I'll Add Some Practice in the Real World

After reading 20 chapters in one go, I felt that the most satisfying part was the detailed description of some ordinary and trivial life, which can make people calm down. Chapter 9 begins with the points about spiritual practice and those who are not married, both of which touch on the two things that modern young people least want to face - the workplace and marriage. Only through spiritual practice can we stay away from these two things. The male protagonist has no father or mother and no worries. This is the greatest freedom.

It's hard for me to do things for you when things get worse in one day. It took about an hour to read the latest chapter and make some suggestions. 1: In the world created by the author, it has been clearly stated that traditional martial arts are in a weak position and there are fewer and fewer successors. In the eyes of ordinary people, practicing martial arts is just about strengthening the body. As the protagonist upgrades, the people he meets become more and more awesome. I hope there won't be a situation where dark energy is everywhere, and the bright energy is not as good as a dog, but only by using the strength to tremble. In the general context, traditional martial arts is a declining trend, so masters must be rare. Even if the protagonist's level is high, it should be similar to the five masters in Jin Yong's novels. There are only a few of the same level. Just listen to their names. In many cases, they are not seen once for several years. 2: Is the current upgrade speed of the protagonist a little too fast? Although the author should have plans later, but for now, it depends entirely on rapid upgrades to catch readers. If the plot content does not rise and fall, there is still a high possibility that the worldview will collapse later. 3: The protagonist now feels a bit like a puppet to me. He just learns a martial arts and practices it non-stop, and then repeats the process. Since the protagonist wants to continue on this path, he has not tried to understand in depth the Taoism, Buddhist culture, Taoism and so on in the article. Is it possible that the protagonist has to practice other people's teachings all his life, and how can he create without absorbing it? Holding a documentary and obsessing over it all day long makes people speechless. 4: There are also some problems with the latest chapters. I found a few keywords. Rich man, bodyguard, foreign country, sect, inheritance, mortal world, vulgarity, little junior sister. Having concluded this, I believe that many brothers can see the problem, and I sincerely hope that there won't be those clichéd plots that I imagined, embarrassing people and leaving people speechless. Except for the above points, it is generally good. I hope the author will write better and better.

It's useless, not worth spending money to watch anymore.

Shen Nong is here, it is bland and the routines are all bad. I thought that such a strong recommendation must be good to watch, but the result is unsatisfactory. There are no major flaws and a lot of minor flaws. Summary: Not worthy of the results.

I have read all the existing chapters. The protagonist's system is more like a display panel for human body data and proficiency. The advantage over other warriors is Ming himself. At this stage, his power is in the low-level martial arts category. His skills can reach medium martial arts, which may be low-level cultivation. His heart is not clear. After all, the vast Chinese collection has advantages that no one else can match in any cultivation world. Now I am about to explore a different world, I hope the author can stay steady

The rest of the plot is good, and there aren't many flaws. At least I'm not very picky, and it's more in line with my taste. But! First, every time you write "just like us ordinary people," can you remove "us"? This is very dramatic. I have to take on the role of the protagonist, not you, the "we". Whose perspective are you writing about? This kind of cut off half of the look and feel, and the frequency of it is not low, it happens every now and then. Secondly, can the status description of the attribute panel remove the word "player"? Are you writing a real-life practice article or an online game practice article? If it is used as a foreshadowing, you should at least provide more foreshadowing. Otherwise, the meaning of your appearance of this player will be unclear and the sense of violation will be high. Every time I see these two pieces, I really feel like I live in Bengbu.

Read it, don't like it, similar to how it was written ten years ago

Speed ​​update, can you transform into a burst beast? ! ?

A little humble opinion, please correct me. There are too many psychological descriptions, and a lot of descriptions of surprise and joy. It gave me the feeling that the protagonist was too out of touch, not stable enough, and did not look like a social animal in his twenties. On the contrary, I feel like I am eighteen or nineteen years old and have not yet joined the society. The protagonist hits a sandbag and is surprised that his description is unreasonable. After all, the protagonist usually only has one or two hundred kilograms of dumbbells, so what does a mere three hundred kilograms of sandbag count? I took a quick look at it and didn't read it carefully. Please tell me if I have any mistakes or omissions.

Isn't this an article from many years ago, where the protagonist has golden clairvoyance eyes and other adventures in urban attire🍺. The protagonist is mediocre, encounters adventures, flies to save people, and heals people with a single injection. Big bosses and experts from all walks of life say it's impossible when they see the surveillance. Then the villain with reduced intelligence comes to the door. All kinds of women are curious and obsessed with the protagonist. Then the goddess licks the dog again and is defeated by the protagonist. It would be interesting to see if there is some spiritual energy to revive and establish a sect.

This book is very interesting in terms of the protagonist's spiritual practice, but it is not pretentious enough and does not have enough flavor to show the saint in front of people.

I've finished reading. Are there any similar books?

