Reborn as a Priest in Japan

​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​ The protagonist takes the initiative to help others and then regrets it, and then desperately blackmails others. Most people in society may not take the initiative to help others, but! In my nearly 30 years of life, I have never seen anyone who threatens others after taking the initiative to help others! !        ，，c，，c It is said that before he was reborn, he was an uncle of about the same age or already middle-aged, but looking at the way he does things now, he looks like a junior high school student. It feels like all the characters appear just to advance the plot, rather than to give readers a better reading experience. To be honest, there are many novels written by Reborn RB, but this one is the weirdest one I have ever read 😅😅

I feel like this novel is a huge novel and I have no desire to read it.

The writing is pretty good, but the protagonist is a Japanese priest and onmyoji, which is awkward.

I feel like it's not as good as the beginning of Vision, which was at least pure enough. It is directly about the protagonist trying to find a way to engage in school bullying. Although the protagonist is quite aggrieved, at least his methods are tough and decisive enough to make him feel good. This was a good point at the beginning that was supposed to be about showing off in front of people, but you turned it into a bad point. It would have been a good point to slap those gangsters in the face or decisively clear up the relationship with the girl and try to reverse the routine, but in the end, it was really uncomfortable to bargain and pay for it. Next, it is better to give out benefits than not to give them at all. It's too *sexy to find a passerby to go whore after you've already mixed up in the two-dimensional world. 😅What do you think? By the way, the results of this book are better than Peak Vision. I don't know if there are too many people at the starting point or because your title attracted people. I sincerely suggest that if you write a book, don't write about the relationship between men and women. Learn to go away and treat beautiful people as tools. Treat them equally with male passers-by and use them as cannon fodder. I quite like the narrative, but I was poisoned by your male-female interaction.

The more I write, the worse it gets. I can't tell what I want to write. I'm just rambling a little bit here and there, just to make up the word count?

I feel like the author's protagonist lacks charm. It seems that the protagonist of every book has the same character At first he was a normal boy with a little kindness Then he gradually grew into a cool harem boy My first reaction after seeing Megumi Kato becoming the girlfriend of the male protagonist was actually a pity. It's a pity that such a good girl meets such a protagonist who is destined to be a harem man. Secondly, the author's protagonist's emotions cannot infect readers. When I read it, I felt very strange, but I couldn't explain what was going on. I spent some time summarizing and found this problem. The author's protagonist does not blush when he is shy He does not feel sad because of anything When he is in love, he is too happy and peaceful, just like an old married couple When he rescues people, he does not say how much the protagonist dislikes this kind of behavior, so he rescues people. The protagonist's values ​​are not written out To sum up, the emotional description is not strong enough It always feels like the protagonist doesn't care about anything Looking back, the only impressions of the protagonist are laughing, helpless smiles, and sneers It's gone... These problems also appear in every protagonist of the author.

There are a lot of characters in the first few chapters, all relying on new people to promote the plot, it's too tiring

After reading the first few chapters, I feel a bit dissuaded. Can anyone tell me what happens next?

The background becomes a Japanese urban novel, there is no daily life, only love comes to you.

They are all enhanced, so terrifying~

The few paragraphs of Yuka Nagao made me feel awkward. They were unpleasant to listen to. The emotional descriptions looked like they were written by an elementary school student. They were not consistent with the writing style and felt a bit childish. Although other things feel good, it is considered a masterpiece

Is it my imagination? The writing feels a bit verbose. The description is too tone-based, like describing a shrine. Just use a few metaphors + description of the environment and then briefly explain the history. Rather than "First of all, as for the reason, of course", it feels like writing an expository essay. There are also overall explanations in the majority, and the daily feelings are more reflected in the dialogue and character psychology.

This book is very good, full of life and fantasy, worth reading.

The protagonist can't grasp the key points and can't distinguish the priorities. It's clear that the situation in Japan is not good and the surroundings are not peaceful, but he doesn't want to prioritize improving his strength (taking leave to go abroad to absorb soil to upgrade the pot, etc.), Stupidly staying in school, solving all kinds of trivial things, and participating in campus activities. Do you really have to go to class even if the world is ending? Or should you play Gwent first, no matter how dangerous it is?

There are very few things about priests. It just depends on you flirting with girls every day. There is no story or plot.

Qin Shihuang's character and politics are both Zhao Zheng and his surname is not Qin... Qin Shihuang's name is Qin Shihuang. This is just a nickname, which is the first emperor of Qin. If the protagonist is a descendant of Qin Shihuang, it would make sense if you don't say Ying, but Zhao. There is no one with the surname Qin... I am not a troll, just to popularize science.

Defeated in less than ten chapters. Helped people pay back money after knowing each other for only a few hours. What a holy mother you are.

