The Ninja Who Was Burned to Death by Fire Escape in Konoha

I read it when I was a child. At that time, I felt that it was not very attractive at first, and the title of the book was too funny. Now that I have picked it up again, it feels good to read it again. I have read it for so many years, and it is among the best. Two genuine monthly passes of Lightspeed support 👍👍👍 Come on, author.

The biggest drawback of this novel is that there are too many original characters and the pace of the first half of the novel is too slow, making it difficult for people to get involved. If you have one or two original characters in a fan novel, you have to have so many original characters, but the early pace is so slow, which will give people the feeling of cheating.

The content outline of this book is good, and I think it is a rare good book among Naruto fan fiction. In addition, I appreciate the author's secondary creation of the power system and characters in Naruto. Maybe the author has a certain talent for writing about farming and hegemony. The only pity is that part of the pacing of this book is not in line with today's fan fiction market. It can only be said that today's novel culture is all about fast food. No wonder this novel is not popular.

This version of Black Jue is a bit powerful, super shadow level, the mastermind behind the money exchange.

Seedlings, the opening chapter has the appearance of a great god. It's the kind of book that can make you remember a bunch of characters in no more than 10 chapters. I generally lack a sense of immersion in games outside of the Land of Fire, but this Sandgakure grabbed attention from the beginning. I have said before that some powerful authors of fan fiction will take the initiative to create second settings to complicate the world view and characters, rationalize the logic, improve the IQ of the supporting characters, and flesh out the settings that Kishimoto did not give. Because Kishimoto is just a shounen manga artist, shounen manga is only about "hot blood and getting stronger", and only shows one side of the world view. If you don't enrich the settings and develop new ideas in fan fiction, others might as well just read the original work. This is a book set in Fengmansha Hidden Village. Fill in the history of Sand Hidden Village during the period when the 2nd Kazekage abdicated and the 3rd Kazekage came to power. It also shows that at that time, in addition to Konoha, other ninja villages also faced obstacles from family power. The original creation of the competition between various forces in Shayin Village. It can be said that the political IQ is up, the original force is also very reasonable, and the logic is also very good. The side answer is why Shayin appeared in the later era and looked like a ghost. It's the kind of thing where you go from a shounen manga to a young adult manga in an instant. However, success is also a failure, and failure is a failure. The author's original characters and power game development are very powerful. If it takes place in Konoha, and there are many popular "original characters" appearing, then the collision between them and the enrichment of the plot should be very charming. However, the stage is a village hidden in the sand, and there are no bright original characters. The only one who connects the readers' hearts is the protagonist. So should this protagonist be more worrying? It is still important to attribute great power to oneself. The author writes too much about the game and development between forces, and does not pay enough attention to the research on the improvement of the protagonist's own strength. There is no golden finger, and it is not advisable to completely abandon the pretense and excitement. When I was reading it, the first 10 chapters made my hair stand on end. I felt that the author was awesome and had the demeanor of a great master. Then as I watched it, my mood dropped, and I found that the protagonist's expectations were not enough, and the excitement was not enough. It feels like the stool is missing one leg and is underdeveloped. However, this kind of author who can create the world without being ignorant of others is still quite powerful. It would be nice to give it a little more comfort.

This book strengthens Konoha too much... Yes, Sarutobi Hiruzen will take the initiative, and Danzo will not engage in civil war. I feel that Konoha doesn't have that flavor anymore... In the original book, no matter how miserable the battle in Konoha is, the sand ninjas have reached Mount Kikyo, the Iwa ninjas have also attacked, and Hiruzen is also sitting firmly on the wood. Ye didn't move, preferring to let Minato lead a team like Kakashi who was promoted by the line of fire to blow up the bridge... On the night of the Nine-Tails, Konoha was almost gone, and Danzo and Nebe didn't take action. This book actually shows that Danzo understands the overall situation and doesn't hold back... I can't recognize these people anymore...

The starting setting is so contradictory that even a replica of Itachi was created just to give the protagonist a reason to kneel down and sue for peace with the other faction after being assassinated twice. He is so clueless that he dares to come to the door without even understanding his own situation. How much meat does the family line that accounts for most of the village's interests have to cut to satisfy the other party's appetite? Now that we have come to this point, defecting is better than being a dog. It's so frustrating!

It's a pity to throw away food if it's tasteless. The protagonist is also a genius, he can use all kinds of ninjutsu at will, his chakra is so huge that it makes no sense, he can crush his opponents politically, and he can create ninjutsu with ease. Unfortunately, Minato Namikaze only managed to create a Rasengan in his lifetime, while Kakashi could only use a Chidori.           ，，，，，yy，                                                                                                                                                                                                                                             off out of which the blue fire escape came from are suggested to the author as a cheat.

The idea of ​​​​the opening is simply disgusting. The problem has been solved by destroying the enemy's body. The protagonist does not think about counterattack. Before he thinks about escaping, he just bets on whether the enemy will be stupid enough to leave an irreconcilable threat to defeat him...

