The Heartthrob in the World of Heroines

The text is very good, and each female character is well portrayed. There are so many characters that I can't even remember their names, and they keep burying themselves in the background all the time. It's so tiring to watch! The male protagonist is really unlikable. He is always looked at as a weakling. He is both girly and a bit naive like White Lotus. He has provoked other girls in the team, and he even holds the hands of other girls out of excitement. Is this an innocent White Lotus setting? How can a normal time traveler be like this? This kind of lustful and innocent setting is good for drama, and by the way, he is also a bit girly! 😵😵😵

I feel like the author gets better at writing towards the end, and the plot is very good.

It is a good book, well written, and I have collected it. There are also flaws, and I'll complain about them. I've read almost a hundred chapters, and the male protagonist doesn't interact with the female characters as much as the male villain. The male villain's image is more three-dimensional than the male protagonist. The difference between the male protagonist and the male protagonist is probably that the male protagonist can play the female role, but the male villain cannot because of the needs of the plot. The character transformation is also a bit difficult, but luckily the poison resistance is sufficient. , the first problem after traveling through time was to save his parents, and then, he was inexplicably robbed into the ruins, so it was understandable that he could quickly enter the main plot. But, your protagonist's maid at the beginning betrayed her without even writing much about it. The protagonist paddles in the tomb, and the mother suffers in prison. Hahaha I finally saw my fiancée on the rooftop, but she looked confused? Good guy, you didn't initiate this marriage. The most outrageous thing is that I see that now, the male protagonist has no role at all and has a low sense of presence. He only has full tool attributes when the plot requires it. Personally I feel the pace is too fast.

To be honest, either the writing style is very good, or it is really unbearable. There are more than 100 chapters, and the protagonist is just a soy sauce, a tool to promote the development of the plot. It's a bit coquettish in itself, with feminine descriptions. It's okay for female videos, but you're a male video? This way of writing is very unpopular in modern novels. As a result, not many people will read this novel, and even if they do, they will most likely be dissuaded from it. Also, don't bring yourself into a feminist worldview, otherwise you will feel poisonous all the time. I am not saying that this novel is not well written. On the contrary, it is very good. This kind of writing is rare, but this kind of writing is not suitable for current male videos.

It's a good book. It's a little different from other heroines' world views, but it seems to be more touching. The author's writing is great, the characters are well portrayed, and the two-part business is also online! However, there are still some poisonous points in the early stage. Overall, it is T1 among the female heroes!

Such a mediocre protagonist, with a cowardly and ridiculous character, is able to mingle among a group of outstanding women. No matter they are good or bad, no matter their position, they like each one, just like a clown. No ability, no opinion, no integrity, no distinction between right and wrong! The heroine setting is superfluous, it just makes it easier for the protagonist to mingle with women!

The characters in this book are more vivid, and the plot also has ups and downs, with twists and turns. From it, you can see elements such as the heroine, reverse reasoning, and the yandere Shura field 😁. However, the reverse thrust elements that I like are a bit lacking, and the author drives too little. You need to know that LSP is the primary productive force 😁 Please increase your efforts (the author should also set up a communication group as soon as possible)

Sister-in-law, I'm going to blow it up right away. Don't miss this book if you are a harem party member. The writing, plot, worldview, background of each wife, and golden fingers are very well written. The only shortcoming... Is that the number of words is too few to read. The last one, you know?

The picture is not original, but provides some image reference

If you look at the title of this book, the focus is clearly to write about a soul who is truly worthy of being a heartthrob, rather than to give a boring soul to reach out to all kinds of women.

The picture is not original, but provides some image reference. In fact, this picture should be more suitable for Gu Qingyao

The author's writing is quite good, but the male protagonist is too unlikable. He always loses consciousness when looking at a beautiful woman and can't walk. It's really poisonous. I suggest that the character can be more strong, cold and aloof. Different from the men in this world, in the male videos, there is also a contrast between the cool and cold fairy falling in love and then descending to the mortal world, which is also very interesting. Make a suggestion and forget about it being adopted by the author.

There is no such thing as a harem novel. If you are not convinced, come and argue. Remember to bring the title of the book.