I don't understand. Since the protagonist says he is not a licker, why does he help Saya pay back the money? It's totally okay to stay out of it. Okay, I admit that I am indifferent, those trolls should not troll me at will, I am afraid

As a reminder from the front row, this protagonist is a guy who wants to be a cousin but also wants to set up memorials, or a guy who wants to be a good man but is not firm; a guy who wants to meddle in his own business and blame others. It's better to just be an "upright scumbag" and pass the test

Why can so many original male protagonists in Japanese comics have a harem, but when it is the author's turn to write a fan novel, the protagonist is not allowed to have a harem? Some of you don't criticize the harem men in the original anime, but you only dare to oppose the protagonist's harem in fan novels. You are impotent and want others to accompany you to read the monk novel. I think you are deliberately disturbing the author's thinking! I support the author in writing harem stories٩( 'ω' )و

I don't want to be negative, but I haven't survived five chapters. Please ask the next Shennong to test the poison.

The author is good at writing harem plots. Monsters without harem plots have no souls. People come to read them because you write harem novels. The harem reader group is your relatively fixed base. Authors should not be misled by some trolls. This will cause the loss of their base readers and the novel will be sold out.

When I saw Chapter 31, the protagonist first helped a woman he had met twice to pay off a 100,000 loan shark, and then threatened to take a luo photo when the woman owed the protagonist a lot of money and refused to repay it? ? What's the difference between this and the underworld? Oh, and I also helped a loan shark gangster by purifying the dirty things on his body. Can anyone tell me if this girl's plot is related to the main plot, or is she just for free chapters?

In the first seven chapters, the story about the guy who borrowed money from underworld was found was really poorly written. Whether the protagonist helped or not, the outcome was not good. Please write less of this kind of plot. I will continue to read later. If you write well, I will praise you. If you write well, I will continue to criticize you.

Going to Japan without a harem is like going to Japan in vain. .

In the dog-licking novel, after the appraisal is completed, the protagonist will only smile helplessly when facing the overbearing girl.

I really can't stand it. When the protagonist saw the female character earlier, his mind was filled with thoughts... Was he so horny? Then I helped pay for it after just a few minutes of knowing each other. I felt that it didn't matter if I helped the first time. After all, I could help if I could. But when I knew that the other person was bringing it upon himself and was involved, I was speechless.

I have a few suggestions to the author 1. Campus line. You can write about campus life. I think a big flaw or strange thing about this book is why it doesn't write about campus life. I did write some in the early stage, but it was limited to joining Aki's club and seducing senior sister Huihe. After that, the campus line was directly hidden. You can definitely set up a "gay friend" who is like a little brother next to the protagonist. In addition to studying, eating lunch together on the rooftop, and doing various interesting things. Although everyone is already familiar with this routine, it still works well when written. This book is set in an island country, and the audience basically likes two-dimensional culture. Wouldn't it be nice to write about campus. 2. Protagonist character. Some of the protagonist's actions are indeed a bit poisonous. . . Let's not mention the loan shark at the beginning. In Chapter 174, the protagonist asked Judy (the one who thought the protagonist had the Book of Greed) to fulfill her promise after asking for information. Hey, brother, this is the person who wanted your life before. I can understand you saying that you can't bring yourself to kill someone, but is it necessary to take risks for the enemy's promise? If you really want to go, you should go and investigate out of curiosity or because this thing is a potential threat to you. 3. Writing style. This is actually not easy to improve, but it is indeed a flaw. For example, the Qixi Festival and Hui's kiss would be better if some description of the environment is added. Obviously, we can describe more about visiting the convention. The stall owner's words like "you guys are a perfect match" or some actions make the distance between the two closer and more ambiguous. Coupled with the romantic atmosphere of fireworks, the feeling of substitution is very strong when written, but now it is a bit pale. Anyway, from my personal perspective, I don't feel any fluctuation in my heart when I see these. . . .

When most people in the world don't know that there are extraordinary beings, the protagonist has been wandering around. Is this because everyone is helping the protagonist cover up the ending? In order to set off the strength of the villain, the monster killed a large number of ordinary people in Tokyo, and then nothing happened after being killed by the protagonist. Is it normal? The NPC written by the author is so big-hearted that he actually didn't die.

My poison resistance is very low, and I really have a lot of poison points. The author replied to my previous comment and said that the protagonist is the original body of the adolescent and the soul that has traveled through time, so he has to be impulsive in adolescence, but the impulsiveness of adolescence cannot be said to be making troubles and flirting around, right? He flirts with girls every day, but the protagonist has a demon-refining pot and is still struggling. Mainly because he wants to have powerful monsters. However, Nuwa's demon-refining pot cannot support his normal cultivation and the so-called explosive consumption of shikigami. There is no explanation. Later, he saw a live broadcast of demon elimination on the TV station. Have you stepped on all the poisonous points? After taking it, my poison resistance is too low. I really don't know what the author is thinking when I use so many poisons!