Seeing the Jounin test, he was so poisoned. He kept emphasizing the strong mentality. He knew that there was a big ambush from the cloud ninja and insisted on rushing forward. This was to create his own supreme path in the ninja world. It should be called unbearable.

Seeing now, he summarized the rules that the master of murder asked the family to abide by. The family's financial and military power must be handed over to them, and they cannot enjoy themselves. It also requires all the knowledge of the family members, and cannot give important rights. It does not allow them to enjoy luxury, but also allows them to practice hard. It is impossible to do it for 250. You can't ask for money, power, or enjoyment. I just want to know what is the point of continuing to work with the sand ninja under such circumstances?

It is rare to see a novel that is not about the Leaf Village. It also starts very early and completes the content of the Second World War and the Third War of the Chunin World. And it's not a story about one person's growth. Please continue to work hard and write in a way that is different from ordinary Naruto fans.

Withdraw, your character is too stupid. He was going to kill the whole family, and he even went to lick it. Reform will also offend a large number of people, who will be used as weapons. He just faked his death and went to sue the big name. Isn't it okay to drag a third party into the water? Bet your life on the kindness of others?

I haven't read much yet, so I just read a few chapters. After all, it's the Chinese New Year, so I went out to drink at any time. I couldn't read the novel very quickly, intermittently, and I had to comment on problems with the setting. There were quite a few problems in just six chapters. First, the change of chakra properties is a compulsory skill for a normal ninja. It refers to the operation of converting chakra into corresponding attributes when using escape techniques. It's not a high-end skill, it's just a must-have skill. The high-end skill of chakra nature change refers to the fusion of chakra nature change (bloodstain limit, elimination, net). It can all be called the fusion of nature change. This is a high-end skill, something that not many jounin can master. The second problem is that Chiyome was born, not a commoner, but the wife of the first generation Kazekage. The third question is about Scorpion killing the Sandaime. One is that Sunagakure Village did not respond. The other is that Chiyo knew that Scorpion killed Sandaime and was indifferent. It is also said that there is no clue about Kage's death. In fact, the original book expresses that the third war was because Sunagakure Village used too many manpower to find the Sandaime, which weakened the defense line and allowed the enemy to take advantage of it. He also lamented that if he had calmed down at the time, this war might have been avoided. Umihanzo said it, and Umihanzo also said that the ANBU had been investigating the Sandaime incident for many years. Not to mention the body, there were no clues at all. In addition, when Chiyo saw the scorpion and took out the Sandaime, she looked in disbelief and even doubted her life. This proves that the Sandaime actually has no clues at all in Sunagakure Village.

As a Suna Ninja, why is the name of the novel called Konoha...

If you don't change it, it will be difficult to become popular. I'm quite confused when I read it. Since I don't want to teach the protagonist magnetic escape, hate the protagonist and oppose the protagonist, then why do I write the third generation as being in the same family as the protagonist? The protagonist is still his nephew. It would be better to write the third generation as belonging to another family, or simply not have the same last name as the protagonist.

Why is the heroine original? Are there no women in the Sand Kingdom?

There are too many self-pleasure factors. The protagonist is in a state of opposition to the above, constantly trying to help the village to weaken himself, but you don't even have any ideas in your mind. I don't even think about settling the scores later. Just do whatever you are told. Then if you stay in this village and have a ball to use, you might as well defect. So far, I haven't seen any benefits that the village has brought to the protagonist.

The author asked the protagonist to kill a few famous characters from Konoha in the original novel. It's already almost 900,000 words long, and I still can't wait for the original character to die. When you write a fanfic, you borrow the worldview and popularity of the original work, but since the protagonist of your book is from an enemy of Konoha, you should find a way to kill some of Konoha's later powerful people. Always kill your own self-created characters. If you think about it from another angle, there is not much difference between you and the protagonist of Sand Hidden. Anyway, these supporting characters did not appear in the comics. The three ninjas can kill anyone at will, and the plot line involving changes also makes people full of expectations. Now it is a second creation. Stop protecting the original characters of Konoha. Kill them when they should. As long as the logic is consistent, it will make readers more interested in the subsequent changes in the plot. Since you write fan fiction, don't you want to change your existing destiny? Your protagonist is a sand ninja, so you should change the fate of the sand ninja. Those people who are most afraid of Konoha during World War III or the plot years are still those who feel lonely after reading it. In order to keep the future plot unchanged, Konoha's supporting characters are not killed, which makes readers uncomfortable.

The Kazekage series almost kills you at the beginning, but then the protagonist returns to the village and comes up with various plans? Then I read the catalog and reconciled with the uncle who wanted to kill you? All five poisons

I'm wondering what level Naruto is most annoying to watch. I know it's to better divide the power, but I just don't like watching it because it feels like a drama. Naruto is a typical overkill, with strong output, but can easily be killed by evil. Even if those of the exceptional class were attacked by surprise and didn't react, they would still be beeping as they should.

The heroine is rubbish. The author is not good at emotional dramas, so he doesn't have to write it. When I saw this in the chapters I subscribed to, I felt like I was spending money to get myself punished. Overall, the book is okay, and it can be regarded as a masterpiece among Naruto fans. However, the emotional scenes are too embarrassing. Really, the plot is designed to make the heroine a god.

