Pirate: This Swordsman Is Too Meaty, Right?

The most disgusting operation in fan fiction is to be able to stop but not kill, to save or not, and to make some inexplicable reasons for the original matryoshka doll.

I don't know how the author deals with Wano Country. In fact, everyone's perception of Wano Country is not very friendly. From the current point of view, the protagonist should be a person with gravity fruit ability. How to write the plot of that smile? Now One Piece is also a fatalistic thing. Devil Fruit has a will, which appeared when Momonosuke ate a replica Devil Fruit and gave him power. There are also female protagonists. Nowadays, many fandoms pursue harems for the sake of harems. In fact, it is not reasonable at all, and it is disgusting in my opinion. The protagonist can be a good guy or a bad guy, but he can't be disgusting. Try to create within the original framework and don't add any messy settings. The devil fruit is already a dead end, and the three-color domineering power is not small. There aren't any good Pirates fandoms nowadays, most of them are a mess and can't be updated at all.

I hope you won't help trash Oden and Momonosuke

I've read seven or eight chapters of this book, and overall it's pretty good. However, some plots are a bit awkward, too forced, and a bit overwhelming. For example, the protagonist told Leopard Goro and the others about the black charcoal snake. The reaction of Hao Goro and the others... Smacked of the urban dragon king. This paragraph is written in such a strong tone that it feels awkward to watch. I feel like I can handle it better, and I am a hero after all. This way of dealing with things is too strong of a dragon king. The second point is the part where several of Oden's retainers came to the door. Asura Boy and several others finished using their skills. Then, the guys from Leo Goro and others were chattering away, saying that the protagonist was dead or something like that, a bunch of weird things. It smells like an urban dragon king and a fantasy king. Isn't that what Urban Dragon King is like? The villain hits the protagonist with one blow, and then smokes. Behind him, there are a bunch of brainless villains yelling, stepping on each other, and barking. "Mr. Zhao is awesome" "He is already dead" "What a bunch of mindless swear words" "Passenger A, can you take this blow? This person must be dead, Mr. Zhao is awesome" Others are not big problems. Just these two plots are like watching Urban Dragon King. It's pretty disgusting to watch. Bao Goro, a generation of underworld boss and a generation of heroes. If your personality, behavior, and speech were like these two, how could you be respected by so many people? You have completely turned the character of Hao Goro into a marginal figure with no brains and no vision. A strong flavor of the little Yakuza, the urban dragon king. A big boss who knows how to use high-level weapons and colors, he will always have a little bit of knowledge and knowledge. He can just say that others are dead. A complete urban dragon king writing style. I suggest that you change these two paragraphs, especially the second point, it is too disgusting and the smell is too strong. Pirates is originally a heroic and passionate book. It's really disgusting to write this kind of urban dragon king. The book is good, but some details are too stinky. Change it. It's not that there's something wrong with your plot, it's just that the way you narrated and described that plot is so stinky. I don't quite understand how you wrote it and then added a few paragraphs about the Urban Dragon King. I believe you when you said that when you wrote these two plots, your body was taken away by the Dragon King. It's so disgusting. The feeling of tearing between the front and back writing is too strong. I will collect it first and observe it. If you write like this later, then you and I probably have no fate.

It looked okay. Based on the character's character, I thought he was decisive in killing. However, in Wano Country, he had a ridiculous operation and none of the main characters were killed.

The writing was completely broken. The character introductions in the early stage are completely irrelevant to the current plot. They actually want to overthrow the Tianlong people for the sake of fairness and the common people 🙄

The framework is a bit scattered and it feels like there is no theme.

I think the protagonist should let Oden come back to commit suicide. After the idiot died, his son was sent twenty years later. Then these twenty years are a window period. In these twenty years, the protagonist is the orthodox successor of Wano Country, and the adopted son also has the right to inherit. As long as Kaido and Orochi are defeated, the country of Wano can easily obtain it, and no one in the country of Wano can nominally oppose the protagonist's succession to the position of general. It would be really stupid to start killing the big snake directly. Kaido and Orochi are simply paving the way for the protagonist. The protagonist only needs to wander around for a few years, come back and defeat Kaido and Orochi, and Wano will be in hand. Kaido and Orochi are simply good people, and it would be even better if Kaido and Orochi kill a few Oden diehards. As long as he ascends to the position of general, Momonosuke will come back many years later. With the political power and public opinion in hand, Momonosuke will come back. If he is said to be a fake, he is a fake, and he is also a fake.

Cut ╮（╯＿╰）╭I thought it was Zaraki Kenpachi's kind of meat where I cut you and you cut me.

Bb Lai Lai, can you hurry up, kill if you want, and deliberately protect the country of Wano when you have no feelings for it? Why don't you just ignore it and don't ask? And when will such a watery protagonist be able to go to sea?

If you are a novice, your writing is okay. If you are a writer above level 5, write these contents. That's simply zz.

It's not that good, mainly because the protagonist fights and is lousy. Forget it, I'll give you a recommendation vote. Come on, author, I'm leaving.

Stussy is Ba Jin's clone, hahahaha, that's outrageous

I don't know what I wrote in the early stage, and there is no main line.

The book is okay, but the introduction is hard to describe in one sentence. I wouldn't click on it if I were looking for pirate articles.

I saw more than 50 pictures of pigs running around and getting into fights with anyone they met. It must be for a purpose, but I didn't see what he did! Anyway, looking at one picture after another, I feel that they are not coherent at all.

Speaking of which, how does the author deal with Wano Country? The Wano Country chapter is a bit disgusting. My personal suggestion is to destroy Wano Country and leave no one alive, or just ignore it in the future and don't write about Wano Country.

The World Government and Navy have been severely suppressed. Based on this performance, the two Yonko Regiments are evenly matched with the World Government➕Navy. With the addition of another imperial group, the world government will be destroyed in only a short time. Maybe the author doesn't think so, but that's pretty much what you wrote.

This must be written by a Japanese person who traveled to the past to be a son to a Japanese person! This author is so weird🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭

It's such a pity. The answer in the current version is the overlord-colored Haki. You can't watch the devil fruit power after you have mastered the Haki. The plot is a bit scattered and fragmented. I can't understand what it's about.