People Are in the Heavens, Playing Until They Lose Contact

Brother, you are also an old author. You have been tepid for so many years. I think we need to think about the reasons. The essay pen is not good, but it is not bad. This has been the style for a long time. Anyway, I can accept it. In terms of content, I feel that there is a lack of planning, or the planning is unreasonable. Many times, some completely unnecessary plots are included, and even skipped without affecting subsequent reading, it feels a bit like a hodgepodge. It's just like the Ten Demon book. It's too awkward. The protagonist himself is the enemy of Buddha. If the world traveled through is a martial arts, fairy, fantasy and prehistoric world, with a similar background view, it feels very smooth. If you don't want to write about it, you can write about anime, Xingue, Devil High School, Hakoba, you can even write about The Prince of Tennis, where he is a monk playing tennis like Nanjiro. As a result, you hit the East with a hammer, hit the West with a hammer, Death, Naruto, Academy City, followed by Heaven and Dragon Slayer, all in a mess. It can be seen that the eldest brother really wanted to write something from his heart, and he changed a lot from the original work, which is good. Many authors will only follow the original work and don't know how to write it themselves, and then call it a butterfly effect in order not to change the future. Big brother is very good at this, it proves that big brother is creative, but it is difficult to achieve detailed layout in each world in fast travel, but I still hope that big brother can work hard. In fact, I can see that Brother is still very thoughtful, but now it is limited. One is the amount of viewing. This is understandable. The quality of animation nowadays is indeed average, and few can be called high-quality. But I can't watch it, Brother, you can't watch it. If you want to write a high-end game in the second dimension, Yue and Hakoba are both in the background. You can't go to Academy City to develop a super power, and then go to Prince of Tennis to show off your power, and finally find a daily fan to become a god, right? The other issue is the overall planning issue, which I won't go into detail. Even if it's just to make more money, don't show off, improve yourself and surpass yourself, don't just write books, read more, read other people's books, it's okay to update a little slower, let's improve the quality.

Breast shaking apocalypse? I once had an idea of ​​alchemy and breast-shaking apocalypse, which is to use the entire planet as a circle, use magma to outline the Philosopher's Stone in a three-dimensional painting, and then gather the living domestic humans into a central point safe zone... Let's make a big one

When did you start making a wife? I just came here because of the introduction. After watching it for a long time, the person who finally made a human body turned out to be a supporting role teacher~ I want to watch making a wife~

I think the protagonist is just wasting his time and life. If he doesn't find a way to quickly become stronger and protect his own life, why does he have so many fancy sub-jobs? After reading the first few chapters, he encountered life-threatening situations twice. Haven't you learned any lessons? The greatest advantage of a time traveler is the ability to travel across the world. There are many ways to become stronger in other worlds, so what should you do if you cling to the Arad continent system? If you have this time, you can quickly become stronger by specializing in one item, raise your level a little more, and if you want potions and equipment, find a way to make money to buy them. It's not like Arad doesn't sell them. If you want dolls like Ye Ye, can't you go to Hualiuzhai? Doesn't she have two more there? Find a way to trade with her or conquer her. She can travel across the world, so why can't she be more flexible? You have to do everything yourself, and the protagonist is not an all-around genius. If you want something, just collect more talents in this field. If you have this time, it is better to become stronger early and make more money. That means you will get everything you want! Rather than like now, I don't know when I will die!

Alas, the introduction is misleading, thinking that it is a brand new protagonist who makes his own wife just like the introduction, but after finishing the world of cleverness and apocalypse, he is recruiting women from all over the place. I am not opposed to the protagonist accepting women, but accepting women is completely different from recruiting random women. Kimberly can also help the protagonist grow up and walk with the protagonist, but apart from Seiko who can barely be a thug, other women in the Apocalypse are a hindrance. When I think about the protagonist having to become a big boss before he can return to the Book of Revelation to pick up women, I can almost predict that these women will only become the vases whose names are mentioned once or twice in the showcase of the protagonist's woman in the future. The Book of Revelation is a complete waste of time, and I, Lelouch, don't even want to open it. In the end, this protagonist is just another Lance in the author's works, just the same frame soul with a different name. It's a pity, what a pity.

The character creation is too hip, and the chapter about the clever girl shows that the protagonist has traveled through time several times. The conversation feels like that of a primary school student. Talking louder than thinking

I remember there is a novel about the world of jihadi. His dolls are: Kabuda - Kabuto basic form - Kabuta super transformation form - Kabuto explosive armor form - Kabuto's final form. It seems that the author can open up your imagination.

The world of cleverness and the world of Apocalypse are too separate. The author simply cut out the first world of cleverness because it was unpopular. Does he want to rely on a world like Apocalypse to attract women? In terms of cleverness, although some plots were not handled well, such as wanting to study divine cleverness when he first entered the academy, and Ye Ye, who just rushed to the door of Lei Zhen's dormitory and said that he wanted to study him as soon as he met the original protagonist, it was a minor problem that was innocuous, and the main plot still revolved around the puppet. When we got to Apocalypse, we immediately started following the old zombie writing routine. All the men were written to death, and the females were promoted in an assembly line manner. The only thing related to the dolls was self-taught knowledge of "chips" and "programming" in the world of Apocalypse. . It was quite sudden. Coming to a low-tech apocalypse like Apocalypse, it takes one year to prepare. The protagonist can also learn steel alchemy, DNF sharpshooter inheritance, and clever magic. Just learn the chip programming of the low-tech world. Arad is not without relevant knowledge. The mechanic route has an AI assistant. And it was simply messed up later, adding settings to the decomposition machine to decompose the knowledge crystals of the dead. Xueba people set up half of it and then gave up.

