did not hesitate to kill crazily for strength. His desire to become stronger alone exceeded at least 99% of the protagonists. This is the real strength.

Write that my mother-in-law was swallowed by a snake

After reading a few chapters, I couldn't stand it anymore. I should write about Lone Wolf in the end. You can't take such a photo

I wonder how much the people who support this book have improved their drug resistance? When I was alive, Shen Nong just couldn't hold it. As long as there was a beautiful woman in it, everyone had a love brain. If it was a man, it would be written to death. The main character was also brainless. Can you imagine the poisonous points 10 years ago? He didn't miss any of them.

The introduction successfully dissuaded those who were born in the year of Pig, Dog and Rabbit. . . . .

I don't quite understand, but you can evolve by eating ordinary animals. This is written by the author, so why does the protagonist have to eat people? If he is as irrational as other animals, I can still understand it. There are still people who can eat people rationally without any psychological burden or depth at all. Xiaohei Literature

From the introduction and theme, I think it's okay, but the actual effect is just average.

It is a completely wild beast, a type that can be killed all over the world. Those who are kind to it are profitable, so kill it! Anyone who gets in the way will be killed! If it is beneficial to him, kill him! Those who submit to him can also be killed! No one in his bloodline can surpass him, and he will not die. Anyone who kills him will end up in his belly! From my point of view, some plots are a bit difficult to accept!

Darkness is darkness. The writing and plot are too poor. I can't think of a way to write it at all. I can't learn from the Great Love Immortal Lord. Also, this book can indeed satisfy some people's bad tastes, but it's a bit unrealistic to rely on this book to become popular. The network environment is different. Who knows what people are reading this novel?

Those born in the year of dragon are invincible at the beginning. What is this? This is God's food.

6. The author sees the feudal stubbornness of thought in the first and second chapters and cannot understand it. There are a lot of compliments in the comment area, are you a troll? Are the people you praise all born in the year of the Dragon?

It looks cool, I like the protagonist's strong mentality

I have been reading this book all night. At first I thought it was a dark novel written by a no-brainer, but later I found out that the author is very wise and foolish. He knows everything, and he does it on purpose. He is serious and not serious at the same time. He shows the true meaning of Internet articles while laughing and cursing. I suggest you old bookworms who can't stand it to stick with it, you will make new discoveries.

Just thinking, but the idea is not detailed enough

Good guy, this is not how dark writing is written. You are just being dark for the sake of being dark for no reason. What can you say? It sucks.

Writing skills require some time and effort, and they won't become good all at once. Just play around with the settings, or stick to the Shuangwen route, it's all fine.

Let's talk about some shortcomings in the article 1. The word "King of Soldiers" is too old. First of all, "King of Soldiers" is a title for a first-class sergeant major. They are usually in their forties or fifties. You should know this if you watch the news. . . . . 2. I really can't understand why the protagonist wants to run away when his grandfather and father are both in the city? What reason does the protagonist have to run away? Can he deal with the enemies that created the gray fog, or can he deal with the gray fog? I'm a noob, I insist on going out, and then I'm tricked. Is it interesting to fight back with the halo of the protagonist? 3. There are two factors that influence the killing on the first night. One is the type of beast that is transformed into, and the other is the physical condition before transforming into a beast. The protagonist's father is in his prime and is a tiger, which is acceptable. The protagonist's grandfather is lying in bed with terminal cancer because the cancer evolved into a poisonous snake. How many snakes can be poisoned? Totally unreasonable. They don't have the same trap as the protagonist, they can evolve after eating one.

It looks so poisonous. I had to bear the first wave of poison, and there were more of them in the future. Are you a junior high school student?

Here's another one, I'll give you a monthly pass

We can only take a look at the first 2 to 30 chapters. What will happen next? When I first saw the snake as the zodiac sign, I was still thinking about whether it would turn into a dragon or evolve into something, Eastern or Western, but then what would it be? With the extra head, I thought it was going to be developed in the same way as the Hydra Xiangliu. First it was the King Cobra, and then there was an extra wolf head. The head of the White-Eyed Wolf King, why not the head of the Big Gray Wolf King? I'm laughing so hard. Is this because I can't get along with the words "eye" and "wang"? So according to this setting, the next thing should be the head of some kind of heartless king, right? Then I didn't expect an alien head. What is this? Is it a string? How long do you want it to grow? Why don't you have the head of Sun Wukong?

I didn't have to read it, but it was pretty much the same as what was said in the introduction. It was based on the zodiac sign, but it was written too deliberately. His impatience is precisely because he is a monkey, and because he is a rat, he has a wretched appearance and a cunning mind. Isn't this just a hooliganism?

Very pure dark writing, yes, very awesome

It's a bit messy, but you can still watch it, keep up the good work

The monthly pass is given to you again, update soon! ! ! Speed

How can I encounter such an ancient composition? I was so embarrassed that I had to hold up three rooms and two living rooms.

The beginning is too discouraging. Do you really believe in the zodiac? You never went to school? Is it true that all those born in the Year of the Rat have sly eyebrows and rat eyes? Short-sighted?

Come on, author, I can only give recommendation votes before it is published, and I don't have much money. I can't afford rewards, so I can only subscribe. It can be seen that the author has set a big world view and has already begun to lay the groundwork. However, the pace is a bit fast. There are some places that can be written in detail. From a refreshing article to a serious article on the evolution of alien beasts, otherwise I am afraid that it will be over a million words at most. Come on, wait for you to put it on the shelves.

It's okay. It's available for full order support.