Discussion on the quality and pace of updates The author updates quickly enough, but the specific main plot line is a bit vague, and the force value rises too fast, and there is almost no relevant plot advancement. Unless the author plans to practice to the point where he can blow up a tank with one punch and then be pushed away by the plot, then the plot will collapse. Nowadays, urban martial arts are very difficult. The type of writing, it is rare to encounter a novel with good writing and novel setting that does not follow the trend. I hope the author will give more consideration to this aspect and not overdraw his potential just for the sake of temporary popularity. Chapter updates recommend a chapter of 3000-5000 words, updated twice a day. Advance the plot and stop practicing ❤️

There are too many chronicles, I have read 5 chapters, and it is still mediocre. What I write most about is country life

Full ordered, a well-written novel😍

Remember the martyrs and never forget the national humiliation.

Personally, I feel that the protagonist is so awesome now, so stop engaging in plots where the family pretends to be a slap in the face. If this is a low-martial world, no one should be able to beat the protagonist. Since the author has put it in the science fiction category, wouldn't it be better to write about the protagonist physically traveling across the universe to find aliens? The pattern needs to be opened up.

Has the author ever thought about why we read this book? The characteristic of this book is its unique style of real-world realism. If it is a fantasy style, to be honest, the starting point is much better than this. There are also a bunch of unrealistic data in the early stage that are not mentioned by anyone, but the author obviously has no intention of changing them. The work is supposed to originate from reality and be detached from reality, but the protagonist gives me the feeling that he is very stereotyped, without his own three-dimensional sense, very empty and empty. It is said that he is a warrior but not as ruthless as a warrior, he is said to be a Taoist but not as mysterious as a Taoist, and he is said to be an ordinary person but has no dreams and pursuits. To sum up, I don't understand what the protagonist is thinking. The psychological changes in each stage are very strange. He keeps talking about the world of mortals. What is the world of mortals? Now it is written as a game of life. It is said to be the mortal world, but in fact it is out of the dust. It seems to have intersection with everyone, but it is like a passer-by. This is what it means to pass through thousands of flowers. A strong person is not only strong in strength, but also in structure. This cannot be seen from the protagonist at all. It can be said that he is invincible in the world, but he has done nothing of his own and is always limited to the shortcomings of his parents. From a worldly perspective, such a strong man is no different from a clay doll. The author didn't want to change, so he introduced interstellar, but this changed the flavor, just like tea and milk tea. It seems that they just have extra milk, but in fact they are two completely different things. There is a long way to go in the rivers and lakes, but we are destined to meet again.

I have been following this book from beginning to end, and the actual feeling is really uncomfortable. I especially like that the protagonist was in his hometown at that time, exercising himself every day, counting the increasing attributes every day, living a simple and unpretentious life. He was happy, and so was I. But once the protagonist began to understand Nalaoshizi's state of mind, and even later became an immortal and a saint, I no longer felt the protagonist's personal characteristics. There's no reason why I'm so stupid. I just feel like the author has been embarrassing himself and putting all kinds of auras on the protagonist, and I can't see him anymore. Maybe what I like is just a practitioner with an ordinary mind, the kind of person who has joy, anger, sorrow, and even greed, anger, stupidity, love and hate. Immortal? Holy? What is that? That's not who I want to see. That's all, I don't want to pursue this book anymore. It's inappropriate. No matter how much I liked it before, I don't want to get entangled with it.

First of all, I would like to thank the author for writing so many chapters. Secondly, so many chapters did not make me feel comfortable reading, which is a bit regretful. Finally, I hope the author will continue to work hard and produce excellent works every day!

Consider becoming a video blogger and post the practice process and playing with animals online. If you write it well, it will be a great point. You can even popularize Kung Fu and teach people how to practice it. Write in a brighter light and don't write about the struggles between aristocratic families and sects.

Is there any similar book about practicing martial arts in modern times but not showing off?

Is the protagonist's intelligence increased so much in vain? Even if you can forget about the steering wheel, your brain is radiating Alzheimer's disease, right? There are so many ways to promote the plot, but this kind of intellectual plot is the only one to promote.

It's been a long time since I've seen one last this long.

It was interesting to read it in one sitting in the afternoon. It was very relaxing. Good luck, author.

Huang Ting interior view of the five internal organs and six internal organs tonifying and purging diagram/He/Yi Jin Jing

The author has seen this state many times. As long as people take a break from doing things, their laziness habits will become bigger. It is difficult to pick it up in one go. The spirit is gone. Once, there will be countless breaks, and in the end, it will go directly to the palace. Use the post as evidence and wait for the author to slap you in the face.

It's so nonsense. The rare real people in the past are all in the realm of becoming Buddhas and ancestors. It's just two or three people in the world. If you just parachute a female golden elixir in her twenties, I think the protagonist is cheating.

To be honest, this first chapter almost put me off. The protagonist has a problem with his IQ. The existence of the panel itself is a kind of transcendence. The protagonist somehow believes that transcendence does not exist in the real world and feels that the panel is useless. It has only been three days since I got the panel, and the protagonist's interest has been greatly reduced because there has been no change. How do you want to change in three days? Do you want to change the world? This kind of idiotic and pretentious protagonist makes people less interested in watching it.

What have you been doing since you came back from the moon? ? ? Why didn't you just throw something as important as a bronze disc to the United States without taking it, and then swim to Japan? Why not just fly back to China? Why don't you go to the government after you return to your country? ? ?