The name of the protagonist is so strange. It sounds like the name of the country Gaoli Bangzi.

Good books are not popular. The description of the techniques is very rich, the system development plan of each technique is clear and traceable, the foreshadowing and foreshadowing are in place, the five village weapon fighting is exciting, and the main wind escape is very novel. It's been a while since I've seen a novel that doesn't rely on self-exploration of the Three Holy Lands. The exploration of the power system is so exciting, and it seems that he has a lot of thoughts about Naruto. After all, you are a time traveler. It would be too boring to follow the plot all the time and you would not be able to see the wings of the butterfly. Nowadays, a large number of novels are about Uchiha and Hinata, and I am tired of aesthetics. The ending was a little hasty, and a lot of foreshadowing was not used. For example, where did the scorpion go? . . Nagato died pretty quickly. . . In short, food and grass🌹🌹

This book is really good to read. The protagonist's strength increases very reasonably, and the cheating is not outrageous. Also, the strength of the people around him or his enemies will also increase. There is no other book where the main character becomes stronger alone. The plot is also very good. They are all intelligent. It's just that two chapters a day is a bit missing.

I always feel that the name was not chosen well and it was a waste of time for this book, which is very well written.

The quality of this book is very good among Naruto fanfics. The author has added some reasonable and detailed settings, the ninjutsu system is also more complete, the plot progresses normally, the protagonist is likeable, the characters' intelligence is not great, the behavior is basically logical, and the writing is crisp and neat, but there are some places that make people really nervous. The first is the strategy and wits part at the beginning. It cannot be said that it is completely illogical. I can only say that it is a bit taken for granted. In addition, the early writing is a bit jerky and some plots seem unnatural. In addition, the author may not know much about Zheng Zhi. But then again, the Zheng Zhi part of Naruto is a mess... Of course, the above small flaws are compared with mainstream wits. Among Naruto fans, it is quite capable, at least countless times better than those street stall literature that has conspiracy theories in mind. The next thing that makes me most nervous is the setting of certain plots. First of all, the protagonist himself is not very strong in the early stage, and lacks planning and motivation for the development of his own strength. In sharp contrast, the author likes to design plots where the protagonist teaches others, and is basically in this cycle. "The protagonist introduces the topic - everyone raises questions - the protagonist makes a surprising statement - everyone is shocked and disappointed - the protagonist explains - everyone is enlightened, ecstatic and convinced...", Which is quite cliche. The pretense is a routine, and the author's writing is not outstanding enough. Although sometimes the protagonist's thoughts can be seen as the author's new things, most of the time they are just spoilers through the identity of the time traveler. Reading too much really makes people aesthetically tired. What's even more exaggerated is the main character. Kaku also really likes lectures and other activities. Every time the NPC's reaction is the same routine, which is really embarrassing. When the war with Konoha started, I was completely stunned. Did the NPCs who were guided by the protagonist really develop a bunch of ninjutsu? (I also said that the protagonist's skills were not big enough, but now it looks like they are huge, no less than any famous teacher system.) Are the bunch of rotten fish and shrimps around the protagonist suddenly able to compete with the wealthy families of Konoha? Author, are you sober? This is the world of Naruto that emphasizes talent, not the world of immortality next door? Did the co-author give them an enlightenment by cutting off their hair and cleansing their marrow? Especially the heroine, who is considered the stiniest and worst among a group of stinky fish and rotten shrimps. As a result, it suddenly reached the point where Orochimaru also felt that his future was limitless. Is this reasonable? Also, the secret method developed by the protagonist based on his own flame can be used by others without the protagonist's fire? Is the only special characteristic of the protagonist that he knows the plot and has a slightly stronger soul? This is not the way to write a group portrait, especially when the instructional plot has affected the shaping of other accessories to a certain extent. All the supporting characters are a behavioral reaction template in front of the protagonist. The protagonist's character has become a chatterbox who likes to giggle (the protagonist smiles at all times, and smiles whenever he speaks, I don't know what's wrong with this).       ，，，，，

The most logical fan, looking forward to the next one.

The writing is very good. I have followed all the latest chapters and subscribed to them all. Come on, author!

The strength of each village in this book is based on the strength of the 100,000 ninja coalition during the Fourth War. To reasonably arrange so many people, ninjas from all walks of life must have a lot of original creations. (Including movie level) So, don't be surprised if you see some settings that conflict with the original work, it is not a bug, just think of it as a parallel time and space (●°u°●)​​​​​​​​​​​​ (90% of the content respects the settings of the original work and will not conflict a lot) Especially in terms of the timeline (the timeline of the original work is very messy), I worked very hard to arrange their reasonable time. For all the original characters appearing in this book, I will not reduce their combat power in any way, and will even greatly increase their strength to make their strength more in line with the setting of that identity. For example, the third generation of wind, Hanzo, the third generation of water, each jinchuriki, etc. Will not be as weak as the original.