The protagonist is too frivolous to talk about feelings, and the relationship relies solely on love words; The dialogue is so awkward that it makes me quit, but other parts are okay.

Lei Zhen was a member of the Japanese military at that time. The author didn't want to be criticized, so it was best to write carefully.

At the beginning, I tried to persuade them to quit, and rushed up to lick others like a dog. Others were not willing to insist on licking others, and I was still angry. Why didn't I appreciate it if I licked them?

If I keep writing like this, I feel like the author is going to lose touch... I don't follow the popularity and I don't include pictures. The plot of Griffin is even less popular. I hold it up high and put it down gently, and I have inked several pictures. Now I can't catch up with the devil... First of all, you don't have a basic reader in the main world, and secondly, crossing dimensions doesn't make people happy. The further you look at it, the more you feel that there is no main plot, it's just one person, getting stronger, for what? Become stronger, make a stronger doll, why? Be patient... This kind of thing called the main line is difficult to support your process context... -_-

The protagonist is too naive, licks dogs, is nosy, talks and acts out of step, and has no common sense. The first part is about abuse, and then he gets involved with two women for no reason, and is made difficult for her. There is no emotional drama, and the introduction talks about making a wife, and she is created, but there is no emotional drama.

The core selling point of this book is the dolls, but the author didn't even check the basic settings of Jiji Girl, saying that the Jiji in it has no intelligence. Even if they are not taboo dolls, they are intelligent, with varying degrees of intelligence Magic circuit: A device necessary for the movement of the automatic doll, equivalent to the status of the heart. Almost all automatic dolls are equipped with a basic circuit called "Eve's Heart" that allows the doll to have possession, self-recovery, self-awareness, wisdom, and biological reality. In addition, it will also be equipped with other magic circuits to perform various functions.

Personally, I think there is no problem in choosing the DNF career. But it's weird to use a level template. In fact, it's better not to use a game level template. It's better to write according to the background of each profession. The author can go and find out. The professional background of dnf is very full. It can't be explained by just setting a game level. You set the game level. Whether the skill tree is locked or not? Lock the skill tree. That's not fun. Let's take the gunman as an example. Wang Daqiang, you must first be proficient in heavy weapons (heavy firepower proficiency) and then you can be proficient in playing big toys. From Gatling to Big Ivan (quantum bomb) and then awakening. The prerequisite is that satellites are required. From proficiency to making a dragon, this is the meaning of the profession In reality, the level is meaningless Then it is the mechanic. The man of science and technology. From robots to poisonous cannons From the strong wind to the time march. According to the setting, it is all hand rubbing. (To be honest, the other professions are the strongest, but the real cheater is the mechanic) I think it is not trivial to be able to rub the Chrono Legion and rub a satellite? The same principle applies to ammunition. Logistics can only be achieved if there is a heavy industry chain As for roaming, it's okay not to mention it. As the saying goes, if you are poor, you will have tactics and if you are rich, you will have fire coverage. Robots, Gundams, Big Ivan, which one is not more fun than gun fighting? Maybe the author doesn't understand what a plug-in is

The clever girl is beautiful and I like this world. If the protagonist takes the ingenious route, he can also go to the Rose Maiden, the Magic Shell, Danterian's bookshelf and some robot worlds. I feel that the combination of magic dolls and robotics technology is also very cool. I'm writing about a world that I haven't written about before.

I came here for the introduction, but it turns out that the campus mode recording is really a mess. What's the point of accepting so many women? You can play with them and just take them over in one stroke.

There's something wrong with your setting. You have to learn every time you go to a world, and you can't do anything else at all. There's nothing to see in this.

What Mo You wrote is true. He has the ability to mass-produce nuclear bombs and bury nuclear bombs in Japan. With this ability, he can declare himself a top 6. He also needs to go to the negotiation table and blow up most of the military bases first, then ask for information and refuse to bomb them one by one. At the same time, he can also contact China, the United States and Russia, and ask for some information at the expense of restricting Japan's military and share the results. If China, Russia and Japan have a feud, they will probably agree that the United States is its own dog and needs to be beaten if it disobeys.

Well written! Increase the intensity! Suppress the protagonist with all your strength! It's better to make the protagonist a slave and a puppet in front of you! In the technique chapter, increase the intensity of kneeling and licking!

In fact, I want to know why the protagonist doesn't save resources and then let the woman in the Apocalypse improve her body. Isn't it better than transforming her own cognition? There are at least two or three women in Apocalypse who really like the protagonist.

When I saw the chapter about Magic High School in the catalog, I added it to the bookshelf. Personally, I am not interested in the original plot of Magic High School. After all, it is an anti-× hero, but I am very interested in the magic setting described in the original text. I really like this kind of literature that uses science to explain magic, such as cultivating immortality through technology. There are relatively few stories about magic colleges in manga. Do you have any recommendations? 🥺

This is another free-spirited work by the author.

If the sharpshooter doesn't engage in Gaibojia and a large organizational background, isn't he just a higher-level gangster? It's okay to overdo it in the early stage. I'm afraid I'm losing my mind if I keep doing this.

This book is quite interesting when it comes to cleverness, but the operation of Academy Apocalypse really blinded me. It mainly focuses on the contrast between before and after. It is highly poisonous, so be careful when entering.

Why is there always someone posting here?

Two monthly passes can support me

Why is this book finished? I'm going to die. When will the new book be released? Is the new book going to be Ultraman or Kamen Rider?

I feel more like I'm reading an expository essay than a novel

Have you changed jobs? Have you always been a sharpshooter? If yes, then 886