Traveling the Myriad Worlds, Playing Until I Lose Contact

A breast-jiggling apocalypse, huh? I once had an idea for an alchemical apocalypse based on breast jiggling: using the entire planet as a circle, I'd use magma to outline a Philosopher's Stone transmutation circle in a 3D style, then gather all the living humans in the planet into a central safe zone... And go all out!

When will they start creating my wife? I only came here because of the synopsis, and after reading for so long, I finally found out that the character who created my wife is just a supporting teacher! I want to see how they create their own wife!

Brother, you've been an author for years, but you've never really made it big. I think we need to seriously think about why. As for the writing style, it's not great, but it's not bad either. It's been like this for a long time, and I can accept it. In terms of content, I feel it lacks planning, or rather, the planning is unreasonable.

I think the protagonist is wasting his time and life. Instead of focusing on quickly becoming stronger and ensuring his own survival, why bother with so many fancy side professions? In the first few chapters, he's already faced life-threatening situations twice. Hasn't he learned his lesson? The biggest advantage of a transmigrator is the ability to travel between worlds.

Sigh, the synopsis is a bait and switch. I thought it would be a completely new protagonist who would create his own wives like in the synopsis, but after finishing the Mechanical World, he suddenly starts collecting women everywhere in Apocalypse. I'm not against the protagonist collecting women, but collecting women and collecting women randomly are completely different.

The character development is weak; in the "Machine-Doll" chapter, it's obvious the protagonist has time-traveled multiple times. The dialogue feels like that of a primary school student; they speak without thinking.

I remember a novel called *Kikakudo World* where the puppets were: Kabuto - Kabuto Basic Form - Kabuto Super Transformation Form - Kabuto Burst Form - Kabuto Final Form, I think. Author, open your imagination!

The worlds of the Machine World and Apocalypse are too disconnected. Did the author simply cut off the first world, Machine World, because he thought it was too unpopular, and want to attract people by having the world of Apocalypse promote female characters?

The protagonist speaks without thinking, and starting with talking about feelings is far too frivolous; he relies entirely on sweet talk to build rapport. The dialogue was so awkward it was off-putting, but the rest was alright.

Lei Zhenke was a member of the Japanese military at that time. If the author doesn't want to be criticized, he'd better think carefully before writing.