I Was Taken Advantage of by a Weird Lady

Got caught hard by a bad woman 😭

The gap between the level before and after is too big. It was still amazing until the end of Yaowang Valley, and then it got worse and worse from the Chu Kingdom chapter, and the level plummeted. When it came to the Kingdom of God chapter, it would be really hard to watch unless you wanted to see the ending. There is so much foreshadowing for Li Yi in the beginning, but the ultimate goal and reversal are so simple. The character design becomes more and more disintegrated later on, the character portrayal is thin and facial makeup, the routines are clichéd, and the plot can be seen at a glance and the progress is beginning to become sluggish. I was afraid of missing any details and foreshadowing at the beginning, but it would be too slow to catch up to ten lines later. Although I saw the author saying that the first few articles were too labor-intensive and the return on investment was not proportional, it is still quite uncomfortable to see this book getting worse and worse as I write it, because I do not doubt the author's ability and I am sure that he can write the rest well, but I just feel it is a pity. I hope that the author can maintain a high level of performance in the next book he writes, or perhaps have time to refine this one.

When will the husband be chased to the crematorium?

The plot is quite novel, the writing is okay, and the writing is good. But I have a question for the author about whether he can continue writing this book. The title of the book has revealed that the lady is the heroine, so have you ever considered: So the heroine treats the hero like this (betrayal, seizing luck, devouring, using the hero as an oil lamp forever), how generous the hero must be to forgive the heroine, and what should the heroine do to survive and chase her husband? Does it rely on face or her black heart? Have you ever thought about this issue when you were setting the outline? Can you accept it yourself? If you can accept it, can your readers accept it?

Substitute into the male protagonist. I just want to get rid of the heroine 😒 There are reasons but they are all used as excuses

The author can describe in detail what the universal philosophy is in the human world, what the universal philosophy is in the fairy world, and then the contradiction between the core philosophies of different characters, that is, the path they practice, and the universal philosophy. I think every extraordinary soul has creeds that he can occasionally transcend, but cannot trample on. They make their will not succumb to the secular world and become saints. At this stage, the protagonist's personality is really not outstanding and not likable enough. The reason is probably that the protagonist has no initiative. Perhaps the subsequent development of the story will allow the protagonist to gain the initiative, but we have to circle back to the previous questions. How does the protagonist look directly at the grudges of the past life, how to resist the tendency of self-destruction in the torture of painful memories, how does he maintain his contempt for fate in the process of struggle, has he rationally prepared an ending for Li Yi that is enough to resolve the grudges while leaving room, and transform into an extraordinary soul in the process? Also, is the protagonist and the previous life the same person? Is he willing to become the person he was in his previous life? Can he become his former self? What is his understanding of the relationship between the two? The core of Descartes' philosophy is "I think, therefore I am". No matter how many subjective reasons Li Yi has, the suffering she caused does affect the protagonist's "I", and she must repay it, such as depriving her of her senses and banishing her consciousness into nothingness for a thousand years. Only then can there be a beginning and an end, and an end and a beginning. There is also the problem of depression and lack of enjoyment mentioned by book friends. Personally, I think it is caused by the lack of fearless narrative. The soft words make the strong emotions of love and betrayal seem dull, and a strong and fearless man can even overturn the table. The decisive Ye Wenjie in The Three-Body Problem is far better than the hesitant Cheng Xin.

Why does it look a little depressing?

Read the latest chapter and write down my opinion: Does Li Yi love the protagonist? It's love. She is willing to dedicate her two lives to cultivate herself to become a useless person, and also to help the male protagonist become an immortal. Is Li Yi good to the protagonist? I think her kindness to the protagonist is a kind of "I think it's good for you" (it feels like parents forcefully decide the future life of their children) The biggest contradiction between the male and female protagonists now is that the concepts of love between the two are not equal. The heroine does not put herself on the same level as the male protagonist. The heroine who is the reincarnation of the emperor subconsciously has the idea of ​​​​a superior. She has always positioned herself as a dictator and the powerful one. She does not respect the male protagonist's ideas, or in other words, she does not care what the male protagonist thinks. But the status of both parties in love should be equal. Li Yi does not believe in the male protagonist's ability, but only believes in his own vision of the future and his cultivation in two lifetimes. This is also something that the male protagonist cannot forgive. The male protagonist proved that the two could have gone hand in hand, but Li Yi betrayed the male protagonist's trust and took away the entire future by one person. No matter what, I still hope that the heroine can get her back, and I hope it will be a happy ending.

