Naruto: The Ninja Burned to Death by Fire Release

This is a promising start, showing the potential of a master from the very beginning. It's the kind of book where you'll remember a bunch of characters within ten chapters. I generally struggle with immersion in stories outside the Land of Fire, but this Sand Village grabs my attention right from the start.

This book overemphasizes Konoha too much... Yes, Hiruzen Sarutobi takes the initiative to attack, Danzo avoids internal strife, and I feel like Konoha has lost its essence... In the original story, no matter how dire Konoha's situation was, even when the Sand Village reached Kikyo Mountain and the Iwa Village attacked, Hiruzen remained firmly in Konoha, letting Minato lead a small team led by…

The opening premise is too contradictory, even including a clone of Itachi, just to give the protagonist a reason to kneel down and beg for peace with the opposing faction after being assassinated twice. And they went there without any sense of reason, without even understanding their own situation. How much flesh would the family faction, which controls most of the village's interests, have to give to satisfy their appetite? At this point, defecting is better than being a dog. How frustrating!

It's tasteless to eat, but a pity to throw away. The protagonist is too much of a genius; he can use all kinds of ninjutsu with ease, his chakra is inexplicably vast, and he can repeatedly crush his opponents politically. Creating ninjutsu is also a piece of cake for him. Poor Minato Namikaze only managed to create the Rasengan his whole life, and Kakashi could only come up with the Chidori.

Seeing that the poison had taken effect during the Jonin Exams, he kept emphasizing the mentality of a strong person, knowing full well that the Cloud Ninja was laying a huge ambush, yet still insisting on charging forward. Is he trying to forge his own path to supremacy in the ninja world? It should be called inhumane.

The initial strategy was absolutely disgusting. The protagonist had already solved the problem by eliminating the enemy's physical body, yet not only did he not think about fighting back, he didn't even think about escaping. He was just gambling that the enemy wouldn't be so stupid as to leave an irreconcilable threat to finish him off...

So far, I've summarized the rules that master killers make their clans follow. They have to hand over control of the clan's finances and military, and forbid any form of enjoyment. They need all the clan's resources, yet they can't be given significant power. They can't enjoy luxury, but they must also be forced to train diligently. What the hell would any idiot do?

It's rare to see a novel that isn't set in Konoha, and it starts very early in the story, filling in the gaps in the Second and Third Shinobi World Wars. Moreover, it's not just a story about one person's growth. Please keep up the good work and continue writing in a style different from typical Naruto fanfiction.

They withdrew; their character was too stupid. They were about to kill their entire family, and they still went to lick their boots. Reforms would only offend a lot of people, using them as pawns. They should have just faked their death and gone to file a complaint. Couldn't they have dragged a third party into it? Why gamble their lives on other people's kindness?

I haven't read much yet, just a few chapters. It's Chinese New Year, so I'm always busy drinking. I'm not reading fast, it's been sporadic. Plus, there are issues with the settings that need commenting. There are quite a few problems in just six chapters.