In Tokyo, You Die If You Don’t Fall in Love
人在东京，不谈恋爱就会死
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 1.0M Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Subgenre
- Everyday Romance
- Updated
- 3d ago
- English
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This book was quite interesting at first, but Akane Kamishiro's story left me speechless. I thought it was just a short subplot, but this five-year-old girl's story is longer than the main characters'! This part of the story is profound and philosophical, but! I didn't come here for this kind of boring supernatural event; I wanted sweet, slightly cheeky romance! This five-year-old girl, how am I supposed to enjoy this?! Baka yarou!!!
Good heavens, only 37 on the book club leaderboard? That's terrible!
Are you trying to write a romantic story where the protagonist is willing to go against the whole world and protect a little girl no matter how many casualties it causes? How did you come up with such a disgusting plot?
You can write your negative reviews here, and I will try my best to reply. I've moved the original version here; I don't want to affect the viewing experience of new readers.
It was fine at first, but it started to poop when it started raining.
The writing is very messy; the romantic subplots, dialogue, and character introductions are all extremely disorganized. At times, it even feels like the text itself is jumbled. I wanted to write a Japanese light novel, but I couldn't capture its essence. Novels in the Japanese light novel genre usually have some subtlety or riddles in their plot and dialogue. But this novel just feels rambling and incoherent; to put it bluntly, it's "a bunch of illogical nonsense."
It's still raining, it's still raining! Maybe I should just change the novel's title to "Rainy Day."
There are too many descriptions of rain.
This is overshadowing the main point! Isn't this supposed to be a romance novel? Why is it acting like a supernatural/psychic story? Wouldn't it have been better to have the protagonist gradually resolve his inner conflicts, and then the rain would have stopped? Besides, isn't it a bit much that a single rainstorm caused damage to the entire city's economy and buildings?
I feel like I've been tricked; this isn't a typical story at all.
In summary, it's very messy. The romance plot is messy, and there are forced insertions of romance scenes to gain "heart points," making the whole book seem chaotic. Also, what's with the constant rain? It started off well, but it felt toxic from the moment the rain started.