The Ancestors Have Spirits in Heaven

It's very well written. I don't know if it's because I have a low laugh rate or something, but I kept laughing while reading this book. I hope it can keep up. Come on, author, and give me more refinement.

My personal pick: Oriental fantasy, but there are star battleships and fighter jets in it, and the combat system is a bit confusing. In the early stage, it felt like it was a low-level martial arts setting, but later on it was a direct interstellar war... Even Thor came out... The fantasy mixed with science fiction and all kinds of chaos was a bit dissuading. The real protagonist is still a few elders, and the protagonist is like a mastermind behind the scenes.

This book is well written, the plot and conception are exquisite. I will keep following it and look forward to the day when Liu Fan walks out of the coffin. The author should also pay attention to his body. Come on, I will always support you. 🙂

Don't be surprised if this is the first time I've reviewed a novel after reading it for many years! First let me talk about the advantages. The subject matter is acceptable and the author is very serious in writing the book. But the author thinks that your three views are incorrect. This is where you lose the most readers. Secondly, your adjustment is too unclear. If you want to say that Shi Shuangwen's minimum logic is passable! In the end, the character you portrayed was too crude! Everyone knows that writing a book is not easy. I hope you will remember one thing. You are not writing a book for readers, you are writing it for yourself! What I write is a disservice to myself, let alone the readers! I hope you can write good works.

I don't know if the author reads the comments, but I'll just tell you how I felt after reading more than a hundred chapters. In terms of writing style, some places are a bit white and need more work to be fixed, but these are minor problems and don't matter. In terms of the overall plot, the first part is pretty good, and the plot is well-balanced. After it was released, the plot and settings moved a bit too fast, and the rhythm was too out of touch with the previous ones. In terms of style, the author added some writing styles such as supernatural and Chendong at the end, but he was not able to integrate this style into his own style well, making the style nondescript. From the overall setting framework, this setting is very good, very creative and well-written. My specific suggestion is that the author should revise the outline, seriously make some filling in the setting and characters, and work on the detailed outline. The second thing is to adjust the overall rhythm, not too fast or too slow, and grasp your own writing style, don't blindly imitate, control your own rhythm and style. Some styles and descriptions that look good in other books are actually not applicable in another book. Of course, as a part-time author, you cannot be too demanding. In short, I hope that the author will not have too much psychological pressure and burden. Sometimes hydrology is also a good way of writing. Knowing water will make the whole article fuller.

This is the best and most interesting novel I have ever read. I can only say that it is a carrot and a cabbage. Everyone has their own preferences. I vomited after reading Rebirth, City, and Wasted Counterattack after only one or two. If I had money, I would definitely vote for the author. I am so short of money! 😁

There are so many disgusting jokes that I can't stand them anymore. I can only abandon the book. A word of advice to the author: Use disgusting things in moderation and keep using them again and again. It's too strong to persuade people to quit.

The protagonist's wife is very annoying, it makes me sick to watch

A good start and very creative. But as we get to the end, there are more and more poisonous points, the tribesmen become pure tool people, and the protagonist is not well portrayed.

Book Review of Trial of Poison Note: I have only read chapter thirty-five, so this review is only for the first thirty-five chapters. 1. It's not a light-hearted humor or a joke, it's another very straightforward way of making fun, with a bit of an earthy joke feel.       2，，， I was deceived again by a book review that said it was very funny, miserable! 😭

First of all, the introduction of the book is really good and attractive. After reading more than ten chapters, I became depressed. The system can be used, and it's okay to be resurrected and slapped in the face, but the curse mark in the system is too much! What does the author think, can't the curse seal be used as an assistant? If you insist on changing the human nature with a curse seal, do you think you are playing a single player, and you can change your personality casually? This is a living person in the world, not game data. I can't stand it anymore and I'm going to leave now.

It's very nice, but can it be faster? Or can I send the blade to you?

It's really interesting to read this introduction. Who would have thought of using ancestors as weapons? The author is really a genius.

Two monthly passes are given 🤓, come on

Short and weak! This ancestor has a spirit in heaven and has almost become a demon in my mind. I feel itchy if I don't look at it for a day. Are you feeling weak?

The author hopes you stick to your own ideas! How many authors have listened to this and that! Entering the palace!

Two updates is too few. How about two more updates? 🤝

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Like other women, they only like the protagonist based on his appearance.

666 The Invincible Ancestor can no longer be expressed in words. I hope to break out. At the same time, the author pays attention to his health and remembers to go to the hospital.

Md, even though I read one chapter every day, it's so fun to read. I haven't stopped following it since my senior year in high school. I'm so awesome.

Faster speed. Recommended.

I want to be another protagonist of this book

This book is written inexplicably. I don't know what's so exciting about it?

Tomorrow is Tomb Sweeping Day... I was recommended this on the home page today, and now I'm panicking

Staying at home every day, there are only two updates a day. Are you planning to make a baby with your wife?

This... There is a saying that it is too poisonous. Maybe the author originally wanted to use some plots to show excitement and laughter, but because the writing style is not good and overused, it looks very poisonous, and the whole article is full of incorrect views. Don't just take anything. This is the world. This is reality. If this is reality, have you encountered it in reality? How many times have you met? It's just because the reality is that most peaceful people have upright views, so you rarely find this kind of thing around you. After reading a little bit of the part that hasn't been put on the shelves, I guess some people want to comment on what they want to say without reading it, but this kind of thing really goes against my three views and has a bad tendency to insult women. Let alone other novels, I haven't seen them. I see so many comments in the comment area that I don't want to comment.

Let's work together to fight against the epidemic. The author should not go out and wander around. Please write with peace of mind. Let's read a few more chapters at home.

It feels like the author is becoming more and more idiotic and disgusting as he writes. Is he planning to write a whole book that is so inexplicably disgusting?

The book is still okay, but there are indeed a lot of poisonous points, but I am used to it. Which online article does not have some poisonous points? The more you read, the higher the poison resistance will be. But I still hope that the author can pay attention to the book you write. You cannot just write some poisonous chapters just for your own pleasure. If the writing power is not enough, I suggest not to use the same leather point repeatedly, the title of bulldozer, just play it once or twice, don't bring it out over and over again There are also names. There are many poisonous names in this book, such as the part about Liuyang Dog. It would be fine if he is a villain who does all kinds of evil, but not. Do you think readers like to read this kind of content that tramples on the dignity of others? Anyway, I don't like it I forgot about the rest of the poison, I never take it to heart when I read the poison, I just remember these Finally, I hope the author can be tougher. It is not an exaggeration to say that readers are "food and clothing parents", but calling BBMM directly is a bit too much. . . .