The writing is fast-paced in the early stage, and then slowly slows down in the middle stage. Moreover, after watching it for so long, I still don't know the realm clearly, and I haven't written out the strength of each realm. The writing is very good, but the only difference is probably the grasp of the rhythm and the feeling of a stream of consciousness. If the pace in the early stage is faster and the Shura Field is written in the middle and later stages, how the Shura Field unfolds depends on you, the author, because I have never written a novel. A good novel cannot rely solely on the interaction between the protagonist and the heroine. After all, it is not a daily novel. You can divide the main line into several branch lines, write a few important supporting characters, arrange a relatively contrasting supporting character to compare with several other supporting characters, and then use your writing to take off directly. The author can also send the outline and we will discuss it together🐶 Finally, I really have no money now. When I have money in the future, I will add subscriptions and rewards to you.

I picked it up and read another section. The writing was okay, but the rest was really bad. Especially the male protagonist looked like a clown. This kind of character is really not popular nowadays.

In the raising book, I was kicked when it came time to chase my husband, thank you xdm

Damn it, this supporting character thinks too much and actually wants to sleep with the protagonist's woman.

After reading nine chapters, the author's writing is good, but the pace is ridiculously slow. Pig's feet is a retard, so that's it!

After reading dozens of them, I feel like the main character is too useless. This is a good book. Don't ruin it yourself.

The author's writing is not bad, but what's going on with the plot? It can only be described as sparse, but can't it be told in a normal narrative structure? There are also a bunch of small bugs caused by unclear explanations. Even if you are interested in the subsequent development, it is really difficult to read.

It's pretty good, but why don't we make the image of the "goddess" a little more ugly? She obviously looks like a prostitute selling meat, but she has to carry it

There is no trace of a husband-chasing crematorium at all. Isn't the author just trying to sell someone else's meat? I just came to see the crematorium, and it didn't even cost 200 yuan.

I thought I could kill Li Yi. Boiling Sheep is so disgusting. After all, it was the bug that took all the blame.

Laughing to death, when you look at this profile, it's Chi Yao, the eternal god emperor, right?

Female channel's favorite sadomasochistic love What kind of sadistic master, chasing husband, chasing wife, crematorium.

If you have one harem, you will vote for one monthly ticket. If you have two harems, you will vote for two monthly votes. If you have three harems, you will vote for three monthly votes... This means that you will vote for as many monthly votes as you have for each harem. Does the author understand?

I think it would be good if I could write about this subject ntr

Finished the book? It's pretty good, a bad ending is better than a eunuch. Come on, author, the next book will continue! ! ! 👍👍

The author is awesome. In the last chapter, after writing 800 chapters in a dozen pages, it still feels very reasonable and not abrupt.

Isn't this the vest from Jian Yisi Sword? The style is very similar.

This author must have written about the emperor's uncle before, the taste is too strong

Ah? What is the situation? Could it be the same as the Seventy-Two Changes?

I got excited and saw that this book has been updated 😰

Just like in Fire Fist, let your body continue to heal and never die, and let the never-extinguishing flame continue to burn you, what can you do? There is no way! This is pure suffering, and when it does come it can only be endured in despair! Similarly, imagine a lover who, for various reasons, forever tortures your body and soul, and forces you to forgive her. This is also deliberately designing suffering! It is to construct a tragic fate for yourself that will never be restored.

Damn it, I was ready to abandon the book, but after the update in the past few days, I had to start reading it from the beginning.