I have signed a contract. I will read every comment. Comments are welcome. I hope readers will support me. Thank you very much!

The worldview may be more like a combination of reality and fantasy in the picture.

The writing is great, but the protagonist's character is not likeable, and there is a bit of a lustful feeling about seeing a beautiful woman unable to walk. He doesn't look like a time-traveling man, and he feels a bit like a sissy. Forget it, I won't watch it anymore

I don't like the male protagonist very much. I feel like he can't move when he sees a woman. Maybe I aimed too quickly. Although the question types and so on are very good, I don't have a sense of involvement...

I came across this treasure book by chance. (๑>灬<) Both the background of the heroine's world and the context of the writing are eye-catching. Compared to White Lotus (which is also a female novel that I couldn't stop reading), the larger setting should make more readers accept it. There are many characters currently appearing, and each one has his or her own story. When reading this book, I feel like the camera is focused, and the existence of the male protagonist Ruohuan may sometimes be downplayed, but because of the setting of Li Renzhu, everyone becomes a very individual and unique person. Everyone has their own story, whether it is joy or sorrow, which is irreplaceable. The most important thing is this is a harem novel (๑ᵔ⌔ᵔ๑). If you like reading this type of book, don't miss it! I'm crying and begging for more updates every day. I'd like to see more if you vote! I really want to see it!

The writing is very good, but why am I so tired from reading it? After a busy day, readers choose to read online articles, mostly as a way of entertainment, so they tend to be light, entertaining, funny, immersive and refreshing. In this case, the logic can be weakened, after all, as long as it is enjoyable and comfortable to watch. After reading this book, I felt unusually heavy, with too many clues and constant foreshadowing, and many women died. Even though it is a female-dominated world, it still felt awkward.

I couldn't sleep in the middle of the night, so I decided to post a few thoughts. First of all, as an author, every character is a living existence to me. He has his own character, story, ideas, and even means of doing things. Cheng Haoxuan is such a pure egoist. He will only consider the pros and cons of himself when doing things, and will undoubtedly reveal his original desires. From the perspective of creating a villain, I succeeded. He is indeed quite annoying. Of course, the main reason for focusing on him is for the richness of the story. Originally I wanted to spoil a few sentences, but after thinking about it I decided not to. But what you don't need to worry about is that he abandoned everything and is destined to have nothing in the future. Can such a person end well?

What a mentally retarded book🙄🙄

I really feel like the rest of the writing was too fast. And if I update to the latest chapter, well, just like Bai Magnolia, there will be no more after Bai Gulan became the way of heaven. To be honest, I feel a bit lethargic, but the writing is really good.

Please, the author, no. The novels I have read have been three eunuchs in a row. I beg you.

After reading the first few dozen chapters, do every villain need to be cleaned up? Each villain also needs to recall why he became evil. After the memories are cleaned up, I kill the villain. I am really speechless. If you want to kill him, kill him. Before death, there are villains who talk about life every day. The key is that you just talk, you can't talk about it, wash it all, wash it all for me, even if you are a passerby, wash it for me.

The writing is quite good. I don't know why it's not popular. Maybe it's the name..?

The writing is good and fluent, some of the plots are also very thoughtful, and the characters are vividly drawn. I highly recommend it. The only shortcoming is that the details are not well written. When I read it, I felt that the writing was incomplete. For example, after Bai Gulan was taken out by the protagonist, there was not a word describing her appearance and the plot after she woke up outside. This made me feel that there was something missing, and there were still a few details that were not well drawn. If the author had thought more about it, it would have been perfect. As for the protagonist, sometimes there are a little less scenes, which feels a bit strange, but there are a few places where the protagonist is well written. However, I hope that the protagonist's personality charm can be improved a bit. Now, except for a few plots, the protagonist's character performance is only average. Finally, the interaction between the protagonist and the female character is exciting and interesting. Come on, I have fully booked it and I will always support it.

This tomb copy is too long and took more than 100 chapters to finish.

I forgot to mention Luo Suxin's sister at the end

It's really beautiful. I like the author very much. I must finish it. Please.

It looks good. I beg you, the main author, to finish it.